Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you work or are you a student?
Thí sinh
Actually, I'm neither working nor studying at the moment. I'm currently helping my parents with housework at home because they need some support. In the future I plan to find a job or continue my studies.
Giám khảo
Where do you study?
Thí sinh
Actually, I'm not a student.
Giám khảo
Is it a good place to study?
Thí sinh
I don't know 'cause I'm not a student.
Giám khảo
Would you like the place where you study to make any changes?
Thí sinh
No, I don't because I don't have a place to study. I'm at home with my parents.
Giám khảo
What are your future study plans?
Thí sinh
I'm not sure in the future, maybe I will pass the Chinese Unified qualification exam for legal professionals and I will study for these in my home.
Do you work or are you a student?
Điểm: 85.0Gợi ý: 你的回答较为自然且内容完整,但可以更简洁,避免重复表达未来计划。建议在表达未来计划时,使用更具体的词汇和句式,使回答更流畅。
Ví dụ: I'm currently not working or studying; instead, I help my parents with housework as they need support. In the future, I plan to either find a job or resume my studies to advance my career.
Where do you study?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答直接但过于简短,缺乏细节。建议即使不学习,也可以简短说明原因或当前状态,使回答更丰富。
Ví dụ: I'm not currently a student, so I don't have a specific place where I study.
Is it a good place to study?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答过于简单且口语化,缺乏正式表达。建议用更正式的表达方式,并尝试提供理由或相关信息。
Ví dụ: I can't say because I'm not currently studying anywhere.
Would you like the place where you study to make any changes?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: 回答中表达了没有学习地点,但句子结构可以更自然流畅。建议用更连贯的句子表达自己的情况。
Ví dụ: I don't have a specific place to study since I'm at home helping my parents, so I don't have any changes to suggest.
What are your future study plans?
Điểm: 80.0Gợi ý: 回答表达了未来计划,但句子结构稍显笨拙。建议使用更自然的表达方式,并适当使用连接词使句子更流畅。
Ví dụ: I'm not certain about my future plans, but I might take the Chinese Unified Qualification Exam for legal professionals and prepare for it at home.
× Actually, I'm neither working nor studying at the moment.
✓ Actually, I'm neither working nor studying at the moment.
该句中“neither...nor...”结构使用正确,动词形式符合现在进行时态,无需修改。
× In the future I plan to find a job or continue my studies.
✓ In the future, I plan to find a job or continue my studies.
句中“plan to”用法正确,表达未来计划,符合语法规则。仅需在“In the future”后加逗号以符合书面表达习惯。
× I don't know 'cause I'm not a student.
✓ I don't know because I'm not a student.
“'cause”是口语缩写,正式书面语中应使用“because”。
× No, I don't because I don't have a place to study.
✓ No, I don't because I don't have a place to study.
句中“don't”用法正确,表达否定回答,无语法错误。
× I'm not sure in the future, maybe I will pass the Chinese Unified qualification exam for legal professionals and I will study for these in my home.
✓ I'm not sure about the future; maybe I will pass the Chinese Unified Qualification Exam for legal professionals and study for it at home.
“in the future”前应加介词“about”以表达对未来的不确定;“these”指代不明确,改为“it”指代考试;“study for these in my home”改为“study for it at home”更自然。