Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you work or are you a student?
Thí sinh
I'm neither working nor staring at this time. I stayed home and do housework to help my parents.
Giám khảo
Where do you study?
Thí sinh
I study at a university.
Giám khảo
Is it a good place to study?
Thí sinh
Yes, it is a good place to study because it has a beautiful library and this library has four spacious floor. I think it has a academic atmosphere. It's very good.
Giám khảo
Would you like the place where you study to make any changes?
Thí sinh
I hope my university impose fewer restrictions on students so that they can be more creative freely.
Giám khảo
What are your future study plans?
Thí sinh
I'm not entirely sure about my future study plans yet, but I might take the China's Unified Qualification exam for legal professionals because I'm passionate with law and want to help people with law issues.
Do you work or are you a student?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和拼写错误,如“staring”应为“studying”,时态使用不当。建议使用正确的时态和词汇,表达更自然流畅。
Ví dụ: I'm not working or studying at the moment. I stay at home to help my parents with housework.
Where do you study?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答过于简短,缺乏细节。建议增加具体信息,如大学名称或专业,使回答更丰富。
Ví dụ: I study at a university in my city, majoring in business administration.
Is it a good place to study?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: 回答内容较好,但存在语法错误,如“four spacious floor”应为“four spacious floors”,“a academic”应为“an academic”。建议注意冠词和复数形式的正确使用。
Ví dụ: Yes, it is a good place to study because it has a beautiful library with four spacious floors. I think it has an academic atmosphere, which is very conducive to learning.
Would you like the place where you study to make any changes?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 句子结构不完整,动词时态和形式错误,如“impose”应为“imposes”,“more creative freely”表达不自然。建议调整句子结构,使表达更准确。
Ví dụ: I hope my university would impose fewer restrictions on students so that they can be more creative and express themselves freely.
What are your future study plans?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: 表达基本清晰,但“passionate with law”应为“passionate about law”,“help people with law issues”表达不够地道。建议使用更自然的表达方式。
Ví dụ: I'm not entirely sure about my future study plans yet, but I might take China's Unified Qualification Exam for legal professionals because I'm passionate about law and want to help people with legal issues.
× I'm neither working nor staring at this time.
✓ I'm neither working nor studying at this time.
句中'staring'应为'studying',因为考生想表达的是“学习”,而不是“凝视”。这是词汇选择错误,不属于语法错误,但为了准确表达意思需要更正。
× I stayed home and do housework to help my parents.
✓ I stayed home and did housework to help my parents.
句中前半句使用了过去时'stayed',后半句却用了现在时'do',时态不一致。应将'do'改为过去时'did',保持时态一致。
× this library has four spacious floor.
✓ this library has four spacious floors.
floor是可数名词,表示“楼层”,数量为四,应使用复数形式floors。
× I think it has a academic atmosphere.
✓ I think it has an academic atmosphere.
以元音音素开头的单词前应使用不定冠词'an',而非'a'。academic以元音音素开头,故应使用'an'。
× I hope my university impose fewer restrictions on students so that they can be more creative freely.
✓ I hope my university imposes fewer restrictions on students so that they can be more creative freely.
主语是第三人称单数my university,谓语动词应加-s,故'impose'应改为'imposes'。
× I'm passionate with law and want to help people with law issues.
✓ I'm passionate about law and want to help people with law issues.
passionate后应接介词about,表示“对……充满热情”,而非with。