Study— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答较为自然且内容相关，但存在语法错误和表达不够简洁的问题。建议注意动词形式的正确使用，如“go on study”应为“go on to study”，并避免冗余表达。

Ví dụ: I'm a senior law student at university. After graduation, I plan to pursue a master's degree in Hong Kong to gain international experience.

Gợi ý: 回答内容重复且有语法错误，如“After graduate”应为“After graduation”，且“plan plan”重复。建议简洁明了地回答问题，避免重复，并注意语法准确。

Ví dụ: I study law at Peking University, and after graduation, I plan to pursue a master's degree in Hong Kong for better educational opportunities and international exposure.

Gợi ý: 回答较好，内容具体且结构清晰，但部分表达略显冗长。建议适当使用连接词使表达更流畅，同时注意句子简洁。

Ví dụ: Yes, definitely. Peking University has many dedicated and passionate teachers, which allows us to gain extensive knowledge and develop various skills in a supportive environment.

Gợi ý: 回答内容具体且相关，但时态使用不当，如“hoped”应为“hope”，且“group discuss”应为“group discussions”。建议注意时态一致和词汇准确。

Ví dụ: I hope the library could have more space because it's always crowded. It's hard to find a seat, whether I want to study alone or have group discussions.

Gợi ý: 回答内容与问题不符，重复了之前关于图书馆空间的内容，且句子不完整。建议针对问题直接回答未来学习计划，避免跑题，并注意句子完整性。

Ví dụ: I plan to continue my studies by pursuing a master's degree in Hong Kong, focusing on international law to broaden my knowledge and career prospects.

× After graduation I plan to go on study and getting a master degree in Hong Kong.

✓ After graduation, I plan to go on studying and get a master's degree in Hong Kong.

动词短语“plan to”后应接动词原形或动名词形式。这里“go on”后应接动名词“studying”，而不是“study”。另外，“getting”应改为“get”，保持动词形式一致。

× After graduate, I plan plan to continue studying and pursue a master's degree in Hong Kong because I believe it offers excellent opportunity for the equal education and international exposure.

✓ After graduation, I plan to continue studying and pursue a master's degree in Hong Kong because I believe it offers excellent opportunities for equal education and international exposure.

“After graduate”应改为“After graduation”，因为“graduate”是动词，需用名词形式“graduation”表示“毕业后”。此外，“plan plan”重复，应去掉一个“plan”。

× because I believe it offers excellent opportunity for the equal education and international exposure.

✓ because I believe it offers excellent opportunities for equal education and international exposure.

“opportunity”应使用复数形式“opportunities”，因为这里指多个机会。

× Sometimes I need to study just by myself, and sometimes I need to have group discuss.

✓ Sometimes I need to study by myself, and sometimes I need to have group discussions.

“study just by myself”中“just”多余，应去掉；“have group discuss”中“discuss”应为名词“discussions”，表示“讨论”。

× Well, I hope the library to have more space because it always very crowded when I go there.

✓ Well, I hope the library has more space because it is always very crowded when I go there.

“hope”后应接完整句子，不能直接接不定式“to have”，应改为“the library has more space”。另外，“it always very crowded”缺少系动词“is”。

× Sometimes I need a quiet place to study alone and other times I require a suitable.

✓ Sometimes I need a quiet place to study alone, and other times I require a suitable place.

句子末尾缺少宾语“place”，导致句子结构不完整。