Study— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答较为自然，但可以更简洁直接，避免重复信息。例如，"I'm currently a student at Hangzhou Polytechnic University."

Ví dụ: I'm currently a student at Hangzhou Polytechnic University, where I am pursuing my degree in engineering.

Gợi ý: 回答中信息有些混乱，提到了两个不同的学校名称，且内容重复。建议直接回答学校名称，并简要描述学校特点，避免信息混淆。

Ví dụ: I study at Hangzhou Polytechnic University, which is located in Hangzhou, the capital city of Zhejiang province. It's a vibrant city with a rich cultural heritage.

Gợi ý: 回答内容丰富，但句子结构不够流畅，且有语法错误。建议使用连词使句子更连贯，并注意单复数和时态。

Ví dụ: Yes, it is a great place to study because it offers excellent facilities such as a well-equipped library and computer rooms, which help me stay focused and improve my skills.

Gợi ý: 表达不够清晰，有语法错误和重复。建议简化句子，使用恰当的连接词，并注意名词单复数和动词形式。

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like the study environment to be improved by adding comfortable seating and quiet areas, which would help students concentrate better.

Gợi ý: 回答不够清晰，表达含糊且有语法错误。建议明确表达计划，使用正确的短语和句型，避免模糊表达。

Ví dụ: I plan to graduate from my current university in Hangzhou and then apply to a university in Malaysia to gain better opportunities and enrich my life.

× there are lot of excellent facilities like a library, a computer, rooms and other resource which made me stay focused on my study and encourage me work hard and improve my skills.

✓ there are lots of excellent facilities like a library, computers, rooms and other resources which make me stay focused on my study and encourage me to work hard and improve my skills.

“lot” 应该用复数形式 “lots” 来表示“许多”，且“a computer”应改为复数“computers”，因为前面提到了多个设施；“resource”也应为复数“resources”。此外，动词时态和搭配也需调整。

× other resource which made me stay focused on my study and encourage me work hard and improve my skills.

✓ other resources which make me stay focused on my study and encourage me to work hard and improve my skills.

这里描述的是现在的情况，应该使用一般现在时，“made”应改为“make”，且“encourage me work”应改为“encourage me to work”，动词不定式需要“to”。

× I study at Hangzhou City, a beautiful city, and it's a capital of Zhejiang province.

✓ I study in Hangzhou City, a beautiful city, and it's the capital of Zhejiang province.

“a capital” 应该用特指的定冠词“the capital”，因为这里指的是唯一的省会城市。

× I study at Hangzhou City, a beautiful city, and it's a capital of Zhejiang province.

✓ I study in Hangzhou City, a beautiful city, and it's the capital of Zhejiang province.

表示在某个城市学习，应该用介词“in”而不是“at”。

× I would like to place a make some changes especially by improved studying environment.

✓ I would like to make some changes, especially by improving the studying environment.

“place a make” 是错误搭配，应改为“make some changes”；“improved”应改为动名词“improving”来表示动作。

× They can create some comfortable seating areas and create a quiet areas which makes students start focus on study.

✓ They can create some comfortable seating areas and create quiet areas which make students start to focus on study.

“a quiet areas”中“a”与复数“areas”不匹配，应去掉“a”；“makes”应改为“make”以与复数主语“areas”一致；“start focus”应改为“start to focus”。

× I will draw up the university in Hangzhou and I will apply for the university in Malaysia because I think I need to go a better university to enrich my life and improve myself.

✓ I will graduate from the university in Hangzhou and I will apply to a university in Malaysia because I think I need to go to a better university to enrich my life and improve myself.

“draw up the university” 是错误表达，应为“graduate from the university”；“apply for the university”应改为“apply to a university”；“go a better university”应为“go to a better university”，缺少介词“to”。