School— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Make the answer more direct and concise. Begin with a clear topic sentence stating the school's location, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition and incorrect phrases (e.g., “come to know about academic purpose”).

Ví dụ: My school is in the city center. For example, it has a well-equipped computer lab and a science lab, so students can access resources and improve practical skills easily.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and avoid unnecessary superlatives. Use linking words to connect reasons and be specific about facilities. Correct awkward phrases (e.g., “enjoy their having a meals together”).

Ví dụ: Yes, I like my school because it offers many facilities. For instance, there is a large playground for football and cricket, and a pleasant park where students can relax and eat lunch together.

Gợi ý: Start with a clear opinion and then give a specific reason. Use correct collocations (e.g., “audio-visual methods” and “create interest”) and link ideas smoothly. Limit to a couple of sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I think it is a good place to study because teachers use audio-visual methods. As a result, lessons are more engaging and students understand concepts more quickly with the help of technology.

Gợi ý: Give a concise topic sentence about the environment, then list one or two specific qualities with examples. Avoid vague or repetitive phrases and correct grammar (e.g., “problem-solving methods” and “help each other”).

Ví dụ: The school environment is calm and pleasant. For example, teachers encourage discipline and teamwork, so students learn problem-solving skills and often help each other during group projects.

Gợi ý: Give a clear, concise opinion and support it with a specific reason or example. Avoid repetition and incorrect phrasing (e.g., “do not anything”). Use linking words to connect ideas and keep to two sentences.

Ví dụ: Interest is very important for studying because it motivates students to learn and remember information. For example, when I am interested in a topic, I study more actively and remember vocabulary and concepts better.

× My school is located in the city center and pupils come to know about academic purpose because there are various amenities available there such as computer lab, science lab, they can easily gain information about the skills and academic.

✓ My school is located in the city center, and pupils learn about academic matters because various amenities are available there, such as a computer lab and a science lab; they can easily gain information about skills and academics.

Run-on sentence and unclear phrasing; multiple clauses are joined incorrectly and some noun forms are wrong. Break into clear clauses, use parallel noun forms (computer lab and science lab), use 'learn about academic matters' instead of 'come to know about academic purpose', and correct 'skills and academics'. Use appropriate punctuation to separate ideas.

× I like my school the most because there are various facilities for students such as a water system, playground where they can play activities such as football, cricket and so on.

✓ I like my school the most because there are various facilities for students, such as a water system and a playground where they can play activities like football and cricket.

Missing articles and incorrect list punctuation. Use 'a water system' and 'a playground' and connect items with 'and'. Replace 'such as' repeated twice with 'such as' once and use 'like' for examples. This improves grammatical correctness and clarity.

× There is a big park where people can enjoy their having a meals together.

✓ There is a big park where people can enjoy having meals together.

Incorrect verb/gerund phrase 'enjoy their having a meals' and article misuse. Use 'enjoy having meals together' (gerund) and remove erroneous 'their' and extra 'a'.

× I think my school is a good place to learn about study because teachers use audio visual method which teach us a fact with effective method and it create more interest among students.

✓ I think my school is a good place to study because teachers use audio-visual methods, which teach us facts effectively and create more interest among students.

Subject-verb agreement and incorrect noun/phrase forms: 'audio visual method' should be 'audio-visual methods' and relative clause needs plural verb 'teach' matching 'methods'. Replace 'a fact' with 'facts' and 'with effective method' with 'effectively'. Ensure verbs agree with plural subject and adverbs modify verbs.

× They can easily understand the task with the help of technology.

✓ They can easily understand tasks with the help of technology.

Plurality mismatch: 'the task' is singular while referring generally to different tasks; make noun plural for generality. Otherwise sentence structure is acceptable.

× The environment of my school is very pleasant and calm where students can learn about discipline, honesty, problem solving method and helps to each other as their environment is very effective for the students because they create natural atmosphere.

✓ The environment at my school is very pleasant and calm, where students can learn discipline, honesty and problem-solving methods and help each other; the environment is very effective because it creates a natural atmosphere.

Incorrect preposition 'of' should be 'at' for location; word order and connector errors. Use parallel noun phrases 'discipline, honesty and problem-solving methods' and correct 'helps to each other' to 'help each other'. Also change 'they create' to 'it creates' to refer to 'environment' (singular).

× Interest is very crucial to study because it helps to enhance their vocabulary and knowledge with with the help of interest they can easily understand the task with the help of teachers.

✓ Interest is crucial for studying because it helps enhance students' vocabulary and knowledge; with interest and the help of teachers, they can easily understand tasks.

Article and preposition errors: use 'crucial for studying' instead of 'crucial to study'. Remove duplicate 'with'. Use possessive 'students'' to clarify whose vocabulary. Make plural 'tasks' for generality and streamline sentence for clarity.

× Without interest they can do not anything in academic purpose.

✓ Without interest they cannot do anything for academic purposes.

Incorrect negation word order 'do not anything' should be 'cannot do anything'. Use 'for academic purposes' rather than 'in academic purpose' and make 'purposes' plural for natural use.