Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Make the answer grammatically correct and more concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid repetition (e.g., don’t repeat ‘really love’).

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views, especially oceans, mountains and lakes. For example, on holidays I often go to the seaside with my children to capture sunsets and candid family moments, which I then share in a photo album.

Gợi ý: Give a direct topic sentence stating your preference, then explain why with specific reasons and avoid repeating the same examples. Use a linking word (e.g., 'because' or 'however') and keep it within 3–4 sentences.

Ví dụ: I prefer rural views because I enjoy the peace and natural scenery they offer. For instance, I like photographing coastlines and mountain trails as they have more varied textures and light than the city. However, I sometimes photograph urban scenes when I want architectural details.

Gợi ý: Answer directly (own country or other countries) and then give a reason and a specific example. Correct grammar (e.g., 'In my country' not 'Additional view in my countries') and avoid informal fillers like 'yeah'.

Ví dụ: I prefer views in my own country because I enjoy capturing local landmarks. For example, when I have free time I visit the countryside to photograph traditional Japanese castles, whose stone walls and surrounding gardens create a breathtaking scene.

× This is really love taking pictures of different views like ocean, mountain and lakes.

✓ I really love taking pictures of different views like the ocean, mountains, and lakes.

The sentence uses incorrect subject 'This is' and missing article/plural forms. Replace 'This is' with the pronoun 'I' to correctly indicate the speaker. Use 'the ocean' and plural 'mountains' and 'lakes' for natural reference. Also place 'really' after subject for natural word order.

× Especially when on holidays I really love to go to the sea to take pictures with my children.

✓ Especially when I'm on holiday, I really love to go to the sea to take pictures with my children.

Use the preposition and verb combination 'be on holiday' (or 'on holidays' in some dialects). Add the contracted verb 'I'm' to provide the required verb. Also add a comma after the introductory clause for clarity.

× I like both, but especially I prefer rural areas because I love the natural environment like sea, mountain and lakes.

✓ I like both, but I especially prefer rural areas because I love natural environments like the sea, mountains, and lakes.

Place 'especially' after the subject for natural word order ('I especially prefer'). Use plural 'environments' to match examples and articles 'the' and plural for 'mountains' and 'lakes'. Also remove the extra definite article before 'natural environment' and adjust for countability.

× When I have a great time, I really love to go to the sea to take pictures with the family.

✓ When I have free time, I really love to go to the sea to take pictures with my family.

The original 'have a great time' is semantically odd here; 'have free time' fits the intended meaning. Use the possessive 'my family' rather than 'the family' to indicate the speaker's family.

× Additional view in my countries, when I have free time, I would really love to go to the countryside to take a picture of Japanese traditional castle.

✓ As an additional option in my country, when I have free time, I would really love to go to the countryside to take a picture of a traditional Japanese castle.

'Countries' should be singular 'country' when speaking about one's own nation. Start the sentence with a clearer phrase 'As an additional option in my country'. Add the indefinite article 'a' before 'traditional Japanese castle' and reorder adjectives to the natural 'traditional Japanese castle' word order.

× Yeah, it's a very breathtaking view for me.

✓ Yes, it's a very breathtaking view for me.

Replace informal 'Yeah' with 'Yes' for more appropriate register in a speaking test. The tense and structure are otherwise correct; this is a stylistic improvement.