Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Reduce hesitation and filler words, make the response more concise and varied in vocabulary, and ensure grammatical accuracy. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting reasons with linking words. For example, replace repetitions with synonyms and remove repeated phrases like “beautiful”.

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. Taking photos helps me preserve memories of special places, so I can revisit them later when I can’t travel. For instance, I often photograph sunsets and mountain views because the images remind me of the atmosphere and colors of those moments.

Gợi ý: Reduce hesitations and improve sentence cohesion by using linking words. Begin with a clear preference sentence, then list specific examples using connectors like “for example” or “such as”. Use plural agreement and smoother phrasing.

Ví dụ: I prefer views in rural areas because they offer varied natural landscapes. For example, you can see spectacular mountains, wide fields, cascading waterfalls and tranquil rivers, which all create a peaceful atmosphere.

Gợi ý: Complete your answer with a clear comparison and avoid sentence fragments. Start with a direct response (own country, other countries, or both), then explain why with specific details and a concluding statement. Use cohesive devices like “however” or “also”.

Ví dụ: I enjoy views in both my own country and abroad. My country offers a great variety of landforms, such as spectacular mountains and lush green fields, which I find very beautiful. However, I also like seeing landscapes in other countries because they can have unique features and cultural scenery that you can’t find at home.

× Yes, obviously, because taking pictures is a good way for us to, uh, recall the memory, uh, especially when it comes to beautiful views.

✓ Yes, obviously, because taking pictures is a good way for us to recall memories, especially when it comes to beautiful views.

The noun 'memory' should be plural 'memories' when referring to general recollections. Also remove unnecessary commas and filler. Use 'recall memories' as a natural collocation; 'taking pictures is a good way for us to recall memories' uses the gerund phrase correctly.

× Uh, when we take picture of those, uh, beautiful sceneries, we might have a look at them later when we don't have a chance to visit them.

✓ When we take pictures of those beautiful scenes, we can look at them later when we don't have a chance to visit.

Use plural 'pictures' to match 'we' and 'those'. 'Picture' should be 'pictures' (singular/plural issue but corrected as present participle/phrase). 'Sceneries' is nonstandard; use 'scenes' or 'landscapes'. Replace 'might have a look at them later' with 'can look at them later' for clarity and naturalness.

× I would definitely go with, uh, the views in the rural areas, uh, because there are different kind of landscapes in the rural areas.

✓ I would definitely choose the views in rural areas because there are different kinds of landscapes there.

Use 'different kinds' (plural) not 'different kind' to agree with plural 'landscapes'. Remove redundant article 'the' before 'rural areas' and avoid repeating the phrase. 'Choose' is more natural than 'go with' in this context.

× We can see spectacular mountains, umm, wide fields sometimes, umm. Cascading water, waterfalls and uh. Serene rivers.

✓ We can see spectacular mountains, wide fields, cascading waters and waterfalls, and serene rivers.

Original fragments and punctuation break the sentence. Combine into a single coordinated list, use commas correctly, and make parallel noun forms ('cascading waters' or just 'cascading waterfalls' — here both 'cascading waters and waterfalls' is redundant so choose 'cascading waterfalls' or 'waterfalls'). Ensure items are parallel.

× Well, I would say that I really enjoy looking in the view.

✓ Well, I would say that I really enjoy looking at the view.

The correct preposition with 'look' and 'view' is 'at' not 'in'. Use 'looking at the view' to indicate observing scenery.

× My country has a great variety of landforms.

✓ My country has a great variety of landforms.

This sentence is grammatically correct; no change needed. It is included to confirm correctness and needs no revision.

× Spectacular mountains of breathtaking views of white green.

✓ Spectacular mountains with breathtaking views of white and green fields.

The original fragment lacks structure and uses 'of' incorrectly. Use 'with' to link mountains to their views, and specify what 'white and green' describe (fields). Make adjectives and noun phrases complete and parallel.

× Fields and things like that. But I also.

✓ There are fields and things like that, but I also enjoy views in other countries.

Original is incomplete sentence fragments. Combine into a complete sentence that expresses the intended idea. Ensure subject and verb present ('I also enjoy') to avoid sentence fragments.