Study— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答较自然且信息完整，但句子较长且略显复杂，建议简化句子结构，避免使用过多从句，使表达更流畅。

Ví dụ: I'm not working or studying at the moment. I graduated last year and decided to take a gap year to relax and explore my interests.

Gợi ý: 回答简短且信息有限，建议增加更多细节，如学校的特点或学习环境，以丰富内容。

Ví dụ: I studied at a university in Shanghai, the biggest city in China, which offers a vibrant and diverse learning environment.

Gợi ý: 回答较好，表达了观点并提供了理由。可以通过使用连接词使句子更连贯。

Ví dụ: Yes, definitely. The academic atmosphere is strong because students are dedicated, and moreover, the teachers are friendly and patient.

Gợi ý: 回答具体且有内容，但句子较长，建议分句表达，并使用连接词增强逻辑性。

Ví dụ: To be honest, I don't like the educational administration website because it often crashes. However, students have to use it for important tasks like choosing classes and dormitories.

Gợi ý: 回答简洁明了，表达了目的。可以增加一些细节说明为什么选择硕士学位。

Ví dụ: I plan to apply for a master's degree to improve my skills and become more competitive in the job market.

× I plan to apply for a master degree because I want to be more competitive in the job market.

✓ I plan to apply for a master's degree because I want to be more competitive in the job market.

在英语中，表示学位时通常使用所有格形式，如“master's degree”，而不是“master degree”。这里缺少了所有格的撇号和s，导致用词不准确。建议记住学位名称的正确表达形式。该错误对应的语法问题类型ID是22。