Study— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答时语法和表达不够准确，句子结构混乱，影响理解。建议简化句子结构，注意时态和冠词的使用，避免重复表达。

Ví dụ: I'm currently a third-year master's student majoring in International Relations at this university. I chose this major because I'm interested in global politics and want to learn more about different cultures.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在发音和表达错误，句子不连贯，信息表达不清晰。建议使用简单明了的句子，准确表达地点和相关信息。

Ví dụ: I study at a university in Japan, located in Koto Kinugasa. The campus is near Asama, which is famous for its beautiful scenery. I have already visited that area.

Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误和词汇使用不当，句子不连贯。建议使用正确的词汇和句子结构，清晰描述环境特点。

Ví dụ: Yes, it is a good place to study. The campus has a traditional Japanese style and a pleasant environment with cycling trails and green grass. Sometimes, children come to play on the playground, which is very beautiful.

Gợi ý: 回答表达混乱，信息不明确。建议简化表达，明确说明希望改变的具体内容和原因。

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like the campus to be closer to the main gate because currently it takes me about 20 minutes to get to my department building, which is quite far.

Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清，地名发音错误。建议使用正确的地名和清晰的句子表达未来计划。

Ví dụ: I plan to continue studying International Relations, focusing on European countries. My dream is to attend graduate school at George Washington University in Washington, D.C., USA.

× I'm currently a student majoring in the International relations an in this maker university and I'm currently is third year seconds masters.

✓ I'm currently a student majoring in International Relations at this Maker University, and I'm currently in my third year of a second master's program.

“International relations”作为专业名称应大写且不加冠词；“an in this maker university”应为“at this Maker University”；“I'm currently is third year seconds masters”结构错误，应为“I'm currently in my third year of a second master's program”。这里涉及单复数和冠词的使用错误。

× I'm currently a student majoring in the International relations an in this maker university and I'm currently is third year seconds masters.

✓ I'm currently a student majoring in International Relations at this Maker University, and I'm currently in my third year of a second master's program.

“majoring in the International relations an in this maker university”中“an in”应改为“at”，表示在某大学学习，介词使用错误。

× I'm currently is third year seconds masters.

✓ I'm currently in my third year of a second master's program.

“I'm currently is”中“is”多余且时态错误，应使用“am”或省略，保持现在进行时态一致。

× I'm currently studying in Japan in this make a university which is located in Coto Kinugasa. Do campuses near from Asiama?

✓ I'm currently studying in Japan at this Maker University, which is located in Koto Kinugasa. Is the campus near Asakusa?

“in this make a university”应为“at this Maker University”；“near from Asiama”中“near”后不加“from”，且地名拼写应为“Asakusa”，介词使用错误。

× The Hiashi Mamma is a very famous scenic spots in that area and I already increased that in there.

✓ Hiashi Mamma is a very famous scenic spot in that area, and I have already visited it there.

“scenic spots”应为单数“scenic spot”，因为前面用的是“a very famous”；“increased”用错，应为“visited”，动词错误。

× Do campuses near from Asiama?

✓ Is the campus near Asakusa?

“near”后不应加“from”，且“Do campuses”应为“Is the campus”，介词和主谓不一致。

× I already increased that in there.

✓ I have already visited it there.

“increased that”用词错误，应为“visited it”，代词使用不当。

× The campus is a traditional Japanese campus, an IT dear has a very. Good environment including cyclist trazan grases and also sometimes there are some children's on go to the campus and play in the grass and or playground is very beautiful.

✓ The campus is a traditional Japanese campus and it has a very good environment including cycling trails and grass. Also, sometimes there are some children who come to the campus to play on the grass, and the playground is very beautiful.

“an IT dear has a very. Good environment”语法混乱，应改为“and it has a very good environment”；“cyclist trazan grases”应为“cycling trails and grass”；“children's on go to the campus”应为“children who come to the campus”，形容词和名词使用错误。

× sometimes there are some children's on go to the campus and play in the grass

✓ sometimes there are some children who come to the campus and play on the grass

“children's”是所有格，错误，应为复数名词“children”；“on go”应为“who come”，代词和动词形式错误。

× play in the grass and or playground is very beautiful.

✓ play on the grass, and the playground is very beautiful.

“play in the grass”应为“play on the grass”，介词使用错误；“and or playground”结构错误，应为“and the playground”。

× Yes, if possible I helped the beauty in that.

✓ Yes, if possible, I would like to help improve the beauty there.

“I helped the beauty in that”表达不清且时态错误，应为“I would like to help improve the beauty there”，代词和动词使用错误。

× I'm majoring in kid much closer. Uhm delegate to the gate due to it is now so far away it will takes me for almost 20 minutes to go to.

✓ I wish the gate was much closer because it is now so far away that it takes me almost 20 minutes to get there.

“majoring in kid much closer”语义不明，应为“wish the gate was much closer”；“delegate to the gate”错误，应为“the gate”；“it will takes me”时态和主谓不一致，应为“it takes me”；介词使用错误。

× it will takes me for almost 20 minutes to go to.

✓ it takes me almost 20 minutes to get there.

“will takes”时态和主谓不一致，应为“takes”，现在时态更合适。

× I would like to continue my study.

✓ I would like to continue my studies.

“study”作为不可数名词时表示学习行为，但此处应使用复数“studies”表示学业。

× International relations is specially for the area of Europe, countries and my dream.

✓ International Relations, especially focusing on European countries, is my dream.

“specially”应为“especially”，副词使用错误；“for the area of Europe, countries”表达不清，应调整语序。

× Graduate Graduate School is Droge Tongue which is located in Washington, America.

✓ My dream graduate school is George Washington University, which is located in Washington, USA.

“Graduate Graduate School is Droge Tongue”结构混乱，学校名称错误，应为“George Washington University”；“America”应为“USA”或“United States”，句子结构错误。