Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Work on clarity, grammar, and organization. Begin with a clear topic sentence answering the question directly, avoid filler words (uh, um), use correct verb forms and pluralization, and give one or two specific supporting details connected with linking words. Also keep to a natural length (1–3 sentences).

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views because photography helps me remember places. For example, when I visit a coastal town I take wide landscape shots and close-ups of local details, which makes the memories more vivid.

Gợi ý: Provide a direct answer first, then give clear reasons with linking words. Correct grammatical errors (subject-verb agreement, articles) and avoid vague phrases. Use specific examples to explain why one is preferred, and keep answers concise and coherent.

Ví dụ: I prefer urban views to rural ones because cityscapes offer more variety in architecture and lighting. For instance, modern buildings and street scenes provide interesting textures and nighttime lights that make my photos more vivid.

Gợi ý: Answer directly, then give a clear reason with a supporting example. Fix grammar (plural forms, articles) and restructure sentences to avoid repetition. Use linking words like 'because' or 'for example' to connect ideas and be specific about what is new or different.

Ví dụ: I prefer views in other countries because they offer new architectural styles and cultural scenes that I haven't seen before. For example, visiting a historic European city lets me photograph ornate facades and street markets that are different from the familiar local scenery.

× 'Yeah, I prefer taking picture different sounds by different way in different places because I I love uh to see different uh, places, umm added to my memory when I. Bus please.'

✓ 'Yeah, I prefer taking pictures of different scenes and sounds in various places because I love to see different places and add them to my memory.'

'The original sentence has multiple sentence structure problems: missing articles, wrong noun forms, awkward word order, repetition, and fragments. I corrected "taking picture" to "taking pictures" (plural) and added "of" to form the correct verb-object phrase. "Different sounds by different way" was rephrased to "different scenes and sounds in various places" to be natural and grammatically coherent. Removed filler words and the fragment "Bus please." Suggestion: plan the sentence before speaking, use simple subject-verb-object order, and avoid unnecessary fillers.'

× 'Hyper fail taken between urban areas, uh, more than uh rural areas because I'm already living uh, rural areas and also urban areas.'

✓ 'I have taken more pictures in urban areas than in rural areas because I already live near both rural and urban places.'

'The original has incorrect words and pluralization issues: "Hyper fail taken" is unintelligible and likely a mis-speech; I used "have taken" (present perfect) to fit the context. "Rural areas" needed the preposition "in" or "near"; I added "in" earlier and clarified "live near both rural and urban places." Also ensured plural forms are used consistently. Suggestion: use correct verb forms and include prepositions with place nouns.'

× 'Make the pictures more vivid, more interesting and make it also. High quality more than really.'

✓ 'They make the pictures more vivid and interesting, and the quality is usually higher.'

'Original has incorrect verb forms and sentence fragments. I changed imperatives to a subject "They" (referring to urban areas or features) and used present tense "make" for habitual action. "High quality more than really" was corrected to "the quality is usually higher" for grammatical and idiomatic accuracy. Suggestion: ensure complete clauses with a clear subject and verb, and use comparative structures correctly.'

× 'I prefer views in other country because the view the building own country I see all of them and they be something easily to see and also I prefer to see something new so I prefer.'

✓ 'I prefer views in other countries because I have already seen the buildings in my own country, and they are easy to see; I like to see something new.'

'Errors include singular/plural mismatch ("other country" -> "other countries"; "own country" -> "my own country"), incorrect verb forms ("they be" -> "they are"), and awkward phrasing. I used present perfect "have already seen" to indicate past experience relevant now. Suggestion: match singular/plural with context, use correct pronouns like "my," and form complete sentences with proper verbs.'

× 'I prefer taking picture different sounds by different way in different places because I I love uh to see different uh, places, umm added to my memory when I.'

✓ 'I prefer taking pictures of different scenes and sounds in different places because I love to see different places and add them to my memory.'

'The phrase lacked necessary prepositions: "taking picture different sounds" required "taking pictures of different scenes and sounds," and "by different way" should be "in different ways" or omitted. Prepositions are essential for clarity. Suggestion: learn common verb+preposition patterns (take pictures of, in different places) and practice forming noun phrases with appropriate prepositions.'