Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise, organize your answer with a clear topic sentence and two specific supporting details. Reduce hesitations and correct grammar (e.g., "types of views", "wildlife", "moonrise", "those moments"). Use linking words like "For example" or "Also" to connect ideas. Aim for 3–4 sentences and avoid repeating the same idea about memories.

Ví dụ: Yes, I love taking photographs of different views. For example, I often shoot landscapes such as sunrises, sunsets and moonrises, and I also enjoy photographing wildlife because it captures natural behaviour. I find photography relaxing and creative, and I keep these photos to remember special moments.

Gợi ý: Start with a direct topic sentence stating your preference, then give two specific comparisons (what's better in rural vs urban). Fix grammar and use linking words like "because" and "whereas". Keep sentences shorter and more precise; avoid unclear phrases like "hustle and vessels."

Ví dụ: I prefer rural views because they offer more scenic landscapes. For example, rural areas have clear views of sunrises and sunsets and quieter scenes perfect for landscape photography, whereas urban areas are often crowded and have more distractions.

Gợi ý: Give a clear stance (both or one) and explain reasons with specific examples. Avoid vague phrasing like "have their own preferences" and repetitive phrases about cherishing memories. Use linking words such as "however" or "if" to show contrast and keep it within 3–4 sentences.

Ví dụ: I enjoy views both in my country and abroad, but I often photograph local scenes because I travel less. If I visit another country, I would definitely photograph its landscapes and cultural sites to compare different scenery. Either way, I keep these photos to remember unique experiences.

× I enjoy photography from type of views, especially landscape like sunset, sunrise and scenes with the wildlife as well as, uh, moon rise.

✓ I enjoy photographing different types of views, especially landscapes such as sunsets, sunrises, scenes with wildlife, and moonrises.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'from type of views' and mixes singular/plural forms. 'Different types of views' is the correct quantifier phrase. Use the gerund 'photographing' after 'enjoy'. Use plural forms for category nouns ('landscapes', 'sunsets', 'sunrises', 'moonrises') and 'such as' to introduce examples. This improves noun-number agreement and clarity. Suggestion: Replace awkward phrases with 'different types of views' and use plural forms for general categories.

× And I find it relaxing and creative activity.

✓ And I find it a relaxing and creative activity.

The sentence omits the indefinite article 'a' before the singular noun 'relaxing and creative activity'. English requires an article before a singular countable noun. Suggestion: Add 'a' to make 'a relaxing and creative activity.'

× And also I like capturing those moment, uh, to remember then as we know that, uh, pictures are taken for, uh, to cherish our memory in presence or.

✓ I also like capturing those moments to remember them, as pictures are taken to cherish our memories in the present.

Several issues: 'moment' should be plural 'moments' when referring generally, 'then' is incorrect contextually and should be 'them' (pronoun reference), and 'for, uh, to' is redundant — use 'to' only. 'Memory' should be plural 'memories' when general. 'In presence' is unidiomatic; use 'in the present'. Suggestion: Use correct plural forms and pronouns, remove redundant words, and use natural expressions like 'in the present.'

× As they belong to the rural areas there are more scenic views.

✓ Because they belong to rural areas, there are more scenic views.

The connector 'As' can be acceptable but 'Because' is clearer here. 'To the rural areas' is unnecessary; use 'rural areas' without 'the' for general reference. Also add a comma after the introductory clause. Suggestion: Use 'Because' and drop the definite article when speaking generally about areas.

× We can take the pictures like as we know that in our area the there is just hustle and vessels and also there are very crowded area but in rural area it's a clear views of sunset and sunrise.

✓ We can take pictures, but in our area there is only hustle and bustle and many crowds; in rural areas, however, the views of sunrise and sunset are clear.

Multiple problems: 'like as we know that' is redundant and ungrammatical; 'hustle and vessels' is a wrong collocation — correct is 'hustle and bustle'; 'there are very crowded area' mixes plural and singular incorrectly; 'it's a clear views' mixes singular 'it' with plural 'views'. The correction simplifies the sentence, fixes collocations, matches number agreement, and uses appropriate connectors. Suggestion: Break into two clauses, use correct collocations, and ensure subject-verb and singular/plural agreement.

× So we can take the pictures of landscape.

✓ So we can take pictures of landscapes.

'The pictures of landscape' is unidiomatic. Use plural 'landscapes' for general reference and omit the definite article 'the'. Suggestion: 'take pictures of landscapes' is concise and natural.

× Both views have their own preferences.

✓ Both kinds of views have their own appeal.

'Views have their own preferences' incorrectly assigns preferences to inanimate 'views'. Use 'have their own appeal' or 'are preferred for different reasons'. Suggestion: Rephrase so that the subject appropriately 'has appeal' rather than 'preferences.'

× But now I am in my country, so I just take the pictures of my own country if ever I get a chance to go anywhere.

✓ But now I am in my country, so I usually take pictures of my own country; if I ever get a chance to travel elsewhere, I will do the same there.

Awkward phrasing: 'if ever I get a chance to go anywhere' is wordy. 'I just take the pictures of my own country' should be 'I usually take pictures of my own country'. The correction clarifies habitual action and future possibility with proper tense. Suggestion: Use 'usually' for habitual actions and simplify conditional clauses ('if I ever get a chance to travel elsewhere').

× So definitely I capture that, all the moments, all the landscapes and my camera.

✓ So I definitely capture all the moments and landscapes with my camera.

'Capture that, all the moments, all the landscapes and my camera' is confusing and misplaces 'my camera'. The camera is the instrument, not an object to capture. Reorder to 'capture ... with my camera' and remove redundant commas. Suggestion: Place instruments after the verb using 'with' and combine items into a clear list.

× So I want to cherish these memories in my future.

✓ So I want to cherish these memories in the future.

'In my future' is non-native; English uses 'in the future' to indicate later time. Also 'want to cherish these memories in the future' is the correct simple expression. Suggestion: Use 'in the future' rather than 'in my future'.

× So that is why I love to take.

✓ So that is why I love to take photographs.

The verb 'take' is transitive and needs an object. 'Take' alone is incomplete here; specify 'photographs' or 'pictures'. Suggestion: Always include the object after 'take' when referring to taking photos.