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Part 1

Giám khảo

Do you work or are you a student?

Thí sinh

I'm currently a student and I'm major in international business.

Giám khảo

Where do you study?

Thí sinh

I'm studying in GD, UFS, Guangdong University of Foreign Studies. It's a wonderful campus.

Giám khảo

Is it a good place to study?

Thí sinh

Study, yes, it's a good place to study because the environment is very quiet and please peaceful which helps you concentrate better. Additionally, everyone around me is highly focused on their walks and creating their atmosphere for study.

Giám khảo

Would you like the place where you study to make any changes?

Thí sinh

I wouldn't want any changes in the place where I study because I'm a person who prefers a stable and quiet environment. I like to have a clean desk and a tiny space which helps me concentrate better. So keeping everything the same helps me stay focused and productive.

Giám khảo

What are your future study plans?

Thí sinh

I'm still considering my future study plans. I might study abroad to gain international experience or I make may take a master entrance exam to continue my study domestically depending on which option suits me better. Both choices have their advantages, so I need more time to decide.

Đánh giá

Tổng

Tổng: 6.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 6.5Phát âm: 6.0Ngữ pháp: 6.0Từ vựng: 6.0

Part 1

Do you work or are you a student?

Điểm: 75.0

Gợi ý: 你嘅回答基本上清晰,但語法上有少少錯誤,例如「I'm major in」應該係「I'm majoring in」或者「I major in」。另外,可以用更自然嘅表達方式,例如「I'm currently studying international business」會更流暢。

Ví dụ: I'm currently studying international business at university.

Where do you study?

Điểm: 80.0

Gợi ý: 你嘅回答簡潔明確,但可以避免使用縮寫(GD, UFS)因為考官可能唔熟悉。可以加多啲描述校園嘅特色,令回答更豐富。

Ví dụ: I study at Guangdong University of Foreign Studies, which has a beautiful campus with modern facilities.

Is it a good place to study?

Điểm: 70.0

Gợi ý: 你嘅回答有啲語法錯誤,例如「please peaceful」應該係「very peaceful」。另外,「walks」用得唔啱,應該係「work」或者「studies」。建議用連接詞令句子更流暢,例如「because... and... Additionally...」。

Ví dụ: Yes, it's a good place to study because the environment is very quiet and peaceful, which helps me concentrate better. Additionally, everyone around me is highly focused on their work, creating a productive atmosphere.

Would you like the place where you study to make any changes?

Điểm: 85.0

Gợi ý: 你嘅回答結構清晰,內容具體。不過可以用多啲連接詞令句子更自然,例如「because... so...」。另外,「tiny space」可以用「small space」會更自然。

Ví dụ: I wouldn't want any changes in the place where I study because I prefer a stable and quiet environment. I like to have a clean desk and a small space, so keeping everything the same helps me stay focused and productive.

What are your future study plans?

Điểm: 70.0

Gợi ý: 你嘅回答有語法錯誤,例如「I make may take」應該係「I may take」。另外,句子有啲冗長,可以分開講,並用連接詞令句子更流暢。

Ví dụ: I'm still considering my future study plans. I might study abroad to gain international experience, or I may take a master's entrance exam to continue my studies domestically. Both options have their advantages, so I need more time to decide.

Ngữ pháp

Present tense issue

× I'm currently a student and I'm major in international business.

I'm currently a student and I'm majoring in international business.

動詞 'major' 在此句中應使用現在分詞形式 'majoring' 來表示正在進行的動作。因為 'I'm' 是 'I am' 的縮寫,後面接動詞時需用動詞的現在分詞形式。

Incorrect use of prepositions

× I'm studying in GD, UFS, Guangdong University of Foreign Studies.

I'm studying at GD, UFS, Guangdong University of Foreign Studies.

在表示學習地點時,應使用介詞 'at' 而非 'in',因為 'at' 用於指明具體的學校或機構地點。

Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs

× Study, yes, it's a good place to study because the environment is very quiet and please peaceful which helps you concentrate better.

Study, yes, it's a good place to study because the environment is very quiet and peaceful which helps you concentrate better.

形容詞 'peaceful' 前不應加副詞 'please',這是誤用。應直接使用形容詞 'peaceful' 來描述環境。

Incorrect use of pronouns

× Additionally, everyone around me is highly focused on their walks and creating their atmosphere for study.

Additionally, everyone around me is highly focused on their work and creating their atmosphere for study.

此處 'walks' 應為 'work',因為語境中指的是學習或工作的專注,而非散步。這是詞彙選擇錯誤。

Modal verb usage

× I might study abroad to gain international experience or I make may take a master entrance exam to continue my study domestically depending on which option suits me better.

I might study abroad to gain international experience or I may take a master entrance exam to continue my study domestically depending on which option suits me better.

'make may take' 是錯誤的詞序,正確用法是 'may take',表示可能性。此處應刪除 'make',只保留 'may take'。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

BetterSuperior; More advantageous; To a higher standard
CleanBlank; Pure; Virtuous; Neat
ForeignOverseas; Unfamiliar
GoodFine; Virtuous; Well-behaved; Right; Capable
QuietSilent; Soft; Peaceful; Unobtrusive
WonderfulMarvelous
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