Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and avoid fillers and repetition. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct minor grammar issues (e.g., avoid repeating words and unnecessary commas).

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views. For example, when I go out with my children I often use my iPhone to capture candid moments, and then I share the best photos with my parents so they can see how the children are doing.

Gợi ý: Use clear vocabulary and coherent ideas. Replace unclear or incorrect words (e.g., 'albanized' is not a word) and explain why you prefer one type of view with specific reasons and linking words. Keep answers within 2–4 sentences and avoid conversational slang like 'wanna' in IELTS.

Ví dụ: I prefer rural scenery because it feels more open and peaceful. For example, the wide fields and quiet paths help me relax during my maternity leave, and they make me feel more connected to nature compared with busy city streets.

Gợi ý: Clarify your meaning and avoid incorrect word choices (e.g., 'abuse', 'trouble'). State a clear preference and support it with a specific reason and example. Use linking words like 'because' and 'for example', and fix grammar (e.g., 'pictures make me feel').

Ví dụ: I prefer views from other countries because I rarely travel abroad, so looking at those photos helps me explore different cultures. For example, photos of coastal towns in Spain or markets in Morocco give me new ideas and help me feel more connected to the world.

× I usually take pictures with my iPhone, especially, uh, when I go out with my children, I usually take pictures of of them and I show their pictures to my parents.

✓ I usually take pictures with my iPhone, especially when I go out with my children; I usually take pictures of them and show the pictures to my parents.

The original has a repeated word 'of of' and an unnecessary second 'I' before 'show' which creates a redundancy and slightly awkward structure. This is a sentence structure and verb -ing/form flow issue: use a semicolon or conjunction to link two related clauses and omit the extra 'I' for smoother coordination. Also remove filler 'uh' for clarity. Suggestion: combine clauses with ';' or 'and' and avoid repeating subjects when not needed.

× I prefer albanized scenery.

✓ I prefer urbanized scenery.

The word 'albanized' is not a correct adjective here and seems to be a mispronunciation or misspelling of 'urbanized' or 'alpine' etc. Choosing 'urbanized' matches the intended contrast with rural areas. This is an incorrect adjective choice; use the correct adjective that conveys the intended meaning.

× This is because I can feel more expanded to the world.

✓ This is because I feel more connected to the wider world.

'Can feel more expanded to the world' is ungrammatical: 'expanded to' is incorrect and 'can feel' is unnecessary modal here. The present simple 'I feel' states a general preference. Replace with 'feel more connected to the wider world' for natural expression. This fixes tense and verb collocation issues.

× I'm on maternity leave right now so I just wanna feel connected to the organized atmosphere.

✓ I'm on maternity leave right now, so I just want to feel connected to an organized atmosphere.

Use standard present continuous 'I'm' and formal 'want to' instead of colloquial 'wanna'. Also add a comma before 'so' and use the article 'an' before 'organized atmosphere' because it's a nonspecific noun phrase. This corrects tense usage, informal contraction, and article use.

× I prefer abuse in different countries because I cannot go for trouble often, but looking at the pictures makes feel more relaxed and connected to the world so I prefer these kind of pictures.

✓ I prefer photographs from different countries because I cannot travel abroad often, but looking at the pictures makes me feel more relaxed and connected to the world, so I prefer these kinds of pictures.

Multiple errors: 'abuse' is an incorrect word choice (should be 'photographs' or 'views'), 'go for trouble' is meaningless and likely intended 'travel abroad', 'makes feel' is missing the object 'me', and 'these kind of pictures' should be 'these kinds of pictures' (or 'this kind of picture'). Fix word choice, add the missing pronoun 'me', and correct plural agreement for the quantifier phrase. These corrections address incorrect adjective/adverb/word choice and subject-object issues.