Study— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is relevant but a bit long and slightly unclear. Try to be more concise and directly answer the question first, then add supporting details. Also, avoid redundancy and improve sentence structure for clarity.

Ví dụ: I recently finished high school in April. Currently, I am focusing on improving my language and daily life skills because they will help me in the future.

Gợi ý: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Make sure to clearly state the name of your school and where you study now. Use simple and correct sentences to express your ideas.

Ví dụ: I studied at Apes Country Christian Public School, which is well-known in my city. Now, I am learning new skills at a coaching center and also taking culinary classes at a home group.

Gợi ý: Your answer shows positive feelings but has some unclear phrases and grammar mistakes. Use clearer vocabulary and correct sentence structures. Also, try to use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Ví dụ: Yes, it is a great place to study because of the friendly environment and supportive people. Moreover, the peaceful atmosphere helps me to relax and focus better.

Gợi ý: Your answer is incomplete and unclear. Make sure to fully express your ideas with proper grammar. Explain clearly what changes you want and why, using linking words to connect your points.

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like my coaching center to improve its use of technology. Since the world is advancing rapidly, updating the technology there would help students learn more effectively.

Gợi ý: Your answer conveys your goal but has grammatical errors and unclear phrases. Use correct sentence structures and clearer vocabulary. Also, try to connect your ideas logically.

Ví dụ: My future study plan is to pursue a career in health care. I want to become a successful nurse so that I can help patients live healthier lives.

× I just completed my high school in April and now I'm working on my language skills and daily life skills as they will benefit me in the future.

✓ I completed my high school in April and now I'm working on my language skills and daily life skills as they will benefit me in the future.

The use of 'just completed' is acceptable in informal speech, but 'just' is unnecessary here and can be omitted for clarity and correctness in formal contexts.

× I used to study and Apes Country school grew her Christian public school.

✓ I used to study at Apes Country School, a Christian public school.

The original sentence is unclear and incorrectly structured. 'Grew her' is incorrect and does not fit the context. The corrected sentence clarifies the school name and type with proper preposition and structure.

× It is a very popular school in my city and now I am learning my skills from a coaching center and culinary skills from a Home group.

✓ It is a very popular school in my city, and now I am learning language skills at a coaching center and culinary skills from a home group.

The phrase 'learning my skills from' is incorrect; 'learning skills at/from' is more appropriate. Also, 'Home group' should not be capitalized unless it is a proper noun; 'home group' is better.

× Yes, it is a very good place to study becauses of the environment and the people there.

✓ Yes, it is a very good place to study because of the environment and the people there.

The word 'becauses' is a misspelling of 'because'. Correct spelling is necessary for clarity and correctness.

× I'm really acquittance of all the beings standing there.

✓ I'm really acquainted with all the people there.

'Acquittance' is a noun meaning a release from obligation, but the intended word is 'acquainted', an adjective meaning familiar. Also, 'beings standing there' is unnatural; 'people there' is appropriate.

× Also the relaxation environment gives serenity to my soul.

✓ Also, the relaxing environment gives serenity to my soul.

'Relaxation environment' is incorrect; the adjective form 'relaxing' should be used to describe the environment.

× Yes, and the world of technology, decentralization and innovation.

✓ Yes, with the world of technology, decentralization, and innovation evolving rapidly,

The original sentence is incomplete and lacks a main verb or clause. The correction provides a proper sentence structure.

× I think my coaching center is left behind in technology, so I want to enhance the technology there an.

✓ I think my coaching center is left behind in technology, so I want to enhance the technology there.

The word 'an' at the end is unnecessary and incorrect. The sentence is corrected by removing it.

× My future study plans is to do something in health care.

✓ My future study plans are to do something in health care.

'Plans' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is' to agree in number.

× I as I wanted to become a very successful nurse and so that I can help my patients and other human beings to have a battle healthcare and healthier life time.

✓ I want to become a very successful nurse so that I can help my patients and other human beings to have better healthcare and a healthier lifetime.

The phrase 'I as I wanted' is incorrect and redundant; 'I want' is appropriate. 'Battle healthcare' is incorrect; likely intended 'better healthcare'. 'Healthier lifetime' is more natural than 'healthier life time'.