Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you work or are you a student?
Thí sinh
So do you think?
Giám khảo
Where do you study?
Thí sinh
Your middle school.
Giám khảo
Is it a good place to study?
Thí sinh
I think the is no Hawkwood place to study.
Giám khảo
Would you like the place where you study to make any changes?
Thí sinh
I think uh, so food could be better.
Giám khảo
What are your future study plans?
Thí sinh
I don't want to go to university.
Do you work or are you a student?
Điểm: 10.0Gợi ý: 回答没有直接回应问题,且内容不相关。建议直接回答问题,例如说明自己是学生或工作者,并简要说明理由。
Ví dụ: I am currently a student because I want to gain more knowledge before starting my career.
Where do you study?
Điểm: 5.0Gợi ý: 回答不清楚且不自然,缺乏具体信息。建议直接说明学习的学校名称,并简要描述学校。
Ví dụ: I study at Greenfield High School, which is known for its excellent science program.
Is it a good place to study?
Điểm: 10.0Gợi ý: 回答语法错误且表达不清晰。建议直接表达对学校的看法,并给出具体理由。
Ví dụ: Yes, I think it is a good place to study because the teachers are very supportive and the environment is quiet.
Would you like the place where you study to make any changes?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 回答简短且缺乏细节。建议具体说明希望改进的方面,并解释原因。
Ví dụ: Yes, I would like the school cafeteria to offer healthier and more diverse food options because it would help students maintain better nutrition.
What are your future study plans?
Điểm: 30.0Gợi ý: 回答过于简短且缺乏解释。建议说明不想上大学的原因,并介绍未来的计划。
Ví dụ: I don't plan to go to university because I want to start working and gain practical experience in my field.
× So do you think?
✓ What do you think?
原句结构不完整,缺少疑问词,导致句子不通顺。应使用完整疑问句“What do you think?”来表达“你怎么看?”的意思。
× Your middle school.
✓ I study at your middle school.
原句缺少主语和谓语,导致句子不完整。应补充主语“I”和谓语“study at”使句子完整。
× I think the is no Hawkwood place to study.
✓ I think there is no good place to study at Hawkwood.
原句中缺少“there is”结构,且“the is no”用法错误。应使用“There is no”表达“没有”的意思,并调整词序使句子通顺。
× I think uh, so food could be better.
✓ I think the food could be better.
原句中“so”用法不当,且缺少冠词“the”。应去掉“so”,并加上“the”修饰“food”,使表达更准确。