Study— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is informative but a bit lengthy and slightly redundant. Try to be more concise and avoid unnecessary details like the exact location unless asked. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Ví dụ: I work as an Assistant Professor at Chandigarh University, which is a reputable institution in Punjab. I enjoy working there because it offers a supportive environment.

Gợi ý: Your answer lists many qualifications but is too long and lacks linking words. Try to structure your answer with linking words and focus on the most relevant information to make it clearer and more natural.

Ví dụ: I completed my graduation from Punjabi University, followed by a Bachelor of Education at Lincoln College. Later, I earned a Master of Science from Mata Gujri College and a PhD in Reliability Theory from Chandigarh University.

Gợi ý: Your answer is relevant and clear but can be improved by using linking words and avoiding repetition of 'organization'. Also, try to be more specific about the facilities.

Ví dụ: Yes, it is a good place to study because it offers excellent facilities. For instance, the library provides a calm and peaceful environment, which helps me concentrate on assignments and research work.

Gợi ý: Your answer is unclear and lacks coherence. Try to express your ideas more clearly using proper sentence structure and linking words. Also, be specific about what changes you would like to see.

Ví dụ: I think the university should adopt more modern technologies and software to support students better. For example, providing updated electronic resources and digital learning tools would be helpful.

Gợi ý: Your answer conveys your plans but has grammatical errors and lacks fluency. Try to use correct tense and structure, and add linking words to make your answer more natural.

Ví dụ: I plan to go abroad for higher education, specifically to pursue a postdoctoral degree in Reliability Theory, which is my favourite subject.

× I am working as an Assistant professor in Chandigarh University which is located in Mahalian state of Punjab, India.

✓ I work as an Assistant Professor at Chandigarh University, which is located in the Mahalian state of Punjab, India.

The present continuous tense 'am working' is generally used for temporary actions or actions happening now. Since the student is describing their job as a regular occupation, the simple present tense 'I work' is more appropriate. Also, 'Assistant professor' should be capitalized as a title, and 'at' is the correct preposition for institutions. 'Mahalian' should be preceded by 'the' as it is a specific state.

× I have completed my graduation from Punjabi University, Patiala, Bachelor of Education from Lincoln College of Education, Master of Science from Mata Gujri College and last but not least Doctor of Philosophy and Reliability Theory from Chandigarh University, Garuma.

✓ I completed my graduation from Punjabi University, Patiala; Bachelor of Education from Lincoln College of Education; Master of Science from Mata Gujri College; and last but not least, Doctor of Philosophy in Reliability Theory from Chandigarh University, Garuma.

The present perfect tense 'have completed' is used for actions with relevance to the present, but here the student is listing completed degrees, so simple past 'completed' is more suitable. Also, semicolons help separate the list clearly. 'Doctor of Philosophy and Reliability Theory' should be 'Doctor of Philosophy in Reliability Theory' to indicate the field of study.

× Yes, it is a good place to study because all facilities are available in this organization and when we talk about the library in this organization, it is very calm and peaceful environment.

✓ Yes, it is a good place to study because all facilities are available in this organization, and when we talk about the library in this organization, it has a very calm and peaceful environment.

The phrase 'it is very calm and peaceful environment' is incorrect because 'environment' is a noun and needs a determiner and a verb that agrees with it. Using 'it has a very calm and peaceful environment' correctly attributes the environment to the library.

× In the modern era today, youngsters using the modern techniques, gadgets and software and so many things.

✓ In the modern era today, youngsters use modern techniques, gadgets, software, and many other things.

The sentence lacks a verb for the subject 'youngsters'. The present continuous 'using' is incorrect here; the simple present 'use' is appropriate to describe habitual actions. Also, 'so many things' is vague; 'many other things' is clearer.

× So according to me, in every of organization, if we talk about schools, universities, they are focused on the electronic techniques to providing.

✓ So according to me, in every organization, whether we talk about schools or universities, they focus on electronic techniques to provide better services.

The phrase 'in every of organization' is incorrect; it should be 'in every organization'. Also, 'focused on the electronic techniques to providing' is grammatically incorrect; it should be 'focus on electronic techniques to provide'. The sentence structure is improved for clarity.

× I go to abroad for higher education.

✓ I will go abroad for higher education.

The sentence 'I go to abroad' is incorrect because 'go' in simple present tense is not used for future plans. Also, 'to abroad' is incorrect; 'abroad' does not need 'to'. The future tense 'will go' correctly expresses future intention.

× Higher education in the sense I pursuing postdoc in reliability theory because this is my favorite subject.

✓ By higher education, I mean I am pursuing a postdoc in reliability theory because this is my favorite subject.

The phrase 'I pursuing' is missing the auxiliary verb 'am' for present continuous tense. Also, the sentence is rephrased for clarity and correctness: 'By higher education, I mean I am pursuing a postdoc...'. 'Postdoc' should be preceded by an article 'a'.