Study— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答时语法和表达不够准确，句子结构混乱，且有拼写错误。建议简化句子，注意语法和拼写，避免冗余。

Ví dụ: Yes, I am currently a student at the University of South Wales. I am studying international property law, focusing on privacy and international regulations. I find these subjects very interesting because they are highly relevant in today's digital and cultural world.

Gợi ý: 回答内容不清晰，语法错误多，表达混乱。建议用简洁明了的句子直接回答问题，并提供具体细节。

Ví dụ: I study at the University of South Wales in the UK. It is an excellent university with supportive teachers and effective teaching methods that help students understand the subjects easily.

Gợi ý: 回答中有多处拼写和语法错误，表达不清晰。建议使用正确的词汇和句子结构，具体描述环境和资源。

Ví dụ: Yes, it is a great place to study because it has beautiful gardens with many flowers and trees, creating a peaceful environment. Moreover, the college offers excellent facilities and resources that help students learn better. The staff are also very supportive.

Gợi ý: 表达不够流畅，语法和用词错误较多。建议简洁表达观点，使用连接词使句子更连贯。

Ví dụ: No, I don't want the place where I study to change because I really like it. It is a quiet and suitable environment that helps me concentrate on my homework. If it changed, I might find it harder to focus.

Gợi ý: 回答中有语法和拼写错误，表达不够准确。建议使用正式词汇，清晰表达未来计划和理由。

Ví dụ: Yes, I want to become a lawyer in my country, specializing in international regulations, especially those related to cultural property. I am passionate about protecting cultural heritage because I believe my country has a rich and beautiful culture that should be preserved.

× I'm really enjoying starting international property law, especially topic is related to privacy and international regulations.

✓ I'm really enjoying studying international property law, especially topics related to privacy and international regulations.

动词后面应该接动名词形式，'starting' 应改为 'studying'，表示正在学习某课程。

× I find this subjects very interesting because they are highly related in today's digital world Anna cultural world.

✓ I find these subjects very interesting because they are highly related to today's digital and cultural world.

'this subjects' 中 'this' 应改为复数形式 'these'，因为 'subjects' 是复数。

× I started in university over South Wales in Australia.

✓ I started at the University of South Wales in Australia.

表示在某地学习时，通常用介词 'at'，且大学名称前应加定冠词 'the'。

× It's a very excellent as university each we all can lead you to protect your eyes and make you confidence the their teaching approaches are very comfortable and easy to understand.

✓ It's a very excellent university where we can all learn to protect our rights and build our confidence. Their teaching approaches are very comfortable and easy to understand.

原句结构混乱，'as university each we all can lead you to protect your eyes' 不通顺，应改为 'university where we can all learn to protect our rights'，且 'confidence' 前应加动词 'build'。

× the college is a very good place to start a becauses it has beautiful gardens with many flowers and the trees which created a piece for environment.

✓ The college is a very good place to study because it has beautiful gardens with many flowers and trees which create a peaceful environment.

'start a becauses' 是拼写错误，应为 'study because'；'created a piece for environment' 应为 'create a peaceful environment'，表达环境宁静。

× Moreover, the college offers excellent file entities and resources that helps helps students understand the other subjects better.

✓ Moreover, the college offers excellent facilities and resources that help students understand the other subjects better.

'file entities' 应为 'facilities'，且 'helps helps' 重复，应为 'help'，因为主语是复数 'resources'。

× Of Rolaids provides super supportive to most fair.

✓ The college provides super support to most students.

'Of Rolaids' 无意义，应为 'The college'；'super supportive' 应为名词 'super support'；'most fair' 应为 'most students'。

× Actually I don't want the place where I studied with change because I really like it.

✓ Actually, I don't want the place where I study to change because I really like it.

时态应与当前情况一致，'studied' 应改为 'study'；'with change' 应为 'to change'。

× It is a very suitable and quiet environment which helps me concentrate on my homework.

✓ It is a very suitable and quiet environment which helps me concentrate on my homework.

此句语法正确，无需修改。

× And proprie for test is if the place or to change I may find it harder to focus.

✓ And properly for tests, if the place were to change, I might find it harder to focus.

'proprie for test is' 拼写错误，应为 'properly for tests'；'or to change' 应为虚拟语气 'were to change'；'may' 改为 'might' 更符合虚拟语气。

× Yes, I wanna be a lawyer too in my country specializing in international regulations, especially those related to cultural property.

✓ Yes, I want to be a lawyer in my country specializing in international regulations, especially those related to cultural property.

'wanna' 是口语缩写，正式书面语应为 'want to'。

× I'm very passionate about protecting cultural heritage because I believe my country has averaged and beautiful cultural that under that should be preserved right.

✓ I'm very passionate about protecting cultural heritage because I believe my country has a rich and beautiful culture that should be preserved.

'averaged and beautiful cultural' 语法错误，应为 'a rich and beautiful culture'；'that under that should be preserved right' 语序混乱，应简化为 'that should be preserved'。