Study— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够清晰，且有重复和不连贯的地方。建议简化句子结构，直接回答问题，并用具体细节支持。

Ví dụ: I currently work at a design company where I have been employed for three years. My job involves working on unique design projects, which challenges me and helps improve my skills. I really enjoy this job because it allows me to grow both professionally and personally.

Gợi ý: 回答表达不清，语法和词汇使用错误较多。建议直接回答问题，说明具体学习平台及原因，使用连贯的句子。

Ví dụ: I like to study on online platforms such as YouTube and TikTok because they help me learn more effectively and efficiently compared to other places like workshops.

Gợi ý: 回答内容混乱，句子不连贯，词汇使用不当。建议简洁明了地说明理由，并用具体细节支持。

Ví dụ: Yes, workshops are great places to study because they bring people from different teams together. This allows us to communicate and share ideas, which makes learning more interesting and engaging.

Gợi ý: 回答非常不清晰，语法和表达错误严重。建议明确表达想法，说明具体希望改进的地方，并用连贯句子表达。

Ví dụ: I would like my workplace to be quieter so that we can make phone calls without disturbing others. Also, having a quick takeaway food service would be helpful for busy days.

Gợi ý: 回答表达不完整且不连贯，语法错误较多。建议清晰表达未来学习计划，说明原因并用具体细节支持。

Ví dụ: I plan to focus on my field as an excursion designer because I find it fascinating. This career offers many opportunities to explore interesting places, so I want to research immersive experiences further.

× Well, I currently work there, uh, to designing company where I how being employed for three years.

✓ Well, I currently work at a design company where I have been employed for three years.

句中'designing company'应为名词短语'design company'，'how being employed'应为现在完成进行时'have been employed'，表示动作从过去持续到现在。动词形式错误导致句意不清。

× My job involves working on unique design project, which allowed me to face the word challenging under improvement skills.

✓ My job involves working on unique design projects, which allow me to face the world’s challenges and improve my skills.

'project'应为复数'projects'，因为后文提到多个挑战和技能提升，动词'allowed'应为现在时'allow'以保持时态一致。

× I really enjoyed this job because it helped me girls, both professionally and.

✓ I really enjoy this job because it helps me grow, both professionally and personally.

'helped me girls'语法错误，应为'helps me grow'，表达工作帮助自己成长。句子不完整，需补充完整表达。

× Uh, I used the like to study in the online platform such as YouTube and TikTok because this online platform let me starting more effectively and efficiency the and other places that workshop.

✓ Uh, I like to study on online platforms such as YouTube and TikTok because these platforms let me start learning more effectively and efficiently than other places like workshops.

'study in the online platform'应为'study on online platforms'，'let me starting'应为'let me start'，'effectively and efficiency'应为'adverb + adverb'形式'effecively and efficiently'。

× Yes, definitely the workshop is a great place to study because it is a brief together.

✓ Yes, definitely the workshop is a great place to study because it brings people together.

'it is a brief together'语义不明，应改为'it brings people together'，表达工作坊让人们聚集。

× People from different teams allows us to communicate unless share visuals or research ideas.

✓ People from different teams allow us to communicate and share visuals or research ideas.

'allows'应为'allow'与复数主语一致，'unless'用错，应为'and'连接两个动作。

× This makes me learning very interesting and fascinating in specially if you are personally about the Sturbridge action.

✓ This makes my learning very interesting and fascinating, especially if you are personally involved in the structure action.

'makes me learning'应为'makes my learning'，'in specially'应为'especially'，'about the Sturbridge action'语义不清，推测为'involved in the structure action'。

× Well in my work place new to how the more quiet songs becauses in this way we can use the calls and don't disrupt the people are on the way and it tries to how I did some the R.

✓ Well, in my workplace, it would be better to have quieter zones because this way we can take calls without disrupting people around, and it helps me focus better.

句子结构混乱，'new to how the more quiet songs'应为'it would be better to have quieter zones'，'becauses'应为'because'，表达原因。

× Uh, the take away food quickly tones becaused by this way we can.

✓ Also, having takeaway food quickly would be good because this way we can save time.

句子不完整且语法错误，'take away food quickly tones'无意义，改为完整表达。

× I would like to focus on my field in the excursion designer, becauses in this field is really fascinated me and give me opportunity and the interesting place, so that's why I like to.

✓ I would like to focus on my field as an excursion designer because this field really fascinates me and gives me opportunities in interesting places, so that's why I want to.

'becauses'应为'because'，'is really fascinated me'应为'really fascinates me'，动词时态和主谓一致错误。

× This this research on the immersive.

✓ I want to do research on immersive technology.

句子不完整且语法错误，缺少主语和谓语，需补充完整表达。