Study— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答时应注意语法完整性，使用冠词和介词，使表达更自然流畅。例如，应该说“I am a student majoring in finance.”

Ví dụ: I am a student majoring in finance at university.

Gợi ý: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够自然。应使用正确的时态和介词，如“I am studying at George Youngstown University, which is very close to my home.”

Ví dụ: I am studying at George Youngstown University, which is very close to my home.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在拼写错误和语法问题，且句子连接不够自然。建议使用连接词并注意拼写，如“Moreover, there are many students and teachers, and they are all very kind and supportive.”

Ví dụ: Yes, my school is a very peaceful and quiet place to study. Moreover, there are many students and teachers, and they are all very kind and supportive.

Gợi ý: 回答表达不清晰，语法和词汇使用错误较多。建议简化句子结构，明确表达观点，如“I think the food in the canteen is not very delicious and lacks variety. I hope they can improve the quality and offer more healthy options.”

Ví dụ: I think the food in the canteen is not very delicious and lacks variety. I hope they can improve the quality and offer more healthy options.

Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误和拼写错误，表达不够准确。建议使用正确的时态和词汇，如“I don't really enjoy my current major in finance because it focuses too much on numbers and lacks creativity. In the future, I would like to switch to studying psychology because I am very interested in understanding human behavior.”

Ví dụ: I don't really enjoy my current major in finance because it focuses too much on numbers and lacks creativity. In the future, I would like to switch to studying psychology because I am very interested in understanding human behavior.

× I'm student and majoring finance.

✓ I'm a student and majoring in finance.

这里缺少冠词'a'，因为'student'是单数可数名词，前面需要加冠词。并且'majoring'后面需要加介词'in'来连接专业名称。

× I'm starting in George Youngstown University, which is very close in my home.

✓ I'm starting at George Youngstown University, which is very close to my home.

介词使用错误，'start'后面应使用'at'表示地点，'close'后面应使用'to'表示接近。

× Yes, my school is very peaceful and quiet place to study.

✓ Yes, my school is a very peaceful and quiet place to study.

'place'是单数可数名词，前面需要加冠词'a'。

× More over there are manning students and teacher and they're all very kind and supportive.

✓ Moreover, there are many students and teachers and they're all very kind and supportive.

'manning'应为'many'表示数量，'students'和'teachers'应为复数形式。

× I think the food in the container's not very delicious and cheap.

✓ I think the food in the canteen's not very delicious and cheap.

'container'指容器，不是食堂，正确词应为'canteen'。

× Because a slag variety and the freshness I would like to listen to improve the quality and offer more healthy options.

✓ Because of a large variety and freshness, I would like to see improvements in quality and more healthy options offered.

'slag'应为'large'，'variety'前应加冠词'a'，句子结构不完整，需调整表达。

× I would like to listen to improve the quality and offer more healthy options.

✓ I would like to see improvements in quality and more healthy options offered.

'listen to'用法错误，应使用'like to see'表达希望看到改进。

× Actually, I don't really enjoy my current major in finance because it feel to focus on numbers and lack creativity.

✓ Actually, I don't really enjoy my current major in finance because it feels too focused on numbers and lacks creativity.

主语'it'为第三人称单数，谓语动词应加's'，'feel to focus'表达错误，应为'feels too focused'。

× because it feel to focus on numbers and lack creativity.

✓ because it feels too focused on numbers and lacks creativity.

'feel'应为'feels'，'to focus'应为'focused'，'too'表示程度副词。

× because it feel to focus on numbers and lack creativity.

✓ because it feels too focused on numbers and lacks creativity.

'lack'应为第三人称单数'lacks'，与主语一致。

× because it feel to focus on numbers and lack creativity.

✓ because it feels too focused on numbers and lacks creativity.

形容词和副词使用错误，需用'feels too focused'和'lacks'。

× In the future I would like to switch to studying psychology because I'm very interesting in understanding human beefy behave.

✓ In the future, I would like to switch to studying psychology because I'm very interested in understanding human behavior.

'interesting'应为' interested'，'beefy behave'拼写错误，应为'behavior'。