Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you work or are you a student?
Thí sinh
I am a student studying in Hainan foreign language high school. I study English. I think English is very important to to each of us.
Giám khảo
Where do you study?
Thí sinh
I studying in Zhejiang Province in in Juji, a very small town in Zhejiang Province, China.
Giám khảo
Is it a good place to study?
Thí sinh
Yes, I think it is a good place to study because, uh.
Giám khảo
Would you like the place where you study to make any changes?
Thí sinh
No, I wouldn't. I think the place where I studying is perfect enough and I enjoy it very much in that environment.
Giám khảo
What are your future study plans?
Thí sinh
My future study plans is I think I'm going to abroad to study and go to Australia.
Do you work or are you a student?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答时应避免重复和语法错误,例如“to to”应为“to”。句子结构可以更自然,避免机械堆砌信息。可以简洁明了地表达身份和学习内容,并适当说明原因。
Ví dụ: I am a student at Hainan Foreign Language High School, where I focus on studying English because I believe it is essential for everyone.
Where do you study?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误,如“I studying”应为“I study”,并且重复了“in”。应注意语法正确和避免重复。可以简洁地说明地点并补充一些描述。
Ví dụ: I study in Juji, a small town located in Zhejiang Province, China.
Is it a good place to study?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答不完整,缺少具体理由。应直接回答问题并提供具体支持细节,使用连接词使回答连贯。
Ví dụ: Yes, I think it is a good place to study because it is quiet and has a friendly environment that helps me focus.
Would you like the place where you study to make any changes?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误,如“where I studying”应为“where I study”。表达可以更自然,避免使用“perfect enough”这种不地道的搭配。
Ví dụ: No, I wouldn't like any changes because I enjoy studying there and find the environment very comfortable.
What are your future study plans?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答中语法错误较多,如“plans is”应为“plans are”,“going to abroad”应为“going abroad”。句子结构应更清晰,表达更自然。
Ví dụ: My future study plan is to go abroad, specifically to Australia, to continue my education.
× I studying in Zhejiang Province in in Juji, a very small town in Zhejiang Province, China.
✓ I am studying in Zhejiang Province in Juji, a very small town in Zhejiang Province, China.
句子缺少助动词“am”,导致动词“studying”形式错误。现在进行时需要用“am/is/are + 动词-ing”结构。
× I think the place where I studying is perfect enough and I enjoy it very much in that environment.
✓ I think the place where I am studying is perfect enough and I enjoy it very much in that environment.
“I studying”缺少助动词“am”,现在进行时态需要“am/is/are + 动词-ing”结构。
× My future study plans is I think I'm going to abroad to study and go to Australia.
✓ My future study plans are, I think, to go abroad to study and go to Australia.
主语“plans”为复数,谓语动词应使用复数形式“are”,而非单数“is”。此外,“going to abroad”表达不正确,应改为“to go abroad”。