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Part 1

Giám khảo

Do you work or are you a student?

Thí sinh

I'm neither of them now. I graduated from university one year ago and I don't have any plans to look for a job. This year is my gap year for taking a break and exploring my interests.

Giám khảo

Where do you study?

Thí sinh

My school is located in Shanghai, which is the biggest city in China.

Giám khảo

Is it a good place to study?

Thí sinh

Yeah, definitely. My school has a stronger academic atmosphere because students are very dedicated and teachers are both friendly and patient.

Giám khảo

Would you like the place where you study to make any changes?

Thí sinh

To be honest, I don't like the educational administration website because it often crashes, but students have to use it to complete tasks like choosing classes and dormitories.

Giám khảo

What are your future study plans?

Thí sinh

I plan to apply for a masters degree because I want to be more competitive in the job market.

Đánh giá

Tổng

Tổng: 7.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 7.0Phát âm: 7.0Ngữ pháp: 7.0Từ vựng: 7.0

Part 1

Do you work or are you a student?

Điểm: 85.0

Gợi ý: 回答较为自然且信息完整,但句子较长且略显复杂,建议简化句子结构,避免冗长,使表达更流畅。

Ví dụ: I'm not working or studying at the moment. I graduated last year and decided to take a gap year to relax and explore my interests.

Where do you study?

Điểm: 80.0

Gợi ý: 回答直接且信息明确,但内容较为简单,建议增加一些细节描述,使回答更丰富。

Ví dụ: I studied at a university in Shanghai, the biggest city in China, known for its vibrant culture and economic opportunities.

Is it a good place to study?

Điểm: 88.0

Gợi ý: 回答自然且内容具体,但可以使用更多连接词使句子更连贯,同时丰富词汇表达。

Ví dụ: Yes, definitely. The academic atmosphere is strong because students are very dedicated, and the teachers are both friendly and patient, which creates a supportive learning environment.

Would you like the place where you study to make any changes?

Điểm: 90.0

Gợi ý: 回答具体且有个人观点,表达清晰。建议在句子间加入连接词,使表达更流畅。

Ví dụ: To be honest, I don't like the educational administration website because it often crashes. However, students have to use it to complete important tasks like choosing classes and dormitories.

What are your future study plans?

Điểm: 85.0

Gợi ý: 回答简洁明了,但可以增加一些细节说明原因或计划,使内容更丰富。

Ví dụ: I plan to apply for a master's degree next year because I believe it will help me gain advanced skills and be more competitive in the job market.

Ngữ pháp

Singular and plural issue

× I plan to apply for a masters degree because I want to be more competitive in the job market.

I plan to apply for a master's degree because I want to be more competitive in the job market.

“masters degree”应为“master's degree”,因为这里表示“硕士学位”,需要使用所有格形式“master's”来修饰“degree”,这是英语中表示学位名称的正确用法。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

FriendlyAffable; Amicable; Favorable; Compatible
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