Study— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答时有重复和语法错误，表达不够流畅。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并使用更自然的表达方式。

Ví dụ: I'm currently running a small business that sells desserts like cakes and cookies. I'm very satisfied with my job.

Gợi ý: 回答不符合问题要求，且语法错误较多。建议直接说明自己不学习，并用正确的语法表达。

Ví dụ: I'm not a student at the moment, so I don't study anywhere.

Gợi ý: 回答内容不够具体，语法和表达有误。建议补充具体细节，使用连词使句子更连贯。

Ví dụ: Yes, it is a good place to study because it has many public facilities. Moreover, our teachers have excellent reputations, and sometimes scholars from top schools come to teach us important lessons.

Gợi ý: 表达不够清晰，语法错误较多。建议使用更准确的词汇和句子结构，表达具体的改进建议。

Ví dụ: Yes, currently our classroom is quite small, which makes studying uncomfortable. I think the school should add more spacious classrooms to improve the learning environment.

Gợi ý: 表达有语法错误，句子不够自然。建议使用正确的短语和更流畅的表达方式。

Ví dụ: I might study abroad full-time to experience something different from where I live. I'm excited to see what the future holds for me.

× I'm working now.

✓ I am working now.

“I'm”是“I am”的缩写，口语中常用，但书面语中应完整写出。这里主要是强调动词的进行时态，句子本身无误。此处可接受，但为规范表达，建议完整写出。

× which sells the desserts such as cakes, cookies.

✓ which sells desserts such as cakes and cookies.

“desserts”前不需要加定冠词“the”，且“such as”后列举的名词之间应使用“and”连接，表示并列。

× I'm not student so I might not to ask you this question.

✓ I'm not a student so I might not ask you this question.

“student”是可数名词，前面需要冠词“a”。“might not to ask”中“to”不应出现，情态动词后直接接动词原形。

× Sometimes they were come to our school and teach us some important.

✓ Sometimes they come to our school and teach us some important things.

“were come”是错误的过去时表达，正确应为一般现在时“come”，因为描述的是经常发生的事情。句末“some important”缺少名词，应补充“things”。

× now currently our classroom has narrowed which is really inconvenient for us to study there.

✓ Currently, our classroom is narrow, which is really inconvenient for us to study there.

“has narrowed”错误使用了完成时，描述状态应使用形容词“narrow”。“now currently”重复，保留一个即可。

× I think if school could add more and spacers classroom that will be better.

✓ I think if the school could add more and larger classrooms, that would be better.

“spacers classroom”表达错误，应为“larger classrooms”。缺少定冠词“the”修饰“school”。“that will be better”时态应为虚拟语气“that would be better”。

× I might go to abroad to study full while enjoying something special which is different from where I leave.

✓ I might go abroad to study full-time while enjoying something special which is different from where I live.

“go to abroad”错误，正确表达是“go abroad”。“study full”不完整，应为“study full-time”。“where I leave”应为“where I live”。