Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you work or are you a student?
Thí sinh
I'm a student.
Giám khảo
Where do you study?
Thí sinh
At my home.
Giám khảo
Is it a good place to study?
Thí sinh
Yes.
Giám khảo
Would you like the place where you study to make any changes?
Thí sinh
Yes.
Giám khảo
What are your future study plans?
Thí sinh
And I plan to study at university and talk a lot.
Do you work or are you a student?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答过于简短,缺乏细节和扩展。建议在回答时加入更多信息,如学习的专业或年级,以使回答更自然和丰富。
Ví dụ: I'm a student currently studying computer science at university.
Where do you study?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答简单且缺乏细节。建议补充说明在家学习的具体环境或原因,使回答更具体和连贯。
Ví dụ: I usually study at my home because it's quiet and comfortable, which helps me concentrate better.
Is it a good place to study?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答过于简短,没有解释理由。建议在回答时加入原因和细节,使用连接词使回答更完整。
Ví dụ: Yes, it is a good place to study because it is quiet and free from distractions, so I can focus well.
Would you like the place where you study to make any changes?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 回答不完整,没有说明想要改变的具体内容。建议详细说明希望改变的方面及原因,使回答更具体和有说服力。
Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to have a bigger desk and better lighting to make studying more comfortable.
What are your future study plans?
Điểm: 30.0Gợi ý: 回答不连贯且含糊,语法错误明显。建议直接回答问题,清晰表达未来的学习计划,并避免无关内容。
Ví dụ: I plan to attend university to study engineering and hope to gain practical skills for my future career.
× And I plan to study at university and talk a lot.
✓ I plan to study at university and talk a lot.
句子开头不应使用连词“and”,因为它使句子结构不完整。应直接开始句子,保持句子完整性。
× And I plan to study at university and talk a lot.
✓ I plan to study at university and to talk a lot.
在并列动词短语中,保持结构一致性更清晰。这里“study”和“talk”应使用相同形式,建议在“talk”前加“to”。