Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is natural and relevant with good specifics. To improve further, make the response slightly more concise, vary vocabulary, and add a linking phrase to connect the topic sentence and the example. Avoid a minor grammatical slip (“helps me relaxed” elsewhere) by using correct verb forms. Aim for clearer cohesion with a connective like “for instance” or “so that.”

Ví dụ: Yes — I enjoy photographing different views. For instance, when I shoot food or landscapes, I usually take three or four shots from different angles so that I can select the best one to edit and share.

Gợi ý: Good content and personal detail, but fix grammar (use plural or correct verb forms) and tighten structure. Start with a clear topic sentence, then use a linking word to explain the reason, and finish with a specific example. Replace “helps me relaxed” with “help me relax” and avoid redundancy like “therefore” after a direct reason — use “so” or “that’s why.”

Ví dụ: I prefer rural landscapes to city views because I grew up in the countryside in Japan and natural scenery and wildlife help me relax. For example, I often visit the Scottish Highlands or Brighton to photograph the sea and animals like deer and cows.

Gợi ý: Strong, specific opinion and good supporting example. Improve by tightening phrasing, using linking words for clarity, and correcting minor word choices (use “well-preserved” with a hyphen in writing, and “types of buildings” could be simplified). Keep within 3–4 sentences max and vary vocabulary slightly (e.g., “architectural heritage”).

Ví dụ: I generally prefer European landscapes to those in Japan because Europe has abundant well-preserved historic architecture and I’m interested in history. For example, in London you can see many old stone and brick buildings that reflect events like the Great Fire of London.

× so natural scenery and animals helps me relaxed.

✓ so natural scenery and animals help me relax.

Subject-verb agreement and word form: 'natural scenery and animals' is a plural subject and requires the plural verb 'help' (Grammar Problem Type ID 13 and 27). Also 'relaxed' is an adjective; the intended meaning is the verb 'relax' (base form) after 'help'. Suggestion: use 'help me relax' for correct verb forms and agreement.

× I usually try from around 3 or 4 different perspectives so I can choose the best one from the photos that I took to edit and share.

✓ I usually try around three or four different perspectives so I can choose the best one from the photos that I took to edit and share.

Number formatting and preposition: 'try from around 3 or 4 different perspectives' is awkward; better to say 'try around three or four different perspectives'. Also use words for small numbers in formal speech. This addresses plural/number clarity (Grammar Problem Type ID 1).

× I prefer rural landscapes to city views, mainly because I was born in the rural area in Japan, so natural scenery and animals helps me relaxed.

✓ I prefer rural landscapes to city views, mainly because I was born in a rural area in Japan, so natural scenery and animals help me relax.

Article use: 'the rural area in Japan' is incorrect when speaking generally about where you were born; use 'a rural area in Japan' (Grammar Problem Type ID 22). Also fixed related verb and word form issues as explained earlier.

× I generally prefer the landscapes in European countries to those in Japan, mainly because there are many well preserved historic buildings in Europe and I'm interested in history.

✓ I generally prefer landscapes in European countries to those in Japan, mainly because there are many well-preserved historic buildings in Europe and I'm interested in history.

Quantifier/article usage: 'the landscapes in European countries' is acceptable but slightly unnatural; 'landscapes in European countries' is more natural. Also 'well preserved' should be hyphenated as 'well-preserved' when used as a compound adjective before a noun (Grammar Problem Type ID 14 and 13).

× For example, in London there are many old types of buildings made from stone and brick that reflect the history of the Great Fire of London.

✓ For example, in London there are many old types of buildings made of stone and brick that reflect the history of the Great Fire of London.

Preposition choice: both 'made from' and 'made of' can be used, but 'made of stone and brick' is more natural when referring to the material that composes buildings (Grammar Problem Type ID 11). 'Made from' is used when the material has been transformed. Suggestion: use 'made of' for materials like stone and brick.