Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you work or are you a student?
Thí sinh
Well, I am currently a high school student located in Henan province. I fart it actually are demanding year because it's my final year before graduation. And what rights has increased significantly compared to the previous years?
Giám khảo
Where do you study?
Thí sinh
Well I am studying at high school with located in Hong Ian province are is sees a good play from me to study because the teachers as productive Anne Frank Sillitti here are so good.
Giám khảo
Is it a good place to study?
Thí sinh
Of course it says really good place to study because of. Their environment here so confortable with modern classroom Manuel equipment with like loading more insurable.
Giám khảo
Would you like the place where you study to make any changes?
Thí sinh
Well, I think my score will be more up Chris, if it's our improve about their campus an the schedule an open markup to student.
Giám khảo
What are your future study plans?
Thí sinh
I plan to revise and strengthen my knowledge before registering at my favorite university because I want to be well prepared for my studies are. Additionally, I hope to learn a foreign language such as Chinese are French to improve my communication skills an increased my opportunity is.
Do you work or are you a student?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và chính xác hơn, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không phù hợp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, tránh nói lan man hoặc dùng từ sai nghĩa. Hãy sử dụng câu đơn giản, đúng ngữ pháp và tránh lỗi phát âm.
Ví dụ: I am currently a high school student in Henan province. This is a demanding year because it is my final year before graduation.
Where do you study?
Điểm: 35.0Gợi ý: Bạn cần trả lời câu hỏi một cách rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và phát âm. Hãy sử dụng câu đơn giản, đúng ngữ pháp và thêm chi tiết cụ thể để làm câu trả lời phong phú hơn.
Ví dụ: I study at a high school in Henan province. It is a good place for me to learn because the teachers are very dedicated and supportive.
Is it a good place to study?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: Bạn nên sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và phát âm. Hãy mô tả cụ thể hơn về môi trường học tập và sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp để câu trả lời tự nhiên và hiệu quả hơn.
Ví dụ: Yes, it is a great place to study because the environment is comfortable and the classrooms are equipped with modern facilities.
Would you like the place where you study to make any changes?
Điểm: 30.0Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và có cấu trúc hơn. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi và sử dụng từ vựng chính xác. Bạn nên giải thích cụ thể những thay đổi bạn muốn và lý do tại sao.
Ví dụ: I would like the school to improve the campus facilities and make the schedule more flexible for students.
What are your future study plans?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: Bạn đã trả lời khá tốt nhưng cần chú ý ngữ pháp và phát âm. Hãy sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và liên kết các ý một cách mạch lạc hơn để câu trả lời tự nhiên và hiệu quả.
Ví dụ: I plan to review and strengthen my knowledge before applying to my favorite university to be well prepared. Additionally, I hope to learn a foreign language like Chinese or French to improve my communication skills and increase my opportunities.
× I fart it actually are demanding year because it's my final year before graduation.
✓ I find it actually a demanding year because it's my final year before graduation.
The verb 'fart' is incorrect and should be 'find' to express opinion. Also, 'are' is incorrect for singular subject 'year'; it should be 'is'. This is a present tense issue where the verb form does not match the subject and intended meaning.
× And what rights has increased significantly compared to the previous years?
✓ And my workload has increased significantly compared to the previous years.
The phrase 'what rights' is incorrect and unclear; likely intended 'workload'. The verb 'has increased' is correct for singular subject. This is a present tense issue with incorrect word choice affecting meaning.
× Well I am studying at high school with located in Hong Ian province are is sees a good play from me to study because the teachers as productive Anne Frank Sillitti here are so good.
✓ Well, I am studying at a high school located in Henan province. It is a good place for me to study because the teachers here are so good and productive.
The original sentence is fragmented and contains many errors including incorrect prepositions and unclear phrases. The correction restructures the sentence for clarity and grammatical correctness, addressing sentence structure errors.
× Well I am studying at high school with located in Hong Ian province are is sees a good play from me to study because the teachers as productive Anne Frank Sillitti here are so good.
✓ Well, I am studying at a high school located in Henan province. It is a good place for me to study because the teachers here are so good and productive.
The phrase 'with located in' is incorrect; the correct preposition is omitted. Also, 'play from me' is incorrect; it should be 'place for me'. This is an incorrect use of prepositions causing confusion.
× Well I am studying at high school with located in Hong Ian province are is sees a good play from me to study because the teachers as productive Anne Frank Sillitti here are so good.
✓ Well, I am studying at a high school located in Henan province. It is a good place for me to study because the teachers here are so good and productive.
The pronouns and references are unclear and incorrect, such as 'are is sees' and 'as productive Anne Frank Sillitti'. Correct pronouns and clearer references improve sentence clarity.
× Of course it says really good place to study because of. Their environment here so confortable with modern classroom Manuel equipment with like loading more insurable.
✓ Of course, it is a really good place to study because of the environment here, which is so comfortable with modern classrooms and manual equipment, like loading more insurable.
The pronoun 'their' is incorrectly used to refer to the environment; 'the' is appropriate. Also, the sentence is fragmented and unclear, needing restructuring for clarity.
× Of course it says really good place to study because of. Their environment here so confortable with modern classroom Manuel equipment with like loading more insurable.
✓ Of course, it is a really good place to study because the environment here is so comfortable with modern classrooms and manual equipment, like loading more insurable.
The adjective 'confortable' is misspelled; correct spelling is 'comfortable'. Also, 'Manuel' should be 'manual'. Correct spelling of adjectives is important for clarity.
× Well, I think my score will be more up Chris, if it's our improve about their campus an the schedule an open markup to student.
✓ Well, I think my score will improve if the campus, schedule, and opportunities for students are improved.
The original sentence is unclear and contains many errors including incorrect words and structure. The correction simplifies and clarifies the intended meaning, fixing sentence structure errors.
× Well, I think my score will be more up Chris, if it's our improve about their campus an the schedule an open markup to student.
✓ Well, I think my score will improve if the campus, schedule, and opportunities for students are improved.
The pronouns 'it's our' and 'their' are incorrectly used. Correct pronouns and possessive adjectives are necessary for clarity.
× I plan to revise and strengthen my knowledge before registering at my favorite university because I want to be well prepared for my studies are.
✓ I plan to revise and strengthen my knowledge before registering at my favorite university because I want to be well prepared for my studies.
The phrase 'studies are' is incorrect; 'studies' alone suffices. This is a present tense issue with unnecessary verb 'are' at the end.
× Additionally, I hope to learn a foreign language such as Chinese are French to improve my communication skills an increased my opportunity is.
✓ Additionally, I hope to learn a foreign language such as Chinese or French to improve my communication skills and increase my opportunities.
The conjunction 'are' is incorrect; it should be 'or'. Also, 'an increased my opportunity is' is incorrect; it should be 'and increase my opportunities'. Correct conjunctions and verb forms are necessary for clarity.