Study— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答较为完整，但表达略显复杂且不够自然。建议简化句子结构，避免使用过于正式或复杂的表达，使回答更口语化且流畅。

Ví dụ: I'm currently a postgraduate student studying higher education. I find it fascinating because it helps universities play a role in social development and global progress.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，且句子结构混乱。建议使用简单明了的句子，准确描述学校位置和环境。

Ví dụ: I study at Shanghai Jiaotong University, which is located in the southwest of Shanghai. The campus is very beautiful and peaceful, making it a great place to focus on my studies.

Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误和重复，表达不够连贯。建议使用连接词使句子更流畅，并具体说明设施如何帮助学习。

Ví dụ: Yes, definitely. There are many facilities like libraries and cafes that help us concentrate. Also, the campus provides various amenities to meet our daily needs.

Gợi ý: 回答内容丰富，但存在语法错误和表达不够自然的问题。建议注意动词形式和句子结构，使表达更准确流畅。

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like the school to offer more international opportunities, like exchange programs and global clubs. Also, inviting experts from around the world to give lectures would really broaden our horizons.

Gợi ý: 回答较好，但有些词汇使用重复且表达略显啰嗦。建议简化表达，避免重复词汇，使回答更自然。

Ví dụ: I'm in my final year of postgraduate study and plan to apply for a PhD program, possibly in the US or Hong Kong. I want to deepen my research and contribute meaningfully to my field.

× Well, now I'm sitting in the Shanghai Jiaotong University, which is located in the southwestern of Shanghai.

✓ Well, now I'm studying at Shanghai Jiaotong University, which is located in the southwest of Shanghai.

介词使用错误。'sit in'不适用于描述在大学学习，应该用'study at'。此外，'in the southwestern of Shanghai'应改为'in the southwest of Shanghai'，去掉定冠词'the'。

× It is a very beautiful campus for me to set it there calmly and dedicate it.

✓ It is a very beautiful campus where I can study calmly and dedicate myself.

句子结构和介词使用不当。'set it there calmly and dedicate it'表达不清，应改为'where I can study calmly and dedicate myself'，更符合表达意图。

× because there are a lot of complexes which can help us focus in our study as such as libraries and cafes, and it is there are a lot of facilities to fulfill our needs in our lives.

✓ because there are a lot of complexes which can help us focus on our study, such as libraries and cafes, and there are a lot of facilities to fulfill our needs in our lives.

介词使用错误。'focus in our study'应为'focus on our study'。'as such as'重复，应改为'such as'。'it is there are'多余，应删去。

× maybe school can inviting to more experts from all around the world to give lectures.

✓ maybe the school can invite more experts from all around the world to give lectures.

情态动词后应接动词原形，'can inviting'错误，应为'can invite'。

× maybe school can inviting to more experts from all around the world to give lectures.

✓ maybe the school can invite more experts from all around the world to give lectures.

缺少定冠词'the'，'school'作为单数名词前应加定冠词。

× I'm planning to apply for PhD program, maybe probably in the United States or Hong Kong, because I really want to deepen my research and make a meaningful contribution to this field.

✓ I'm planning to apply for a PhD program, maybe in the United States or Hong Kong, because I really want to deepen my research and make a meaningful contribution to this field.

'maybe probably'重复，建议只用一个。'PhD program'前应加不定冠词'a'。