Study— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答不够流畅且有语法错误，表达不够清晰。建议简洁明了地回答问题，避免语法错误，并且句子结构完整。

Ví dụ: I am currently a student majoring in computer science at the University of Chinese Academy of Sciences. In the future, I hope to pursue a postdoctoral degree in the UK or Australia.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不准确的问题，建议使用正确的语法和更具体的细节来说明选择学校的原因。

Ví dụ: I study at a well-known university in Beijing that specializes in cybersecurity. I chose this school because it has abundant resources and many famous professors who inspire me to think critically.

Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误和表达不完整，建议使用连贯的句子并补充具体细节，使回答更完整和自然。

Ví dụ: Yes, my school has a great environment surrounded by large green areas, which creates a peaceful atmosphere for research and study. Additionally, there are many libraries and study rooms, making it easy to find a quiet place to work.

Gợi ý: 回答表达不清晰且有语法错误，建议明确表达建议内容，使用连贯的句子，并具体说明理由。

Ví dụ: Yes, I would suggest that the school provide 24-hour access to some study rooms. Many PhD and postgraduate students need to conduct research late at night, so this change would be very helpful.

Gợi ý: 回答不完整且语法错误较多，建议完整表达未来计划，使用正确的语法，并具体说明留学的原因。

Ví dụ: I am currently working on my PhD, and after I finish, I plan to pursue postgraduate studies abroad. Studying in a different environment will broaden my horizons and provide new opportunities.

× Well, I know I am a student majoring in computer science and I'm study now in the University of Chinese Academy Sciences.

✓ Well, I know I am a student majoring in computer science and I'm studying now at the University of Chinese Academy of Sciences.

动词的现在分词形式用来表示正在进行的动作，'study' 应改为 'studying'。另外，介词 'in' 应改为 'at' 来表示在某个具体的学校。

× Maybe in the future I would like to study in UK or Australia and the post PhD and but I always.

✓ Maybe in the future I would like to study in the UK or Australia for my post-PhD, but I am not sure yet.

表达未来意愿时，'would like to' 用法正确，但句子结构不完整且缺少冠词 'the' 在 'UK' 前。'post PhD' 应改为 'post-PhD' 表示博士后。句子结尾不完整，需要补充完整。

× Well, I study in Beijing are well known school specialized in the cybersecurity.

✓ Well, I study in Beijing at a well-known school specialized in cybersecurity.

介词 'in' 用于城市，'at' 用于具体学校。'are' 应为 'a' 来表示单数不定冠词。

× I choose to study in Beijing because Beijing has abundant resource and manning famous professors which can help me open my mind.

✓ I choose to study in Beijing because Beijing has abundant resources and many famous professors who can help me open my mind.

'resource' 应为复数 'resources'，'manning' 是错误拼写，应为 'many'，'which' 用于非限制性定语从句，指人时应使用 'who'。

× Yes, first our school is has a great environment which is full, which is surrounded by the large Anna greenery.

✓ Yes, first our school has a great environment which is full and is surrounded by large areas of greenery.

'is has' 是错误的重复，应该只用 'has'。'the large Anna greenery' 结构不正确，应改为 'large areas of greenery'。

× It has a great atmosphere for our research and study. And then there's a lot of libraries oan studying rooms, which is easy for us to find a place to.

✓ It has a great atmosphere for our research and study. And then there are a lot of libraries and studying rooms, which make it easy for us to find a place to study.

'there's' 应为复数 'there are' 因为后面是复数名词。'oan' 是拼写错误，应为 'and'。'which is easy' 应改为 'which make it easy' 因为先行词是复数。句子末尾不完整，需补充 'to study'。

× Yes, I will. Uh, I would suggest that's cool. Well Play will provide some rooms available.

✓ Yes, I will. Uh, I would suggest that the school provide some rooms available.

'that's cool' 语义不清，应改为 'that the school'。'Play' 可能是拼写错误，应为 'school'。

× Around the clock, many PhD and post graduate students need to conduct a research late at night, so having 24 hour access would be very helpful.

✓ Around the clock, many PhD and postgraduate students need to conduct research late at night, so having 24-hour access would be very helpful.

'a research' 中 'research' 是不可数名词，不加冠词。'post graduate' 应合写为 'postgraduate'。'24 hour' 应加连字符为 '24-hour'。

× I haven't graduated for my PhD program but after I finish.

✓ I haven't graduated from my PhD program yet, but after I finish,

'graduated for' 应为 'graduated from'。句子不完整，需补充后续内容。

× I would like to pursue our post graduate abroad. I think study abroad change our environment can not only.

✓ I would like to pursue my postgraduate studies abroad. I think studying abroad and changing our environment can not only...

'our post graduate' 应为 'my postgraduate studies'。'study abroad change' 结构错误，应为 'studying abroad and changing'。句子不完整，需补充完整。