Study— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự tự nhiên và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý không rõ ràng. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Ngoài ra, nên thêm liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

Ví dụ: I am currently a student studying accounting at university. Studying helps me gain important knowledge and skills for my future career. Also, being a student gives me the chance to meet new people and make friends.

Gợi ý: Bạn nên chú ý đến ngữ pháp và từ vựng chính xác hơn, đồng thời sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc. Ví dụ, thay vì 'cabinet' nên dùng 'campus' hoặc 'university'. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời nên rõ ràng và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp.

Ví dụ: I study at a university located in the city center, which is very convenient for me. The campus has excellent facilities, including modern libraries and comfortable study areas that help me focus better. Moreover, easy access to public transport makes commuting simple.

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Nên sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và liên kết câu hợp lý hơn.

Ví dụ: Yes, it is a good place to study because the environment is quiet and free from distractions. The library and study rooms are well equipped, which helps me with my research and studies.

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác, làm cho ý không rõ ràng. Bạn nên sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Nên dùng từ vựng phù hợp và liên kết câu hợp lý hơn.

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like the study place to improve by adding more quiet areas and comfortable seating. This would help students concentrate better and feel more comfortable while studying.

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác, khiến ý không rõ ràng. Bạn nên sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và trả lời trực tiếp, rõ ràng hơn.

Ví dụ: In the future, I plan to pursue a master's degree in environmental science because I am concerned about climate change and environmental issues. I also want to study abroad to gain international experience and learn more about this field.

× It will be a student person in my degree in accounting at university.

✓ I am a student pursuing a degree in accounting at university.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'will be' to describe a current state. The present tense 'am' is appropriate here to indicate the student's current status.

× Additionally, being a student give me the opportunity meet new.

✓ Additionally, being a student gives me the opportunity to meet new people.

The verb 'give' should be 'gives' to agree with the singular subject 'being a student'. Also, 'meet new' is incomplete; it should be 'to meet new people'.

× I study at a university located in city center which is very convenient for me.

✓ I study at a university located in the city center, which is very convenient for me.

The phrase 'in city center' is missing the definite article 'the'. Also, a comma is needed before 'which' to separate the clauses.

× The cabinet has excellent facility including modern libraries and comfortable studies which help me focus better.

✓ The campus has excellent facilities including modern libraries and comfortable study areas which help me focus better.

'Cabinet' is incorrect; 'campus' is appropriate. 'Facility' should be plural 'facilities' to match the context. 'Comfortable studies' is incorrect; 'comfortable study areas' is better.

× Being called to public transport make it easy.

✓ Being close to public transport makes it easy.

'Being called to' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'being close to'. Also, 'make' should be 'makes' to agree with the singular subject.

× Of course, it's a good life to study simply because the environment and free from distraction and which have me concern to better the facilitated.

✓ Of course, it's a good place to study simply because the environment is free from distractions and helps me focus better.

The original sentence has several errors: 'good life' should be 'good place'; 'environment and free' lacks a verb; 'which have me concern' is unclear and incorrect; 'better the facilitated' is incorrect. The correction clarifies and corrects these issues.

× The library and story room are well equipped providing on the research I need.

✓ The library and study room are well equipped, providing the research resources I need.

'Story room' is likely a typo for 'study room'. Also, 'providing on the research' is incorrect; it should be 'providing the research resources'.

× I definitely I would like to delay where I study to make some drinks, particularly by improving the environment study environment.

✓ I definitely would like to improve the place where I study, particularly by enhancing the study environment.

'Delay' is incorrect; 'improve' fits the context. 'Make some drinks' is unrelated and likely a mistake. 'Environment study environment' is redundant; 'study environment' suffices.

× For example, adding more quiet joints and comfortable seasonally would have student concerns the best.

✓ For example, adding more quiet zones and comfortable seating would address students' concerns best.

'Quiet joints' is incorrect; 'quiet zones' or 'quiet areas' is appropriate. 'Comfortable seasonally' is incorrect; 'comfortable seating' fits better. 'Would have student concerns the best' is unclear; 'would address students' concerns best' is correct.

× In the future, I plan to pursue a mastery in environmental science because I am business about approaching climate change and certainly issues, and intend to study at a university approach to gain international, uh exposure and learn about space.

✓ In the future, I plan to pursue a master's degree in environmental science because I am concerned about addressing climate change and related issues, and intend to study at a university to gain international exposure and learn about space.

'Mastery' should be 'master's degree'. 'I am business about approaching' is incorrect; 'I am concerned about addressing' is correct. 'Certainly issues' should be 'related issues'. 'University approach to gain' is incorrect; 'university to gain' is correct. The sentence is restructured for clarity.