Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more grammatical, concise, and coherent. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct verb forms and prepositions, avoid repetition and unfinished fragments.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views. For example, when I visit parks I often photograph children playing and people sitting on benches because their activities create lively, candid scenes. These pictures help me capture everyday life and pleasant moments.

Gợi ý: Use a clear topic sentence and correct tense and vocabulary. Explain reasons with linking words (because, so, for example) and give one specific detail. Avoid sentence fragments and repetitive phrases.

Ví dụ: I prefer rural views because the natural scenery relaxes me and reduces stress. For example, I enjoy photographing rivers, parks and mountains there, since the open space and quiet atmosphere make me feel calm.

Gợi ý: Be direct and coherent: state your situation clearly, then give a concise reason and a specific example. Remove hesitations and filler words, and correct grammar (e.g., 'we have' not 'which we have').

Ví dụ: I prefer views in my own country because I haven't travelled abroad yet and I appreciate the variety of local tourist spots. For example, we have beautiful beaches and historical sites that offer diverse scenery without needing to travel far.

× Yes, I love to take photos, especially when I want to places like parks on.

✓ Yes, I love to take photos, especially when I want to go to places like parks.

The original sentence uses an incorrect verb phrase 'want to places' and the misplaced preposition 'on'. The correct structure is 'want to go to' + place. Suggestion: use verb 'go' after 'want to' and include preposition 'to' before the place name. Grammar problem type ID:10

× There are so many kids who played a parent or people who sat in the bench and some are eating and it's so really nice.

✓ There are so many kids playing with their parents, people sitting on the bench, and some are eating; it's really nice.

Multiple tense and form issues: 'played a parent' is incorrect — use 'playing with their parents' to describe ongoing action; 'sat in the bench' should be 'sitting on the bench' (correct preposition and present participle). 'It's so really nice' is redundant; use 'it's really nice'. Suggestion: use present participles for simultaneous actions and correct prepositions. Grammar problem type ID:5

× The view was so.

✓ The view was beautiful.

The fragment 'The view was so' is incomplete; 'so' requires a complement (e.g., 'so beautiful' or 'so nice'). Replace with a complete adjective phrase. Suggestion: provide a descriptive adjective after 'so' or use a direct adjective like 'beautiful'. Grammar problem type ID:26

× I prefer to go to the rural areas because the scenery and the view there was give me more relief and it helps me to release stress and aside from that the view there was nice.

✓ I prefer going to rural areas because the scenery and the views there give me more relaxation, and they help me relieve stress; besides, the views there are nice.

Mixed tense and subject-verb agreement: 'prefer to go' can be 'prefer going' (both acceptable), but 'the scenery and the view there was give me' mixes past 'was' with base verb 'give'. Use present tense 'give' with plural subject 'scenery and views'. 'Help me to release stress' is awkward; use 'help me relieve stress'. Also change 'the view there was nice' to present 'the views there are nice'. Suggestion: keep present tense for general preferences and ensure subject-verb agreement. Grammar problem type ID:6

× There are lots of river park and mountains that.

✓ There are lots of rivers, parks, and mountains there.

The phrase combines singular and plural nouns incorrectly ('river park and mountains'). Use consistent plural forms and include appropriate conjunctions and a final adverb 'there' to complete the sentence. Suggestion: list items in parallel plural form: 'rivers, parks, and mountains'. Grammar problem type ID:1

× To be honest, I don't have any experience outside the country, but I really love our country, which we have a lot of different, umm, tourist area that I can say that, uh, it worked to, to stay.

✓ To be honest, I don't have any experience traveling abroad, but I really love our country, which has many different tourist areas where I can relax and stay.

Tense and word choice problems: 'experience outside the country' is better expressed as 'experience traveling abroad'. 'Which we have a lot of different...tourist area' incorrectly uses 'we have' and singular 'area'; use 'which has many different tourist areas'. 'That I can say that, uh, it worked to, to stay' is ungrammatical; intended meaning seems to be 'where I can relax and stay'. Suggestion: simplify and use relative clause with correct verb 'has' and plural 'areas', and use 'where' to indicate place/function. Grammar problem type ID:6