Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you work or are you a student?
Thí sinh
Oh, I'm a Senior High School student majoring in Chinese Language and Literature. I'm really fascinated by my major because it helps me understand Chinese culture and improve my writing skills.
Giám khảo
Where do you study?
Thí sinh
I study in Chongqing province which is located in the South wisdom of China. My school, my university is a good place to study because it's next to a good mountain. It bring us a peaceful and quiet surrounding.
Giám khảo
Is it a good place to study?
Thí sinh
Yes, definitely. My campus is surrounded by Gulu Mountain, providing a peaceful and quiet environment that helps me concentrate better. Additionally, the natural scenery makes it very pleasant place to study.
Giám khảo
Would you like the place where you study to make any changes?
Thí sinh
Absolutely, my university brings many help to me to be a better person and I love studying here because it has peaceful.
Giám khảo
What are your future study plans?
Thí sinh
Well, I'm not sure now. I plan to continue my study and try my best to become a postgraduate student. If I successful in the exam, I will be happy. If not, I'll maybe go work.
Do you work or are you a student?
Điểm: 85.0Gợi ý: 回答较为自然且内容相关,但句子稍显冗长且缺少连接词,建议简化句子结构并使用连接词使表达更流畅。
Ví dụ: I'm a Senior High School student majoring in Chinese Language and Literature. I find it fascinating because it helps me understand Chinese culture and improve my writing skills.
Where do you study?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清,且缺少连贯的连接词。建议注意语法准确性,使用连接词使句子更连贯,并提供更具体的细节。
Ví dụ: I study in Chongqing province, which is located in the southwest of China. My university is near a beautiful mountain, which provides us with a peaceful and quiet environment.
Is it a good place to study?
Điểm: 90.0Gợi ý: 回答内容具体且连贯,但可以增加更多细节来丰富答案,例如描述自然景色如何影响学习。
Ví dụ: Yes, definitely. My campus is surrounded by Gulu Mountain, which creates a peaceful and quiet environment that helps me concentrate better. Moreover, the beautiful natural scenery makes studying there very enjoyable and relaxing.
Would you like the place where you study to make any changes?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答不够明确且语法错误较多,缺少具体的改进建议。建议明确表达是否希望改变,并给出具体理由和改进建议。
Ví dụ: Actually, I am quite satisfied with my university because it provides a peaceful environment. However, I wish there were more modern facilities to support our studies.
What are your future study plans?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: 回答表达了计划,但语法和用词有误,且缺少连接词。建议使用正确的语法,增加连接词使表达更流畅。
Ví dụ: Well, I'm not sure yet, but I plan to continue my studies and try my best to become a postgraduate student. If I succeed in the exam, I will be very happy; if not, I might consider working for a while.
× I study in Chongqing province which is located in the South wisdom of China.
✓ I study in Chongqing province which is located in the southwest of China.
“South wisdom”是错误的表达,正确的地理方位应为“southwest”,且应加介词“of”表示所属关系。
× It bring us a peaceful and quiet surrounding.
✓ It brings us a peaceful and quiet surrounding.
主语是单数“it”,谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式“brings”。
× the natural scenery makes it very pleasant place to study.
✓ the natural scenery makes it a very pleasant place to study.
“pleasant”前缺少冠词“a”,因为“place”是可数名词,需用冠词修饰。
× my university brings many help to me to be a better person and I love studying here because it has peaceful.
✓ my university brings me much help to be a better person and I love studying here because it is peaceful.
“brings many help to me”应改为“brings me much help”,且“it has peaceful”应改为“it is peaceful”,因为“peaceful”是形容词,需用系动词“is”。
× If I successful in the exam, I will be happy.
✓ If I am successful in the exam, I will be happy.
条件句中缺少系动词“am”,正确表达为“If I am successful”。
× If not, I'll maybe go work.
✓ If not, I might go to work.
“I'll maybe”语序不正确,应为“I might”,且“go work”应加介词“to”,即“go to work”。