Study— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Tapai ko uttar thulo ra thik chha tara thap spashta ra sankshepma bolna saknuhunchha. English ma sentence haru lai thulo banayera nabolnu hos, 3-4 sentence bhitra prashna ko sidha uttar dinu parcha. Tapai le thap linking words jastai 'and', 'because' prayog garera uttar lai ramro banau saknuhunchha.

Ví dụ: I am currently a student. I have completed my +2 from Caskey Modernized Academy in Southeast Pokhara, majoring in Biology and Mathematics. I plan to study in the medical field in the future because I am passionate about healthcare.

Gợi ý: Tapai ko uttar ma filler words jastai 'uh', 'umm' dherai chhan, jasle English bolne prakriya lai natural dekhidaina. Tapai le sentence haru lai sankshep ra spashta banayera bolnu parcha. Linking words jastai 'because' ya 'so' prayog garera uttar lai logical banauna saknuhunchha.

Ví dụ: I am currently preparing for the CE examination at an institution called PPM. It offers many facilities that help us study and focus better because it provides a peaceful and calm environment.

Gợi ý: Tapai ko uttar ramro chha tara thap linking words jastai 'also', 'in addition' prayog garera uttar lai arko star ma lyauna saknuhunchha. Thap specific details jastai kun kun kitab haru chhan ya kun kun suvidha haru chhan bhanera bolna saknuhunchha.

Ví dụ: Yes, it is a great place to study, especially for students aiming for medical and engineering careers. The teachers are always ready to help us. In addition, the classrooms are well equipped, and we have access to many books and the internet to support our learning.

Gợi ý: Tapai ko uttar ma filler words dherai chhan ra sentence haru adhuro chhan. Tapai le sentence haru lai complete ra clear banayera bolnu parcha. Linking words jastai 'however', 'because' prayog garera uttar lai ramro banau. Thap specific details jastai kun kun suvidha haru chahinchha bhanera bolnu parcha.

Ví dụ: The place I study is quite good; however, I wish the fees were a bit lower because it is difficult for students to afford. Also, I hope they can provide more facilities such as updated libraries and better lab equipment.

Gợi ý: Tapai ko uttar ma thulo bhul chha, jastai 'prostate examination' jasle arth ma confusion aauchha. Tapai le shabda haru thik chayan garnu parcha ra sentence haru sankshep ra spashta banayera bolnu parcha. Linking words jastai 'because' prayog garera uttar lai logical banauna saknuhunchha.

Ví dụ: I recently finished my +2 examination in the biology major. I want to pursue a career in the medical field as a nurse because I am passionate about helping people. I especially want to work in Australia because I have heard it offers better opportunities and more stable jobs for nurses.

× I am a student and I have currently given my +2 examination from Caskey Modernized Academy which is situated in Southeast Pokhara.

✓ I am a student and I have currently given my +2 examination at Caskey Modernized Academy which is situated in Southeast Pokhara.

The preposition 'from' is incorrectly used here; the correct preposition to indicate the place where an examination was taken is 'at'. This is a preposition usage error (ID 11).

× I have done my +2 in science faculty with Biology and Mathematics in major and I plan to study in medical field in the future.

✓ I have completed my +2 in the science faculty with Biology and Mathematics as majors, and I plan to study in the medical field in the future.

The phrase 'have done' is less formal; 'have completed' is more appropriate. Also, 'in science faculty' should be 'in the science faculty' (article error, ID 22). 'With Biology and Mathematics in major' should be 'with Biology and Mathematics as majors' for correct expression (sentence structure error, ID 26). 'Study in medical field' needs 'the' before 'medical field' (article error, ID 22).

× Currently I'm preparing for CE examination.

✓ Currently, I'm preparing for the CE examination.

The article 'the' is needed before 'CE examination' to specify the particular exam (article error, ID 22). Also, a comma after 'Currently' improves sentence clarity (punctuation).

× For this I have chosen uh institution named PPM.

✓ For this, I have chosen an institution named PPM.

The article 'an' is required before a noun starting with a vowel sound (article error, ID 22). Also, a comma after 'For this' improves sentence flow (punctuation).

× It provides uh wide UH facilities that helps us to study and focus better.

✓ It provides wide facilities that help us to study and focus better.

The verb 'helps' should be 'help' to agree with the plural subject 'facilities' (subject-verb agreement error, ID 27). Also, filler words 'uh' and 'UH' should be omitted for clarity.

× It provides umm peaceful and calm environment.

✓ It provides a peaceful and calm environment.

The article 'a' is needed before 'peaceful and calm environment' (article error, ID 22). Filler 'umm' should be removed.

× Yes, it is a great place for students like us who want to pursue career in medical and engineering field.

✓ Yes, it is a great place for students like us who want to pursue a career in the medical and engineering fields.

The phrase 'pursue career' needs the article 'a' before 'career' (article error, ID 22). 'Medical and engineering field' should be plural 'fields' and preceded by 'the' (article and plural issue, IDs 22 and 1).

× There are teachers who are always ready to help us and the classrooms are well equipped and we also have lots of books and internets to help us.

✓ There are teachers who are always ready to help us, the classrooms are well equipped, and we also have lots of books and internet to help us.

'Internets' is incorrect; 'internet' is uncountable and should be singular (singular and plural issue, ID 1). Commas are added for clarity.

× The place I study is quite good, but it would be better if, uh, the cost would be little bit less expensive as it is hard for us students to manage the cost fee.

✓ The place where I study is quite good, but it would be better if the cost were a little less expensive, as it is hard for us students to manage the fees.

'The place I study' should be 'The place where I study' for correct sentence structure (sentence structure error, ID 26). 'Would be' should be 'were' in conditional sentence (modal verb usage, ID 4). 'Little bit less expensive' should be 'a little less expensive' (incorrect use of quantifiers, ID 14). 'Cost fee' is redundant; 'fees' is sufficient (sentence structure error, ID 26). Filler 'uh' removed.

× And I hope that, uh, we get more facilities regarding.

✓ And I hope that we get more facilities related to this.

The sentence is incomplete and unclear; 'facilities regarding' needs an object to complete the meaning (sentence structure error, ID 26). Filler 'uh' removed.

× As you know, I recently finished my prostate examination in biology major, so I want to pursue my career in medical field as a nurse.

✓ As you know, I recently finished my +2 examination in biology major, so I want to pursue my career in the medical field as a nurse.

'Prostate examination' is incorrect; likely intended '+2 examination' (content correction). 'Medical field' needs 'the' (article error, ID 22).

× I especially want to work as a nurse in Australia because I have heard that Australia provides a better opportunity and more stable job for nursing.

✓ I especially want to work as a nurse in Australia because I have heard that Australia provides better opportunities and more stable jobs for nurses.

'A better opportunity' should be plural 'better opportunities' (singular and plural issue, ID 1). 'More stable job' should be plural 'more stable jobs' (singular and plural issue, ID 1). 'For nursing' should be 'for nurses' (incorrect use of pronouns, ID 12).