Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you work or are you a student?
Thí sinh
I'm also a freshman. I'm going. To Beijing University College.
Giám khảo
Where do you study?
Thí sinh
I'm in Beijing study.
Giám khảo
Is it a good place to study?
Thí sinh
Yes is a good place to study because it's very quiet. Make people heart quiet.
Giám khảo
Would you like the place where you study to make any changes?
Thí sinh
I hope my study please. Movie to hide in because it's very. Busy.
Giám khảo
What are your future study plans?
Thí sinh
Did my filter. I'm plans to trial. Go to Korean or England.
Do you work or are you a student?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 回答不够清晰,语法和表达有误,建议直接回答身份并简洁说明。
Ví dụ: I am a freshman studying at Beijing University.
Where do you study?
Điểm: 30.0Gợi ý: 回答不完整且语法错误,建议直接说明学习地点并使用完整句子。
Ví dụ: I study at Beijing University.
Is it a good place to study?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 表达不够自然,句子结构不完整,建议使用连贯句子并具体说明原因。
Ví dụ: Yes, it is a good place to study because it is very quiet, which helps me concentrate better.
Would you like the place where you study to make any changes?
Điểm: 20.0Gợi ý: 回答不清楚且语法混乱,建议明确表达希望改变的方面并使用连贯句子。
Ví dụ: I would like the study place to be less busy so that I can focus better.
What are your future study plans?
Điểm: 25.0Gợi ý: 回答含糊且语法错误,建议清晰表达未来计划并使用正确的句子结构。
Ví dụ: I plan to continue my studies abroad, possibly in Korea or England.
× I'm also a freshman. I'm going. To Beijing University College.
✓ I'm also a freshman. I'm going to Beijing University College.
句子中“I'm going.”和“To Beijing University College.”被错误地分开,导致句子结构不完整。应将其合并为完整句子“I'm going to Beijing University College.”,这样表达才完整且符合英语语法。
× I'm in Beijing study.
✓ I'm studying in Beijing.
原句中“I'm in Beijing study.”结构不正确,缺少动词形式。应使用现在进行时“I'm studying in Beijing.”表示正在北京学习。
× Yes is a good place to study because it's very quiet. Make people heart quiet.
✓ Yes, it is a good place to study because it's very quiet and makes people feel calm.
原句缺少主语“it”,且“Make people heart quiet”表达不正确,应改为“makes people feel calm”更符合英语表达习惯。
× I hope my study please. Movie to hide in because it's very. Busy.
✓ I hope my study place can be moved to a quieter area because it's very busy.
原句结构混乱,词语顺序和用词错误。应表达为“我希望我的学习地点能搬到一个更安静的地方,因为这里很忙碌”,对应英文为“I hope my study place can be moved to a quieter area because it's very busy.”。
× Did my filter. I'm plans to trial. Go to Korean or England.
✓ I have plans to study abroad in Korea or England.
原句语序混乱且用词错误,应表达为“我计划去韩国或英国留学”,对应英文为“I have plans to study abroad in Korea or England.”。