Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Improve grammatical accuracy, conciseness and clarity. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid tense errors and redundancy, and limit to 2–3 supporting sentences. Use linking words (for example, because, so) correctly and give one specific example of a recent occasion.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views because they help me preserve memories. For example, last month I volunteered to photograph a friend’s graduation, and I shared the best shots with my family so they could celebrate with us.

Gợi ý: Make the response more natural and grammatically correct. Begin with a simple topic sentence, then add 1–2 specific reasons with linking words. Correct verb forms and reduce repetition (e.g., avoid multiple 'and also').

Ví dụ: I prefer rural views because they help me connect with nature and relax. For instance, listening to birdsong and walking along a river reduces my stress and gives me a refreshing change from city life.

Gợi ý: Organise your answer with a clear topic sentence and concise, specific supporting examples. Use correct collocations and grammar (e.g., 'rich in history', 'experience the countryside', 'natural scenery'). Limit examples to two or three brief, well-phrased phrases.

Ví dụ: I prefer views in my own country because Malaysia offers diverse culture and scenery. For example, Malacca is rich in history, Kedah offers peaceful countryside landscapes, and Kelantan is known for its traditional cuisine and cultural festivals.

× Yes, I really like taking pictures because I believe it was a way to preserve memories.

✓ Yes, I really like taking pictures because I believe it is a way to preserve memories.

The sentence uses past tense 'was' but the speaker expresses a general, ongoing belief about photographs; this requires present tense 'is'. Use present simple for general truths or habitual beliefs. Suggestion: Replace past tense forms with present simple when stating general facts (e.g., 'is a way').

× For example, is there any occasion or event I would love to volunteers to take photos because I believe with this photo I can share it with my family members or friends.

✓ For example, on any occasion or event I would love to volunteer to take photos because I believe I can share these photos with my family members or friends.

Multiple issues: incorrect word order and unnecessary auxiliary 'is there', wrong plural/verb form 'volunteers' used instead of the verb 'volunteer', and inappropriate singular 'this photo' when referring to photos in general. Also preposition 'with' is acceptable but sentence structure is awkward. Suggestions: Start with 'On any occasion or event', use the verb 'volunteer', and use 'these photos' or 'them' when referring to multiple photos.

× I prefer views in rural areas because I believe it will help me connected with nature and unwind and also by doing this it will help me to release my stress by hearing the bird chirping and also walking down the river.

✓ I prefer views in rural areas because I believe they will help me connect with nature and unwind; being there helps me relieve stress by hearing birds chirp and walking along the river.

Problems include pronoun reference and verb forms: 'it will help me connected' mixes future 'will' with past participle 'connected' instead of base verb 'connect'. 'It' is vague; use 'they' for 'views' or rephrase. 'Release my stress' is non-idiomatic; use 'relieve stress'. Also 'bird chirping' should be 'birds chirp' and 'walking down the river' is better as 'walking along the river'. Suggestions: Match subject and verb forms, use base verb after modal/future where appropriate, and choose idiomatic expressions ('relieve stress').

× It will give me a sense of new things and experience.

✓ It gives me a sense of new experiences.

The original mixes tense with 'will' and uses awkward phrasing 'a sense of new things and experience.' The noun phrase should be plural 'experiences' and present simple 'gives' fits habitual preference. Suggestions: Use concise, idiomatic noun phrases like 'new experiences' and choose consistent tense (present simple) for habitual statements.

× I prefer views in my own country because Malaysia is well known for its cultures and unique places.

✓ I prefer views in my own country because Malaysia is well known for its culture and unique places.

'Cultures' is plural but in this context 'culture' as a collective noun is more natural. Both forms can be correct, but 'culture' is idiomatic when referring to national cultural identity. Suggestion: Use 'culture' for general references; use 'cultures' only when emphasizing multiple distinct cultural groups.

× For example, we have Malacca which is very in history, we have Kedah that will help you to experience countryside and new natures and we have Kelantan which can give you the experience of cuisine and traditional food.

✓ For example, we have Malacca, which is very historic; Kedah, where you can experience the countryside and natural scenery; and Kelantan, which offers traditional cuisine and local foods.

Multiple grammatical issues: 'very in history' is incorrect — use 'historic' or 'rich in history'. Run-on commas create comma splices; use semicolons or separate sentences. 'That will help you to experience countryside and new natures' is awkward: use 'where you can experience the countryside and natural scenery'. 'New natures' is incorrect. 'Give you the experience of cuisine and traditional food' is wordy; use 'offers traditional cuisine and local foods'. Suggestions: Use correct adjective forms ('historic'), fix sentence boundaries to avoid comma splices, and use idiomatic collocations ('experience the countryside', 'traditional cuisine').