Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Cải thiện: (1) Sử dụng câu chủ đề rõ ràng và tự nhiên hơn; (2) Tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và giới từ (ví dụ “taking pictures of having moments” → “taking pictures of moments”); (3) Rút gọn ý không cần thiết để tránh lặp từ (ví dụ “this feeling come back to me again” lặp ý); (4) Thêm một chi tiết cụ thể ngắn để minh họa (ví dụ nêu loại sự kiện hoặc cảm xúc). Cụ thể: hãy nói 2–3 câu, mỗi câu rõ ràng, dùng liên từ đơn giản (because, so) và từ vựng phù hợp (cherish, capture, memories).

Ví dụ: Yes, I love taking pictures of different views. I often capture special moments like family gatherings or sunsets because I want to preserve those memories. When I look at the photos later, they immediately remind me of how I felt at that time.

Gợi ý: Cải thiện: (1) Sử dụng cấu trúc mạch lạc hơn: câu chủ đề nêu rõ sở thích; (2) Sửa lỗi ngữ pháp/thuật ngữ (the hustle and bustle -> hustle and bustle; the vibrance -> vibrant atmosphere); (3) Tránh lặp từ như “whenever” nhiều lần; (4) Thêm một hoặc hai chi tiết cụ thể về hoạt động đô thị mà bạn thích (ví dụ street markets, cafes).

Ví dụ: I prefer urban views because I enjoy the hustle and bustle of city life. The vibrant streets, cafes and markets make me feel excited, and I like watching people going about their daily routines. That lively atmosphere inspires my photography.

Gợi ý: Cải thiện: (1) Rõ ràng sửa lỗi nghiêm trọng về ngữ pháp và ngắt quãng (loại bỏ lặp “This is This is”); (2) Dùng cấu trúc giải thích ngắn gọn: nêu lý do chính và một ví dụ cụ thể; (3) Sử dụng từ vựng chính xác thay vì lỗi đánh máy/không rõ nghĩa (“Courier” có thể là country; “they wear” không rõ ý) ; (4) Kết thúc câu đầy đủ để tránh bỏ dở suy nghĩ. Ví dụ: “I prefer views in other countries because I want new scenery, such as historic streets in Italy or mountains in New Zealand.”

Ví dụ: I prefer views in other countries because I see my hometown’s scenery every day and I crave something different. For instance, I love exploring historic streets in Europe or traditional markets in Asia, which offer new colours and architecture that I don’t find at home.

× I always like taking pictures of having moments happening in my life.

✓ I always like taking pictures of moments happening in my life.

The phrase 'having moments' is ungrammatical; 'have' with -ing isn't needed. Use 'moments happening' to describe ongoing events. Remove unnecessary 'having' to make the noun phrase correct and natural. Suggestion: Say 'taking pictures of moments happening in my life' or 'taking pictures of the moments in my life.'

× This is because I appreciate for each moment and whenever I look back on them, I can see in these pictures and this feeling come back to me again.

✓ This is because I appreciate each moment, and whenever I look back at them, I can see them in these pictures and the feeling comes back to me again.

Do not use 'appreciate for'; the correct verb collocation is 'appreciate something'. Use 'look back at' not 'look back on' when referring to specific things, and ensure pronoun reference: 'see them in these pictures'. Also correct subject-verb agreement 'the feeling comes back'. Suggestion: Use 'appreciate each moment' and 'look back at them.'

× Well, I prefer the views in urban areas. This is because you know the cities which is the hustle and bustle place and I love the vibrance and this atmosphere.

✓ Well, I prefer the views in urban areas because cities are bustling places and I love the vibrancy and atmosphere.

Avoid filler 'you know' in formal answers. 'Cities which is' is incorrect: 'cities are' needed for subject-verb agreement. 'Hustle and bustle' describes activity; use 'bustling places'. Use 'vibrancy' instead of 'vibrance'. Suggestion: Combine clauses with 'because' and use 'cities are bustling places.'

× So whenever I enjoy the time in this way, I feel very excited and happy whenever I watch some human activities.

✓ So whenever I enjoy time in this way, I feel very excited and happy when I watch people at work or other human activities.

Repeated 'whenever' is redundant; use one conjunction. 'Watch some human activities' is awkward — use 'watch people' or 'watch people engaging in activities.' Ensure verb forms are consistent. Suggestion: Use 'when I watch people' and avoid repeating 'whenever.'

× Well, I prefer the views in other countries. This is This is because the views in my country I can see every day.

✓ Well, I prefer the views in other countries because the views in my country are ones I see every day.

Duplicate 'This is' is an error. Sentence order 'the views in my country I can see every day' is awkward; use 'the views in my country are ones I see every day' or 'I see the views in my country every day.' Suggestion: Remove duplication and reorder for clarity.

× So I want to something different and I love the views in the Courier.

✓ So I want something different, and I love the views in other countries.

'Want to something' is ungrammatical; use 'want something' or 'want to see something different.' 'Courier' is a misspelling of 'countries' or wrong word; replace with 'other countries.' Suggestion: Say 'I want to see something different' or 'I want something different.'

× This is because they wear the The view in display is very beautiful and whenever I watch some films in this country, I think it's very.

✓ This is because the scenery on display is very beautiful, and whenever I watch films from this country, I think they are very beautiful.

Sentence has repeated 'the' and 'they wear' is nonsense. 'View in display' should be 'scenery on display' or 'the views on display.' 'I think it's very' is incomplete; finish with an adjective like 'beautiful.' Also match plural 'films' with 'they are.' Suggestion: Use 'scenery' or 'views' and complete the adjective phrase, e.g. 'I think they are very beautiful.'