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Part 1

Giám khảo

Do you work or are you a student?

Thí sinh

Absolutely, I just graduated from school and I don't participate in job now, but I believe in the near future I will participate in job because I'm finding a job suitable for me.

Giám khảo

Where do you study?

Thí sinh

Well, my school is located in Guangdong province and is in the southeast of China. Our school is in the Jiaoqing city and in the countryside it have magnificent.

Giám khảo

Is it a good place to study?

Thí sinh

Absolutely yes, because our school is located in the countryside area and it's quite enough for students to concentrate on and our schools have a big library and many seats for students to.

Giám khảo

Would you like the place where you study to make any changes?

Thí sinh

Actually the place I study now is good enough. It has abundant resources for us to search and also I feel I'm lucky enough to have this place to study. I always spend my weekends on the library now.

Giám khảo

What are your future study plans?

Thí sinh

In fact, I hope I can pass this text and apply for abroad school and I want to apply a good majors in about English. I feel I'm interested in English and.

Đánh giá

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Tổng: 6.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 6.0Phát âm: 6.0Ngữ pháp: 5.5Từ vựng: 6.0

Part 1

Do you work or are you a student?

Điểm: 65.0

Gợi ý: 回答时应避免语法错误和不自然表达,如“participate in job”应改为“have a job”或“work”。建议简洁明了地表达当前状态和未来计划。

Ví dụ: I have just graduated from school and I am currently looking for a suitable job. I hope to start working soon.

Where do you study?

Điểm: 60.0

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清,如“it have magnificent”不完整。建议使用完整句子描述地点特点,并注意主谓一致。

Ví dụ: My school is located in Jiaoqing city, Guangdong province, in the southeast of China. It is situated in the countryside, which is very beautiful.

Is it a good place to study?

Điểm: 62.0

Gợi ý: 回答应更流畅,避免不完整句子,如“many seats for students to”未完成。建议用连贯句子详细说明学习环境的优点。

Ví dụ: Yes, it is a good place to study because it is quiet and peaceful. The school has a large library with many seats, which helps students focus on their studies.

Would you like the place where you study to make any changes?

Điểm: 70.0

Gợi ý: 回答较好,但“abundant resources for us to search”表达不自然。建议使用更准确的词汇,如“resources to use”。

Ví dụ: I am satisfied with my school because it has plenty of resources for us to use. I often spend my weekends in the library studying.

What are your future study plans?

Điểm: 55.0

Gợi ý: 回答语法错误较多,表达不完整。建议简洁明了地说明计划,避免语法错误和不完整句子。

Ví dụ: I hope to pass this test and apply to a university abroad. I want to major in English because I am very interested in the language.

Ngữ pháp

Modal verb usage

× I don't participate in job now, but I believe in the near future I will participate in job because I'm finding a job suitable for me.

I don't have a job now, but I believe in the near future I will get a job because I'm looking for a job suitable for me.

这里“participate in job”用法不正确,应该用“have a job”或“get a job”表示“有工作”或“找到工作”。此外,“I'm finding a job”应改为“I'm looking for a job”,因为“find”是找到的意思,进行时态用“look for”更合适。

Singular and plural issue

× Our school is in the Jiaoqing city and in the countryside it have magnificent.

Our school is in Jiaoqing city and in the countryside it is magnificent.

“Jiaoqing city”前不需要冠词“the”,且“it have”主谓不一致,应为“it has”或“it is”,这里用“it is magnificent”更合适。

Singular and plural issue

× Our school is in the Jiaoqing city and in the countryside it have magnificent.

Our school is in Jiaoqing city and in the countryside it is magnificent.

“have”与主语“it”不一致,应使用第三人称单数形式“has”或“is”。

Singular and plural issue

× our schools have a big library and many seats for students to.

Our school has a big library and many seats for students.

前文提到的是单数“our school”,这里应保持一致,使用单数形式“has”。句尾“for students to”不完整,应去掉“to”。

Incorrect use of prepositions

× I always spend my weekends on the library now.

I always spend my weekends in the library now.

表示在某个建筑物内时,应该用介词“in”而不是“on”。

Modal verb usage

× In fact, I hope I can pass this text and apply for abroad school and I want to apply a good majors in about English.

In fact, I hope I can pass this test and apply to a school abroad, and I want to apply for a good major in English.

“apply for abroad school”用法错误,应为“apply to a school abroad”;“apply a good majors”应为“apply for a good major”;“in about English”应为“in English”。此外,“text”应为“test”。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

BigLarge; Elder; Important; Ambitious
GoodFine; Virtuous; Well-behaved; Right; Capable
InterestedAttentive; Concerned; Partisan
LuckyFortunate; Providential
ManyNumerous; A great/good deal of
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