Study— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: English (Nepal): Tapaiko uttar thap spashta ra sankshepma huna parcha. Aba ko uttar ma thap pratyaksha topic sentence ra thap supporting details ko prayog garnu parcha, tara 5 vaakya bhitra simit garnu parcha.

Ví dụ: I am currently a student preparing for the common entrance exam at Ambition Guru and also studying IELTS at Kangaroo Education. I do not work at the moment because my focus is on my studies.

Gợi ý: English (Nepal): Tapaiko uttar ma thap spashta ra sahi grammar prayog garnu parcha. Location ko barema spashta ra sankshepma bolnu parcha, ra sentence haru ramro tarikale jodne linking words ko prayog garnu parcha.

Ví dụ: I study for my common entrance exam at Putalisadak in Kathmandu. Additionally, I attend IELTS classes at Kangaroo Education located in Bagh Bazaar. I am preparing for both exams simultaneously.

Gợi ý: English (Nepal): Tapaiko uttar ma thap specific details ra thik shabda prayog garnu parcha. Linking words jasari 'because', 'therefore' ko prayog garera uttar lai logical banaunu parcha.

Ví dụ: Yes, Kathmandu is a good place to study because it is the capital city and offers many educational opportunities. Many students from different parts of Nepal come here for higher studies because the quality of education is better.

Gợi ý: English (Nepal): Tapaiko uttar ma grammar ra sentence structure ma sudhar garnu parcha. Negative ra positive kura haru clear ra sankshepma bolnu parcha, ra linking words jasari 'however', 'but' ko prayog garnu parcha.

Ví dụ: I like studying here because the education is good; however, I do not like the place itself because it is very crowded and polluted. Despite these issues, the study environment is satisfactory.

Gợi ý: English (Nepal): Tapaiko uttar ma grammar ra sentence structure ma sudhar garnu parcha. Future plans ko barema spashta ra sankshepma bolnu parcha, ra linking words jasari 'because', 'so' ko prayog garnu parcha.

Ví dụ: My future study plan is to go to Australia to complete my bachelor's degree in nursing. I want to apply there because the education system is excellent.

× I don't work because I'm a student studying common entrance exam.

✓ I don't work because I'm a student studying for the common entrance exam.

The verb 'studying' should be followed by the preposition 'for' to indicate the purpose of studying. This is a common collocation in English.

× I'm preparing for common entrance exam in Ambition guru as well as I'm preparing for IELTS in Kangaroo education.

✓ I'm preparing for the common entrance exam at Ambition Guru as well as preparing for IELTS at Kangaroo Education.

Use 'at' for locations like institutions. Also, 'the' is needed before 'common entrance exam' as it refers to a specific exam. Proper nouns like 'Ambition Guru' and 'Kangaroo Education' should be capitalized.

× A study in Kathmandu, Putali Sadhak from my common entrance exam and I study IELTS in Bagh Bazaar aisles in Kangaroo Education which is located in Bagh Bazar and I'm preparing both of these.

✓ I study in Kathmandu, at Putali Sadhak for my common entrance exam, and I study IELTS at Bagh Bazaar aisles in Kangaroo Education, which is located in Bagh Bazaar, and I'm preparing for both of these.

The sentence had missing subject 'I' and incorrect prepositions. 'Putali Sadhak' and 'Bagh Bazaar' are places, so 'at' is appropriate. Also, 'preparing both of these' should be 'preparing for both of these'.

× Yes, it is a very good place to study because it is the capital city of Nepal and there are many opportunities and good educations.

✓ Yes, it is a very good place to study because it is the capital city of Nepal and there are many opportunities and good education.

'Education' is an uncountable noun and should not be pluralized as 'educations'.

× Many people from different towns and different cities of Nepal come over here for further studies because you are better.

✓ Many people from different towns and cities of Nepal come here for further studies because it is better.

The phrase 'because you are better' is incorrect and unclear. It should be 'because it is better' referring to the place or opportunities. Also, 'come over here' can be simplified to 'come here'.

× We can get better opportunities and better study education.

✓ We can get better opportunities and better education.

The phrase 'study education' is incorrect; 'education' alone suffices. 'Better education' is the correct phrase.

× Unfortunately, yes, I like this place, but except study this place is I don't like this place because it is too much crowded and like too much crowded polluted.

✓ Unfortunately, yes, I like this place for studying, but except for that, I don't like this place because it is too crowded and too polluted.

The original sentence is confusing and ungrammatical. 'Except study this place is' is incorrect; it should be 'except for that' or 'except for studying here'. Also, 'too much crowded' should be 'too crowded' and 'like too much crowded polluted' should be 'too polluted'.

× So I don't like over here, but first studies it is better, we can get good education.

✓ So I don't like being here, but for studies, it is better; we can get good education.

'I don't like over here' is incorrect; 'being here' is correct. 'First studies' is unclear; 'for studies' is appropriate. The sentence needs proper punctuation to separate ideas.

× My future study plans is I want to go Australia.

✓ My future study plans are that I want to go to Australia.

'Plans' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' not 'is'. Also, 'go Australia' requires the preposition 'to'.

× I want to apply for Australia for to complete my bachelor in nursing over there.

✓ I want to apply to Australia to complete my bachelor's degree in nursing over there.

The correct preposition with 'apply' when referring to a country is 'to'. Also, 'for to complete' is incorrect; it should be 'to complete'. 'Bachelor' should be 'bachelor's degree'.