Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you work or are you a student?
Thí sinh
I am currently a student.
Giám khảo
Where do you study?
Thí sinh
I study in the Beijing International Studies University and I major in Economy.
Giám khảo
Is it a good place to study?
Thí sinh
Yes, because our university is known for its diverse international programs and it demands students to study the your major and other language subject at the same time.
Giám khảo
Would you like the place where you study to make any changes?
Thí sinh
Yes, as I said before, our school requires us to study the nature and another language subjects simultaneously, so I can have a wide of opportunities to express myself in other languages.
Giám khảo
What are your future study plans?
Thí sinh
I want to study further so I'm prepared to take a post graduate entrance exam in a year and to learn more about economy.
Do you work or are you a student?
Điểm: 80.0Gợi ý: 回答简洁明了,但可以稍微丰富内容,使回答更自然流畅。建议在回答中加入学习的领域或年级等信息。
Ví dụ: I am currently a student, studying economics at university.
Where do you study?
Điểm: 85.0Gợi ý: 回答基本符合要求,但语法上有小错误,'in' 应改为 'at','Economy' 应为 'Economics'。建议注意介词和专业名称的正确使用。
Ví dụ: I study at Beijing International Studies University, majoring in Economics.
Is it a good place to study?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: 回答内容有些重复且表达不够清晰,'the your major' 是错误表达。建议简化句子结构,避免重复,并使用连词使句子更连贯。
Ví dụ: Yes, it is a good place to study because the university offers diverse international programs and requires students to study their major alongside a foreign language.
Would you like the place where you study to make any changes?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清,如 'study the nature' 和 'a wide of opportunities'。建议使用更准确的词汇和表达,并避免重复前文内容。
Ví dụ: Yes, I would like the university to offer more flexible course options so that I can focus more on my major while still improving my language skills.
What are your future study plans?
Điểm: 80.0Gợi ý: 回答表达了计划,但语法和用词有待改进,如 'post graduate' 应为 'postgraduate','economy' 应为 'Economics'。建议使用更准确的词汇和连贯的句子结构。
Ví dụ: I plan to continue my studies by preparing for the postgraduate entrance exam next year to deepen my knowledge of Economics.
× I study in the Beijing International Studies University and I major in Economy.
✓ I study at Beijing International Studies University and I major in Economics.
在英语中,大学名称前通常不加冠词“the”,除非名称本身包含冠词。此外,专业名称应使用复数形式或标准表达,如“Economics”而非“Economy”。
× I study in the Beijing International Studies University and I major in Economy.
✓ I study at Beijing International Studies University and I major in Economics.
表示学习地点时,通常用介词“at”而非“in”。
× it demands students to study the your major and other language subject at the same time.
✓ it requires students to study their major and other language subjects at the same time.
“demands”用法不当,通常用“requires”表示要求;“the your”是错误的重复冠词和代词;“subject”应为复数“subjects”,因为有多个语言科目。
× it demands students to study the your major and other language subject at the same time.
✓ it requires students to study their major and other language subjects at the same time.
“the your”是错误的冠词和代词搭配,应使用“their”表示所属关系。
× so I can have a wide of opportunities to express myself in other languages.
✓ so I can have a wide range of opportunities to express myself in other languages.
“a wide of opportunities”结构错误,应使用固定搭配“a wide range of opportunities”。
× our school requires us to study the nature and another language subjects simultaneously, so I can have a wide of opportunities to express myself in other languages.
✓ our school requires us to study natural science and another language subject simultaneously, so I can have a wide range of opportunities to express myself in other languages.
“study the nature”表达不准确,应改为“study natural science”或类似表达;“another language subjects”中“another”用于单数,后接复数“subjects”不匹配,应改为单数“subject”。
× our school requires us to study the nature and another language subjects simultaneously, so I can have a wide of opportunities to express myself in other languages.
✓ our school requires us to study natural science and another language subject simultaneously, so I can have a wide range of opportunities to express myself in other languages.
“another”后应接单数名词,且“subjects”应为单数“subject”,保持数的一致。
× I want to study further so I'm prepared to take a post graduate entrance exam in a year and to learn more about economy.
✓ I want to study further so I'm preparing to take a postgraduate entrance exam in a year and to learn more about economics.
“I'm prepared”表示已经准备好,语境应为正在准备,故用现在进行时“I'm preparing”;“post graduate”应连写为“postgraduate”;“economy”应为专业名称“economics”。