Study— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答较长且信息较多，建议简化答案，直接回答问题后再补充细节，避免句子过长，提升表达自然度。

Ví dụ: I am a final year university student majoring in Communication Engineering. After graduation, I plan to study abroad to enhance my skills and academic knowledge.

Gợi ý: 回答中有些表达不够自然，如“to be more detailed in the library”，建议使用更地道的表达，并注意句子结构的清晰。

Ví dụ: I usually study in my university's library, which is the largest in the country. It has a quiet atmosphere and clean facilities that help me concentrate on my studies.

Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误，如“can devoted”，应为“can devote”，建议注意动词形式，同时连接词使用可以更自然。

Ví dụ: Yes, it's an excellent place to study because the atmosphere is peaceful and quiet, allowing me to focus completely. Moreover, it offers good facilities like free Wi-Fi, which helps me access online learning resources.

Gợi ý: 回答中句子较长且重复，建议分句表达，使用连接词使表达更连贯自然，同时避免重复词汇。

Ví dụ: Yes, I would suggest some changes. The seats are very close together, so if students talk or listen to online classes nearby, it becomes quite noisy and distracting.

Gợi ý: 回答较好，但开头“you know”口语化且不必要，建议直接进入主题，提升表达的正式度和流畅性。

Ví dụ: I am currently in my final year majoring in Communication Engineering. I plan to study abroad, possibly in Singapore, to enhance my academic knowledge. Studying abroad will also help me develop life skills and broaden my horizons.

× I'm a final year student in university majoring in Communication engineering and I pursue to study abroad to improve my skills and develop my academic knowledge after I graduate.

✓ I'm a final year student at university majoring in Communication Engineering and I plan to study abroad to improve my skills and develop my academic knowledge after I graduate.

动词 pursue 后面不接 to do 形式，应该用 plan 或 intend 等表达计划的动词。这里用 plan 更合适。

× I'm a final year student in university majoring in Communication engineering and I pursue to study abroad to improve my skills and develop my academic knowledge after I graduate.

✓ I'm a final year student at university majoring in Communication Engineering and I plan to study abroad to improve my skills and develop my academic knowledge after I graduate.

表示在某个学校学习，通常用介词 at 而不是 in。

× I study in the university to be more detailed in the library of our university.

✓ I study at the university, more specifically in the library of our university.

表示在大学学习，介词用 at 更合适；另外原句表达不清，改为更明确的表达。

× Our university has the largest library among all the universities in our countries.

✓ Our university has the largest library among all the universities in our country.

这里指的是“我们国家”，应使用单数形式 country，而不是复数 countries。

× It has good atmosphere and clean facilities which help me to focus on my academic subjects.

✓ It has a good atmosphere and clean facilities which help me focus on my academic subjects.

atmosphere 是可数名词，前面需要加冠词 a；help 后面不需要 to，直接用动词原形。

× Yes, it's an excellent place to study. The atmosphere there is very peaceful and quiet where I can devoted myself wholeheartedly into my academic knowledge.

✓ Yes, it's an excellent place to study. The atmosphere there is very peaceful and quiet, where I can devote myself wholeheartedly to my academic knowledge.

动词 devote 后面接动词原形；介词用 to 而不是 into。

× And it has good facilities like the free Wi-Fi, which helps me to learn some online.

✓ And it has good facilities like free Wi-Fi, which helps me learn online.

Wi-Fi 前不需要加定冠词 the；help 后面不需要 to；learn online 不需要 some。

× Yes, and I have one suggestion for the place I study.

✓ Yes, I have one suggestion for the place where I study.

缺少关系代词 where，导致句子结构不完整。

× All the seats are very close to each other, so it will be really annoying if the students around you are talking or listening to some online classes, it will be really noisy.

✓ All the seats are very close to each other, so it will be really annoying if the students around you are talking or listening to online classes; it will be really noisy.

句子中逗号连接两个独立分句，应改为分号或用连词连接；some online classes 前的 some 不必要。

× I think study abroad will not only improve my life skills but also widen my horizons.

✓ I think studying abroad will not only improve my life skills but also widen my horizons.

think 后面接动名词形式 studying，表示一般事实或习惯。