Study— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains several hesitations and grammatical errors. Try to give a clear, concise response directly addressing the question, avoid filler words like 'uh', and organise your ideas logically. Use linking words to connect your points and provide specific details about your work and career plans.

Ví dụ: I have been working as a nurse for 15 years, which I really enjoy. Nursing was my major at university, and I have always dreamed of this career since I was a child. Currently, I am focused on advancing my skills and have several career plans to develop further in healthcare.

Gợi ý: Your answer is incomplete and lacks clarity. Avoid hesitations and repetition. Provide a direct answer with clear information about where you studied, what you studied, and any further education. Use linking words to make your answer coherent.

Ví dụ: I studied nursing at the University of Shahrukh about 20 years ago, where I earned my bachelor's degree. Later, I also attended the University of Seminar for further studies to enhance my knowledge.

Gợi ý: Your answer is generally clear but could be improved by using more precise vocabulary and linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Avoid informal phrases like 'hang out' in formal speaking tests. Provide specific examples of facilities or experiences that made the place good.

Ví dụ: Yes, it was a good place to study because the university provided excellent facilities such as well-equipped libraries and study rooms. Moreover, I often studied with my peers, which helped us share knowledge and prepare effectively for exams.

Gợi ý: Your answer addresses the question but contains many hesitations and incomplete sentences. Try to speak more fluently and organise your ideas clearly. Use linking words to explain why changes are needed and be specific about what improvements you suggest.

Ví dụ: At that time, the university lacked sufficient computers and internet access, which made researching specific topics difficult. I believe adding more computers and online resources would greatly improve the learning experience.

Gợi ý: Your answer is unclear and contains repetition and incomplete sentences. Focus on giving a clear, structured response. Avoid repeating words and finish your sentences. Use linking words to explain your plans logically and provide specific details about your future study goals.

Ví dụ: I plan to immigrate to another country where I hope to work in a hospital. After settling there, I intend to pursue a Master of Science degree to further my education because I am passionate about studying and advancing my career.

× I have lots of career plan and during my workplace and I cure patient and treat them.

✓ I have lots of career plans and during my work I cure patients and treat them.

The noun 'plan' should be plural 'plans' to agree with 'lots of'. 'Workplace' is incorrect here; 'work' is appropriate. 'Patient' should be plural 'patients' because it refers to multiple individuals.

× So by hard working I could.

✓ So by hard work I could.

The phrase 'by hard working' is incorrect; the noun form 'hard work' should be used here to express the means by which the action was achieved.

× If I'm not mistaken, it was uh 20 years ago I got admitted to University of Shahrukh and my major advisor nursing umm by hard working I could pass pass my exam and earn my bachelor degree.

✓ If I'm not mistaken, it was about 20 years ago that I was admitted to the University of Shahrukh and my major was nursing. By hard work, I was able to pass my exams and earn my bachelor's degree.

The phrase 'got admitted' is better expressed as 'was admitted' in formal contexts. 'My major advisor nursing' is unclear; it should be 'my major was nursing'. 'By hard working' should be 'by hard work'. 'Pass pass' is a repetition error. 'Bachelor degree' should be 'bachelor's degree'.

× Then I got admitted to university of seminar and I got.

✓ Then I was admitted to the University of Seminar and I...

Again, 'got admitted' should be 'was admitted'. The sentence is incomplete, but correction is made for the existing part.

× Yes, it was really good enough because we had lots of facilities during university time.

✓ Yes, it was really good enough because we had lots of facilities during university time.

No correction needed here for singular/plural; sentence is acceptable.

× I could hang out with my friends and peers, we could study with each other and share our information and knowledge and experience.

✓ I could hang out with my friends and peers; we could study together and share our information, knowledge, and experience.

The phrase 'study with each other' is better expressed as 'study together'. Also, commas are needed to separate items in a list.

× So it helped us to pass our exams and we help each other to learn better.

✓ So it helped us to pass our exams and we helped each other to learn better.

The verb tense should be consistent; 'help' should be past tense 'helped' to match 'helped us'.

× To answer your question, I recall that on that time we didn't have, uh, lots of, uh, computers.

✓ To answer your question, I recall that at that time we didn't have many computers.

The phrase 'on that time' is incorrect; 'at that time' is the correct prepositional phrase. Also, 'lots of' is informal; 'many' is more appropriate here.

× And we didn't have enough, uh, books, uh, on that time, umm, uh, I believe that there should be lots of, uh, computers and Internet and, uh.

✓ And we didn't have enough books at that time. I believe there should be lots of computers and internet access.

'On that time' should be 'at that time'. 'Internet' should be 'internet access' or 'internet facilities' for clarity.

× To be honest, I decided to immigrate in other countries and as soon as I arrived there, I want to immigrate.

✓ To be honest, I decided to immigrate to other countries and as soon as I arrive there, I want to work.

The verb 'immigrate' is followed by 'to' not 'in'. Also, 'as soon as I arrived' should be 'as soon as I arrive' to match the future intention. 'I want to immigrate' is repetitive; likely 'I want to work' is intended.

× I want to employ in hospital and then I prefer to earn a Master of Science degree and pursue my education because I like to study a lot and I like to have a.

✓ I want to be employed in a hospital and then I prefer to earn a Master of Science degree and pursue my education because I like to study a lot and I want to have a...

The verb 'employ' is incorrect here; 'be employed' is correct. 'In hospital' should be 'in a hospital'. The sentence is incomplete but corrected for existing parts.