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Part 1

Giám khảo

Do you like taking pictures of different views?

Thí sinh

Yes, of course. And I think it is a good way to capture the abuse and meaningful moments and and I can always remind these photos and remind that wonderful time.

Giám khảo

Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?

Thí sinh

Well it depends, I both like rural and urban areas because all these have its own culture and own beauty. So it depends just I like I will.

Giám khảo

Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?

Thí sinh

Well, I think it's my country because I really like the historical architectures and views, and in my country there are lots of views about this. However, in other countries the more different and more some nature views. So I just like my country.

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Part 1

Do you like taking pictures of different views?

Điểm: 56.0

Gợi ý: 在回答中注意发音与词汇的准确性,避免重复并简洁表达。先用一句主题句直接回答问题,然后用1-2句具体细节支持,注意不要使用错误词(例如“abuse”应该是“beauty”或“scenes”),并避免连词“and”重复。保持句子总数不超过5句。

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. I enjoy taking photos because they help me capture beautiful and meaningful moments. For example, when I travel I photograph landscapes and local scenes so I can remember the experience later.

Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?

Điểm: 60.0

Gợi ý: 回答要更清晰有条理,先给出明确立场(偏好或都喜欢),然后用一到两句具体比较说明原因。避免含糊或重复表达,如“it depends”多次出现。使用连接词(however、because、for example)使逻辑更连贯。

Ví dụ: It depends, but I slightly prefer rural areas because they are quieter and offer natural scenery. However, I also enjoy cities for their architecture and lively culture.

Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?

Điểm: 58.0

Gợi ý: 句子结构需要更自然并减少语法错误。先明确回答(my country),然后给出具体原因并用连接词对比其他国家的景观。避免词序错误和冗余表达,使用更准确的词汇(例如“historical architecture”、“natural scenery”)。

Ví dụ: I prefer views in my own country because I love its historical architecture and cultural sites. That said, I also enjoy visiting other countries for their different natural scenery and landscapes.

Ngữ pháp

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× Yes, of course. And I think it is a good way to capture the abuse and meaningful moments and and I can always remind these photos and remind that wonderful time.

Yes, of course. I think it is a good way to capture the beautiful and meaningful moments, and I can always look at these photos to remember those wonderful times.

错误类型:动词+ -ing 或动词短语使用不当(英文原句中“capture the abuse and meaningful moments”用词不当且冗余;“remind these photos and remind that wonderful time”中动词搭配错误)。建议将“abuse”改为“beautiful”(原词为拼写/词义错误),并使用正确的动词短语“look at these photos to remember”来表达“通过看照片来回忆”。同时修正重复的“and and”及单复数一致(times)。改正原因:保持动词搭配和词汇语义准确,避免重复并保证时态和语义通顺。

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× Well it depends, I both like rural and urban areas because all these have its own culture and own beauty. So it depends just I like I will.

Well, it depends. I like both rural and urban areas because each has its own culture and beauty. So it depends on my mood.

错误类型:句子结构错误(短语顺序、代词指代和句子连贯性有问题)。原句中“all these have its own culture”存在代词指代和主谓不一致,应改为“each has its own culture”;“So it depends just I like I will”是无意义的词序,应改为更自然的表达如“depends on my mood”。建议整理句子结构,使用正确代词并用自然短语连接句意。

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× Well, I think it's my country because I really like the historical architectures and views, and in my country there are lots of views about this.

Well, I think my country, because I really like the historical architecture and scenery, and there are many such places in my country.

错误类型:现在时/名词形式使用不当(“architectures”复数不自然,且“views about this”表达不清)。应使用不可数名词“architecture”或“architectural buildings”,并用“scenery”替代“views”以更贴切表达风景;将“lots of views about this”改为“many such places”以使句子语法和语义更自然。

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× However, in other countries the more different and more some nature views. So I just like my country.

However, in other countries there are more diverse and natural landscapes. So I just prefer my country.

错误类型:现在时/句子结构使用不当(“the more different and more some nature views”语序混乱,词汇不当)。建议改为“more diverse and natural landscapes”来表达“更不同且有自然风光”,并将结尾改为“prefer my country”以与问题语境一致。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

DifferentDissimilar; Distinct; Unusual
GoodFine; Virtuous; Well-behaved; Right; Capable
WonderfulMarvelous
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