Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more natural and concise: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid filler words ("umm"), and use correct grammar and plural/singular forms. Add one specific reason or short example to support your answer using a linking word.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views because I love capturing natural scenes. For example, when I visit the coast I often photograph the sunrise to show the colors and reflections, which helps me remember the moment.

Gợi ý: Improve grammar and clarity: use correct phrases (e.g., "not many buildings") and a linking word to connect idea and reason. Provide one specific detail or short comparison to make the answer richer.

Ví dụ: I prefer rural areas because there are not many buildings, so you can clearly see mountains and forests. For instance, compared with the city skyline, rural views feel more peaceful and offer better opportunities for wide landscape photos.

Gợi ý: Start with a direct answer to the question (own country or other countries), then give specific supporting details. Avoid repetition and use correct facts (Philippines has over 7,000 islands) or avoid specific numbers if unsure. Use linking words to make it coherent.

Ví dụ: I prefer views in my own country because the Philippines has many beautiful islands and coastal landscapes. For example, places like Palawan and Siargao offer crystal-clear water and dramatic limestone cliffs, which are hard to find elsewhere.

× Yes, I like taking picture.

✓ Yes, I like taking pictures.

The noun 'picture' should be plural because 'taking' implies a general activity of capturing multiple instances; English uses the plural 'pictures' to talk about the hobby. Suggestion: use plural nouns for general activities (taking pictures, collecting stamps).

× I prefer rural areas because there's nothing much building in there, so you really see the natural beauty of the mountains and the nature.

✓ I prefer rural areas because there aren't many buildings there, so you can really see the natural beauty of the mountains and nature.

Multiple issues: 'there's nothing much building in there' is ungrammatical. Use 'there aren't many buildings there' to match plural noun and negative quantifier (many). Also 'in there' is redundant; 'there' suffices. 'so you really see' is acceptable but 'you can really see' is more natural. Finally, 'the nature' should be 'nature' without the definite article. Suggestion: use 'many' with countable plural nouns and avoid unnecessary prepositions and articles.

× Philippines is known to have seven islands, 7 beautiful islands and Philippines is known as so many tourist spots with the natural beauty.

✓ The Philippines is known for its many beautiful islands — there are over seven thousand islands — and for having many tourist spots showcasing natural beauty.

Several problems: country names like 'The Philippines' require the definite article. The original claims 'seven islands' is inaccurate; the Philippines has over seven thousand islands; if speaker meant 'seven' as a number of notable islands, clarify. 'is known to have' is less natural than 'is known for'. 'Philippines is known as so many tourist spots' is ungrammatical: use 'known for having many tourist spots' or 'known for its many tourist attractions'. Suggestion: use 'The Philippines', use 'known for', and state numbers accurately or hedge (e.g., 'many islands').