Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Make your answer more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct grammar (plural/singular, articles), and avoid repetition. Add one specific detail using a linking word to explain why taking photos matters to you.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views. For example, when I visit hill stations or beaches I usually photograph the landscape because the images help me remember the atmosphere and share the experience with family.

Gợi ý: Give a clear topic sentence, fix grammar (singular/plural, articles), and avoid vague or repeated words. Use one linking phrase to add a specific reason or example (e.g., 'because' or 'for instance').

Ví dụ: I prefer views in rural areas because the air is fresher and there is lots of greenery. For instance, when I visit my village I enjoy seeing fields of crops and small country roads, which feel peaceful and natural.

Gợi ý: Answer the question directly (own country or other countries) with a topic sentence. Correct grammar and vocabulary (e.g., 'places', 'beauty' not 'beasts'). Provide one specific example and a linking word to explain why you prefer them.

Ví dụ: I prefer views in my own country, India, because it has a wide variety of beautiful landscapes. For example, regions like Jammu and Kashmir offer stunning lakes and mountains, while Meghalaya has lush hills and waterfalls, which I find unforgettable.

× Yes, I always take picture when I go to a specific place such as hill stations, beaches and park.

✓ Yes, I always take pictures when I go to specific places such as hill stations, beaches and parks.

The nouns 'picture', 'place', and 'park' should be plural to match the general meaning of repeated actions and multiple locations. Use plural nouns after 'always' and when referring to more than one example (hill stations, beaches). Also remove the article 'a' before 'specific place' because plural is used. Suggestion: Make noun forms consistent with plurality and the sentence's general context.

× I always take photo because it is a memorable for me and always.

✓ I always take photos because they are memorable for me.

'Photo' should be plural ('photos') to match 'always' and repeated instances. 'It is a memorable' is incorrect: 'memorable' describes plural 'photos', so use 'they are memorable' or 'a memorable experience' for singular. Remove the redundant 'and always'. Suggestion: Use plural nouns and match pronouns and verbs to number; avoid repeating adverbs.

× I personally like rural area because there are very fresh air and most of greenery such as crops and sweet sweet grown when I go to village with.

✓ I personally like rural areas because there is very fresh air and a lot of greenery such as crops when I go to the village.

Multiple pronoun and noun issues: 'rural area' should be plural 'rural areas' for general preference. 'There are very fresh air' is incorrect because 'air' is uncountable and takes singular verb 'is'. 'Most of greenery' is awkward; use 'a lot of greenery' or 'much greenery'. 'Sweet sweet grown' is unclear and likely incorrect — removed. 'Go to village with' is ungrammatical; use 'go to the village' without 'with'. Suggestions: Match countability (uncountable nouns use singular verbs), use appropriate quantifiers ('a lot of'), and use correct article 'the village' or 'a village' depending on context.

× I personally like rural area because there are very fresh air and most of greenery such as crops and sweet sweet grown when I go to village with.

✓ I personally like rural areas because there is very fresh air and a lot of greenery such as crops when I go to the village.

'There are' is incorrectly used with uncountable noun 'air' and unquantified 'greenery'. Use 'there is' for uncountable nouns like 'air' and 'greenery'. Also fix articles and plurality as above. Suggestion: Use 'there is' for singular/uncountable existence statements.

× I belong to India.

✓ I am from India.

'Belong to' is incorrect for expressing nationality; we say 'I am from India' or 'I belong to India' is unnatural. Also 'belong' would require different structure. Suggestion: Use 'I am from [country]' to state nationality.

× In India there are many tourist place like Jammu and Kashmir and Meghalaya and Bengal.

✓ In India there are many tourist places like Jammu and Kashmir, Meghalaya, and Bengal.

'Tourist place' should be plural 'tourist places' because 'many' requires a plural noun. Also add commas between items. Suggestion: Use plural noun after 'many' and proper list punctuation.

× There are so many, so many very beautiful beasts like lakes and some beaches so.

✓ There are so many very beautiful places like lakes and beaches.

'Beasts' is incorrect word choice; likely meant 'beauty' or 'places'. 'Beasts' is an animal term. Remove repetitive 'so many, so many' and trailing 'so'. 'Some beaches' can be simplified to 'beaches'. Suggestion: Choose correct noun (places/landscapes) and avoid repetition and unnecessary words.