Study— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答时应更自然流畅，避免语法错误和表达不清。可以直接说自己是学生，所在学校和专业，避免冗余和错误。

Ví dụ: I am currently an undergraduate student at Northern Arizona University, majoring in Information Systems and Information Management.

Gợi ý: 回答应更连贯，避免断断续续。应清楚说明学校名称和地点，使用连词使句子流畅。

Ví dụ: I study at Northern Arizona University, which is located in Flagstaff, Arizona.

Gợi ý: 回答应更有条理，避免语法错误和不完整句子。应具体描述环境和师生氛围，使用连接词使表达连贯。

Ví dụ: Yes, it is a great place to study because the teachers and students are very helpful. Moreover, the fresh air and quiet environment motivate me to focus on my studies.

Gợi ý: 回答应更清晰具体，表达想法时避免断句和不完整句子。应明确说明希望改进的方面及原因。

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy playing soccer, but I think the campus could improve by adding faster transportation options to help students get around more easily.

Gợi ý: 回答应更连贯，避免语法错误和不完整句子。应清楚表达未来学习计划和目标，使用连接词使句子流畅。

Ví dụ: First, I plan to complete my undergraduate studies. After that, I intend to pursue further education to obtain a master's degree, which will be helpful for my future career.

× I'm now under graduate student being lost Arizona University.

✓ I'm now an undergraduate student at Northern Arizona University.

这里'student'前面缺少冠词'an'，且'university'名称错误，应为'Northern Arizona University'。此外，'being lost'用法错误，应改为'undergraduate student at'。

× I'm now under graduate student being lost Arizona University.

✓ I'm now an undergraduate student at Northern Arizona University.

介词'being lost'用法错误，正确表达应使用'at'表示在某个学校。

× I started in. Arizona. Phoenix. It's a school in Flagstaff called North Arizona University.

✓ I started in Phoenix, Arizona. It's a school in Flagstaff called Northern Arizona University.

地名顺序应为'Phoenix, Arizona'，且学校名称应为'Northern Arizona University'。

× The teacher and students there are very helpful and an environment.

✓ The teachers and students there are very helpful, and the environment is good.

'teacher'应为复数'teachers'，且'an environment'用法不当，应改为'the environment'并补充谓语。

× It's going on the air.

✓ The air is fresh.

原句结构混乱，表达空气新鲜应直接说'The air is fresh.'。

× There is a fresh.

✓ The air is fresh.

'There is a fresh'结构不完整，应补充名词，改为'The air is fresh.'。

× Why want to learn every time?

✓ I want to learn all the time.

'Why'用错，应为第一人称'I'，且表达习惯为'all the time'。

× The environment can give me a silent. Place.

✓ The environment can give me a quiet place.

'silent'用作形容词时不搭配'place'，应使用'quiet place'。

× I like to play soccer. I study but I think it can make some changes.

✓ I like to play soccer. I study here, but I think some changes can be made.

缺少连接词和介词，表达更自然应加'here'和调整句子结构。

× The campus can. Grissom. Test. Fast form which took out student to go to the school.

✓ The campus can improve the transportation system to help students get to school faster.

原句断断续续，语义不清，需重组句子表达校园交通改善的意思。

× First, I will finish my under graduate study.

✓ First, I will finish my undergraduate studies.

'undergraduate'应连写，且'studies'用复数更合适。

× And after I eat.

✓ And after I graduate,

'eat'显然用词错误，应为'graduate'表示毕业。

× I will try to get a further study.

✓ I will try to pursue further studies.

'get a further study'表达不正确，应使用' pursue further studies'。

× And I want to. Get a marker.

✓ And I want to get a master's degree.

'marker'拼写错误，应为'master's degree'，表示硕士学位。

× In my future started facing east will be helpful for my. Walk.

✓ In my future career, facing challenges will be helpful for my work.

原句结构混乱，需重组表达未来职业中面对挑战对工作有帮助。