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Part 1

Giám khảo

Do you work or are you a student?

Thí sinh

Currently I am a student in Norfolk High School and today I am 16 years old and I hope you can do it.

Giám khảo

Where do you study?

Thí sinh

I usually study in my schools or sometimes I study is my house or in my health teacher and I study it because I want to improve my skill of the project or in the homework. So I think it is a time I can improve my person.

Giám khảo

Is it a good place to study?

Thí sinh

Yes, well, I think this place is very good for me to study it because it's a very quiet place and very, very beautiful views. I can study and after I, I study house, I can look around them to relax my hair.

Giám khảo

Would you like the place where you study to make any changes?

Thí sinh

Hmm, I got, I got, I got to say as a play I, it is not changed because it is very good for the other student ask me to study it. Uh, it is very a quiet place and umm, make me study hard, uh, and uh, concentrate with the homeless and my.

Giám khảo

What are your future study plans?

Thí sinh

My future to study plan a year to be a tour guide. I study to to to study a communication skill and and a study about history as geography and play on the other words. And I think it is a time I can to study it because it's make me flexible and let's go in the job and I think I can do it.

Đánh giá

Tổng

Tổng: 5.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.5Phát âm: 5.0Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.0

Part 1

Do you work or are you a student?

Điểm: 50.0

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn nên tập trung trực tiếp vào câu hỏi và tránh thông tin không liên quan như tuổi tác hoặc mong muốn của người nghe. Hãy trả lời ngắn gọn, rõ ràng và tự nhiên hơn.

Ví dụ: I am currently a student at Norfolk High School.

Where do you study?

Điểm: 45.0

Gợi ý: Bạn nên sử dụng câu rõ ràng, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và sắp xếp ý hợp lý. Nên dùng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc và cụ thể hơn về địa điểm và lý do học tập.

Ví dụ: I usually study at school, but sometimes I study at home or with my health teacher because I want to improve my project and homework skills.

Is it a good place to study?

Điểm: 55.0

Gợi ý: Bạn nên tránh lặp từ và sử dụng từ vựng chính xác hơn. Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng, mạch lạc và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp để thể hiện ý tốt hơn.

Ví dụ: Yes, it is a good place to study because it is very quiet and has beautiful views, which help me relax after studying.

Would you like the place where you study to make any changes?

Điểm: 40.0

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp, tránh lặp từ và sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, có liên kết logic.

Ví dụ: I wouldn't want to change the place because it is quiet and helps me concentrate well.

What are your future study plans?

Điểm: 50.0

Gợi ý: Bạn nên trình bày kế hoạch học tập rõ ràng, tránh lặp từ và sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp. Câu trả lời nên có cấu trúc tốt và mạch lạc hơn.

Ví dụ: My future study plan is to become a tour guide. I want to improve my communication skills and learn about history and geography to prepare for the job.

Ngữ pháp

Present tense issue

× Currently I am a student in Norfolk High School and today I am 16 years old and I hope you can do it.

Currently, I am a student at Norfolk High School, and today I am 16 years old. I hope you can understand me.

The original sentence has awkward phrasing 'I hope you can do it' which is unclear. The correction clarifies the intended meaning. Also, 'in Norfolk High School' should be 'at Norfolk High School' (preposition correction, but since only grammar problems from the list are corrected, this is acceptable).

Singular and plural issue

× I usually study in my schools or sometimes I study is my house or in my health teacher and I study it because I want to improve my skill of the project or in the homework.

I usually study at my school, or sometimes I study at my house or with my health teacher, and I study because I want to improve my project skills or do my homework.

The original sentence has plural 'schools' which should be singular 'school' as the student likely refers to one school. Also, 'skill of the project' is corrected to 'project skills' to reflect plural skills. The sentence structure is improved for clarity.

Incorrect use of prepositions

× I usually study in my schools or sometimes I study is my house or in my health teacher and I study it because I want to improve my skill of the project or in the homework.

I usually study at my school, or sometimes I study at my house or with my health teacher, and I study because I want to improve my project skills or do my homework.

The prepositions 'in my schools' and 'in my health teacher' are incorrect. The correct prepositions are 'at my school' and 'with my health teacher'.

Incorrect use of pronouns

× I usually study in my schools or sometimes I study is my house or in my health teacher and I study it because I want to improve my skill of the project or in the homework.

I usually study at my school, or sometimes I study at my house or with my health teacher, and I study because I want to improve my project skills or do my homework.

The phrase 'I study is my house' is incorrect; 'is' should be omitted and replaced with 'at'. Also, 'I study it' is unnecessary and removed for clarity.

Incorrect use of pronouns

× So I think it is a time I can improve my person.

So I think it is a time I can improve myself.

The pronoun 'my person' is incorrect; the reflexive pronoun 'myself' should be used to indicate self-improvement.

Incorrect use of pronouns

× Yes, well, I think this place is very good for me to study it because it's a very quiet place and very, very beautiful views.

Yes, well, I think this place is very good for me to study because it's a very quiet place with very beautiful views.

The pronoun 'it' after 'study' is unnecessary and incorrect. Also, 'views' should be preceded by 'with' to connect properly.

Incorrect use of pronouns

× I can study and after I, I study house, I can look around them to relax my hair.

I can study, and after I study at home, I can look around to relax my mind.

'I study house' is incorrect; it should be 'I study at home'. 'Look around them' is unclear; 'look around' suffices. 'Relax my hair' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'relax my mind'.

Incorrect use of pronouns

× Hmm, I got, I got, I got to say as a play I, it is not changed because it is very good for the other student ask me to study it.

Hmm, I have to say as a place, it has not changed because it is very good for other students who ask me to study there.

'As a play' should be 'as a place'. 'It is not changed' should be 'it has not changed'. 'Other student ask me' should be 'other students who ask me'. 'Study it' should be 'study there'.

Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs

× Uh, it is very a quiet place and umm, make me study hard, uh, and uh, concentrate with the homeless and my.

Uh, it is a very quiet place and it helps me study hard and concentrate without distractions.

'Very a quiet place' is incorrect; the correct order is 'a very quiet place'. 'Concentrate with the homeless and my' is unclear and likely a misstatement; corrected to 'concentrate without distractions'.

Future tense issue

× My future to study plan a year to be a tour guide.

My future study plan is to become a tour guide within a year.

The original sentence lacks proper verb forms and structure. 'To study plan a year to be' is incorrect; corrected to 'study plan is to become'.

Verb + -ing form

× I study to to to study a communication skill and and a study about history as geography and play on the other words.

I plan to study communication skills and subjects like history and geography, and also learn other things.

The original sentence has repeated words and incorrect verb forms. 'Study to to to study' is incorrect. 'Play on the other words' is unclear and corrected to 'learn other things'.

Future tense issue

× And I think it is a time I can to study it because it's make me flexible and let's go in the job and I think I can do it.

And I think this is the time I can study because it will make me flexible and ready for the job, and I think I can do it.

The sentence has incorrect verb forms and tense usage. 'Can to study' should be 'can study'. 'It's make me' should be 'it will make me'. 'Let's go in the job' is incorrect; corrected to 'ready for the job'.

Từ vựng trọng tâm

BeautifulAttractive
GoodFine; Virtuous; Well-behaved; Right; Capable
HardFirm; Arduous; Difficult; Harsh; Strict
HighTall; High-ranking; Inflated; Strong; Favorable
OldElderly; Dilapidated; Worn; Antique; Mature
QuietSilent; Soft; Peaceful; Unobtrusive
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