Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Content is inappropriate and contains crude or personal references. Answer lacks clarity, has multiple grammar errors, and exceeds natural coherence. To improve: (1) Keep content appropriate and general — talk about scenery or portraits rather than explicit body references. (2) Begin with a clear topic sentence (e.g., “Yes, I enjoy taking different kinds of photos.”). (3) Use 2–3 supporting sentences with linking words (e.g., “For example,” “Also,” “However”) and correct grammar (use present simple: “I like to take pictures,” “when she is facing away”). (4) Stay within 3–5 sentences and avoid personal or offensive details.

Ví dụ: Yes — I enjoy taking different kinds of pictures. For example, I like portrait shots of my girlfriend because they capture her expressions and features. I also take landscape photos when we go hiking, which give context to the portrait. Overall, I try to vary angles and lighting to make each photo interesting.

Gợi ý: Answer is conversational but repetitive and grammatically weak. To improve: (1) Start with a direct topic sentence stating preference (e.g., “I prefer rural areas.”). (2) Give 1–2 specific reasons with linking words (e.g., “because,” “for example”) and avoid repetition. (3) Correct grammar (use “I prefer” not “I like the view of my girlfriend”) and keep sentences concise (3–4 sentences). (4) Include specific examples like “forests” or “countryside walks” to enrich content.

Ví dụ: I prefer rural areas because I enjoy nature and quiet surroundings. For example, I like walking in forests and looking for mushrooms, which feels relaxing. Urban views are interesting too, but I find the countryside more peaceful and photogenic.

Gợi ý: Content again contains inappropriate and irrelevant personal remarks, and is unclear. To improve: (1) Avoid mentioning personal or sexualized comments; instead compare landscapes and cultural differences. (2) Give a clear direct answer (e.g., “I prefer views in my own country” or “I like both equally”). (3) Provide specific reasons and examples (e.g., climate, architecture, nature) using linking words (e.g., “because,” “however”). (4) Use correct grammar and concise sentences.

Ví dụ: I prefer views in my own country because I am familiar with the landscapes and local culture. For example, I like the coastal scenery and mountain trails at home. However, I also enjoy visiting other countries to see different architecture and cityscapes.

× I like take picture of different view of my girlfriend.

✓ I like taking pictures of different views of my girlfriend.

The verb 'like' should be followed by the gerund form 'taking' when expressing preferences. Also 'picture' and 'view' need plural forms here to match the context ('different' implies more than one). Use 'pictures' and 'views' for correct noun plurality.

× When she's looking forward and I'm at the back, taking picture of her big ****.

✓ When she's looking forward and I'm at the back, I take pictures of her big ...

The sentence is missing a clear subject and a finite verb. To describe habitual or typical actions use the present simple 'I take' rather than a verbless clause 'taking'. This fixes sentence structure and clarity.

× When I'm at the front, taking picture of her cute nose and cute eyes.

✓ When I'm at the front, I take pictures of her cute nose and cute eyes.

Same issue as above: after the time clause 'When I'm at the front' you need a finite verb and subject ('I take'). Using the gerund 'taking' without an auxiliary creates a sentence fragment.

× Also taking picture of the side of my girlfriend.

✓ Also I take pictures of my girlfriend's profile (the side of her face).

The fragment uses the gerund 'taking' without a subject and finite verb. Turn it into a full sentence with 'I take'. Also use possessive form 'my girlfriend's' for clarity.

× Where can she too much?

✓ She shows too much skin sometimes; where should she be more covered?

The original is ungrammatical and unclear. It mixes interrogative form 'Where can she' with 'too much' without a clear noun or verb. Rewriting to clarify meaning and use correct question structure is necessary.

× I like the view of my girlfriend in any areas but probably prefer rural areas and especially in forest and in nature when we go hiking or when we go for a walk or for looking for mushroom.

✓ I like the view of my girlfriend in any area but probably prefer rural areas, especially forests and nature when we go hiking, for a walk, or to look for mushrooms.

Use 'area' (singular) after 'any' or change to 'any areas' consistently; here 'any area' or 'in any area' is better. Use gerunds/infinitives correctly: 'to look for mushrooms' or 'for looking for mushrooms' should be 'to look for mushrooms'. Plural 'forests' and 'mushrooms' are correct. Also add commas for clarity.

× But I like my my girlfriend will from anywhere really.

✓ But I like my girlfriend to be from anywhere, really.

The original mixes pronouns and incorrect verb structure ('my my girlfriend will from anywhere'). To express acceptance of origin, use 'I like my girlfriend to be from anywhere' or simpler 'I don't mind where my girlfriend is from'. This corrects pronoun duplication and verb misuse.

× It doesn't really matter.

✓ It doesn't really matter.

This sentence is already correct. The present simple negative 'doesn't really matter' properly expresses lack of importance; no change is needed.

× I prefer views in my country maybe, but in my country my girlfriend wear too many clothes so not much of A view.

✓ I prefer views in my country, maybe, but in my country my girlfriend wears too many clothes, so there is not much of a view.

Subject-verb agreement: 'girlfriend' is third person singular and needs 'wears'. Also add 'there is' to express existence ('not much of a view') and fix article capitalization ('a view'). Commas improve readability.

× Just looking at a Penguin going around with a lot of clothes.

✓ It's like looking at a penguin wearing a lot of clothes.

The original is a fragment and oddly capitalizes 'Penguin'. Use a full clause 'It's like looking at' and the present participle 'wearing' to describe the penguin analogy. Lowercase 'penguin' unless it is a proper noun.

× It's still nice but when we are here she goes around with less clothes.

✓ It's still nice, but when we are here she goes around with fewer clothes.

Use 'goes around' with a comma before 'but'. For countable items like articles of clothing, standard grammar prefers 'fewer' rather than 'less' ('fewer clothes'). Alternatively, 'less clothing' is acceptable if using an uncountable noun.