Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you work or are you a student?
Thí sinh
Well, I'm currently a student in a well known high school high school in Ho Chi Minh City. It is a famous school and have a lot of effective methods to to teach students and from that I make students more hardworking in their work.
Giám khảo
Where do you study?
Thí sinh
Well, objectively speaking and study at the city in Ho Chi Minh City, it is a crime school. It have a lot of awards every year because of the successful methods in teaching and also it is a professional environment.
Giám khảo
Is it a good place to study?
Thí sinh
Umm, yes, of course it is. I think it is very, uh, exciting and rewarding to study at this place because this is a difficult school to uh, enroll it to enroll in because we have to take the umm, the night, then the night rate exam, uh, to have a higher score to earn it.
Giám khảo
Would you like the place where you study to make any changes?
Thí sinh
Well, I well yes, definitely I think total School should keep up the new method of teaching and also learn more the systematic knowledge to convey this effective information to their students quickly.
Giám khảo
What are your future study plans?
Thí sinh
Well, I intend to finish my high school by by the age of 18 and after that I will take the exam, take the IELTS exam test and after that I will take the SAT test and I will study at the University of Economics.
Do you work or are you a student?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn hơi dài dòng và có lỗi ngữ pháp, ví dụ như lặp từ "high school" và thiếu sự liên kết mạch lạc giữa các ý. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu đơn giản, tránh lặp từ và chú ý ngữ pháp để câu trả lời tự nhiên và hiệu quả hơn.
Ví dụ: I am currently a student at a well-known high school in Ho Chi Minh City. The school uses effective teaching methods that motivate students to work hard.
Where do you study?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không phù hợp như "crime school" thay vì "prestigious school". Bạn nên sử dụng từ vựng chính xác và câu trúc rõ ràng hơn để truyền đạt ý một cách chính xác và tự nhiên.
Ví dụ: I study at a prestigious high school in Ho Chi Minh City. It has won many awards due to its successful teaching methods and professional environment.
Is it a good place to study?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: Bạn nên tránh sử dụng nhiều từ ngữ thừa như "uhm", "uh" và nói rõ ràng hơn. Câu trả lời nên có cấu trúc rõ ràng, sử dụng liên từ để kết nối ý và tránh lặp từ. Hãy tập trung vào việc diễn đạt ý một cách mạch lạc và tự nhiên.
Ví dụ: Yes, it is a great place to study because it is very competitive. Students need to pass a difficult entrance exam, which makes studying here rewarding.
Would you like the place where you study to make any changes?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn có lỗi ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu chưa rõ ràng. Bạn nên sử dụng câu đơn giản, tránh lặp từ và diễn đạt ý rõ ràng hơn. Đồng thời, hãy sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.
Ví dụ: Yes, I think the school should continue to update its teaching methods and provide more systematic knowledge to help students learn more effectively.
What are your future study plans?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: Bạn nên tránh lặp từ như "take the exam, take the IELTS exam test" và sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, rõ ràng hơn. Hãy sắp xếp ý theo trình tự logic và dùng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc.
Ví dụ: I plan to finish high school by the age of 18. Then, I will take the IELTS and SAT exams before studying at the University of Economics.
× It is a famous school and have a lot of effective methods to to teach students and from that I make students more hardworking in their work.
✓ It is a famous school and has a lot of effective methods to teach students and from that I make students more hardworking in their work.
The subject 'It' is singular, so the verb should be 'has' instead of 'have' to agree in number.
× Well, objectively speaking and study at the city in Ho Chi Minh City, it is a crime school. It have a lot of awards every year because of the successful methods in teaching and also it is a professional environment.
✓ Well, objectively speaking and study at the city in Ho Chi Minh City, it is a crime school. It has a lot of awards every year because of the successful methods in teaching and also it is a professional environment.
The subject 'It' is singular, so the verb should be 'has' instead of 'have' to agree in number.