Study— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答较长且有语法错误，如“major in computer science”应为“majoring in computer science”，且“program study”表达不自然。建议简化句子结构，避免冗长，同时注意动词形式和搭配。

Ví dụ: I am a university student majoring in computer science because I am very interested in technology. Studying this subject helps me gain valuable skills for my future career.

Gợi ý: 回答中时态混用（如“I studied”应为“I study”），且部分表达不够自然，如“lovely atmosphere”可用更合适的词汇。建议注意时态一致，使用更地道的表达。

Ví dụ: I study at my university because I enjoy the friendly atmosphere. During lessons, students often discuss questions and share ideas, which helps me understand the material better. I also like studying with classmates because it makes learning more interesting.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在多处语法和表达错误，如“I motivate”应为“I feel motivated”，“helps me strange ideas”表达不清。建议加强语法基础，使用正确的词汇和句型，确保表达清晰。

Ví dụ: Yes, it is a good place to study because the environment makes me feel happy and motivated. Also, studying with others helps me share ideas and learn more effectively.

Gợi ý: 回答中词汇使用错误，如“palace”应为“place”，“let me more motive”表达不自然。句子结构混乱，建议简化句子，使用正确词汇和语法。

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like the study place to be more comfortable because a comfortable place makes me feel happy and more motivated to learn and make friends.

Gợi ý: 回答语法混乱，句子不完整且表达不清，如“Career development no will help me understand the logos”无意义。建议重组句子，表达清晰具体。

Ví dụ: In the future, I plan to study both law and mathematics because I believe they are important. Studying law will help me understand legal issues and protect people's rights, while mathematics will improve my problem-solving skills.

× I am a student currently studying at university and major in computer science because I am very interested in technology and program study allows me to gain valuable knowledge and skills for my future career.

✓ I am a student currently studying at university and majoring in computer science because I am very interested in technology and program study allows me to gain valuable knowledge and skills for my future career.

动词后接-ing形式时，表示正在进行的动作。这里的'major'应改为'majoring'，表示正在主修某专业。

× I studied at school because I like the lovely atmosphere there.

✓ I study at school because I like the lovely atmosphere there.

句子中描述的是现在的情况，应该使用现在时态。'studied'是过去式，应改为现在时'study'。

× During lessons, many students discuss questions and share their ideas, which helps me understand the material.

✓ During lessons, many students discuss questions and share their ideas, which help me understand the material.

主语是复数students，谓语动词help应与主语一致，使用原形help而非helps。

× But I also enjoy learning with my classmates because it makes the study more interesting.

✓ But I also enjoy learning with my classmates because it makes studying more interesting.

'makes the study more interesting'中'study'应改为动名词形式'studying'，表示学习这件事。

× Yes, I think it is a good place to study because the place and atmosphere makes me happy and I motivate.

✓ Yes, I think it is a good place to study because the place and atmosphere make me happy and motivate me.

主语'the place and atmosphere'是复数，谓语动词应使用复数形式'make'。另外，'I motivate'不完整，应改为'motivate me'。

× Additionally, I can study together with others which helps me strange ideas and learn more about efficiently its environmentally encourages.

✓ Additionally, I can study together with others which helps me exchange ideas and learn more efficiently because its environment is encouraging.

'strange ideas'用词错误，应为'exchange ideas'。'learn more about efficiently its environmentally encourages'结构混乱，应调整为'learn more efficiently because its environment is encouraging'。

× Yes, I hope my study plans can change because a comfortable palace makes me feel happy and let me more motive to learn new knowledge and make more friends.

✓ Yes, I hope my study plans can change because a comfortable place makes me feel happy and motivates me to learn new knowledge and make more friends.

'palace'应为'place'。'let me more motive'表达错误，应为'motivates me'。动词形式和搭配需调整。

× In the future, I plan to study both law and mathematics because I believe these subjects are essential for me.

✓ In the future, I plan to study both law and mathematics because I believe these subjects are essential for me.

该句无语法错误，时态使用正确。

× Career development no will help me understand the logos and protect people's rights via mathematics will improve.

✓ Career development will help me understand the laws and protect people's rights, and studying mathematics will improve my skills.

原句结构混乱，'no will'错误，'logos'应为'laws'。需要调整句子结构，使表达清晰。