Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise, correct grammar and use linking words to make the answer coherent. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details and a brief example. Avoid redundancy and sentence fragments.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views because it helps me preserve memories. For example, I often photograph family gatherings and local festivals so I can share them with relatives who live far away. This also lets us reminisce together later.

Gợi ý: Fix grammar and pronoun errors, use linking words to connect ideas, and provide a concrete example or brief reason. Keep it within 3–4 sentences and avoid vague phrases.

Ví dụ: I prefer rural views because they help me connect with nature and relax. For example, walking through rice paddies and listening to birds reduces my stress and makes me feel refreshed. This peaceful atmosphere is something I rarely find in the city.

× I do like taking pictures of different view because I believe it was a way for me to preserve memories.

✓ I do like taking pictures of different views because I believe it is a way for me to preserve memories.

'View' should be plural 'views' to match 'different' which describes more than one; 'was' should be 'is' to keep present-tense consistency with 'do like' and general truth. Suggestion: use plural nouns after 'different' and keep consistent present tense for general statements.

× For example in any occasion or family event.

✓ For example, at any occasion or family event.

Fragment: the original is a sentence fragment lacking a main verb. Start with 'For example, at any occasion or family event' and integrate it with the previous sentence or change to a full sentence like 'For example, at any occasion or family event, I take pictures.' Use preposition 'at' for occasions.

× By taking the pictures I can show it to my friends and family in the future so we can go more closer.

✓ By taking pictures I can show them to my friends and family in the future so we can get closer.

Pronoun and article errors: 'the pictures' can be 'pictures' and 'it' should be 'them' to refer to plural pictures (incorrect use of pronouns - ID 12 and article errors - ID 22). 'Go more closer' is incorrect word order and comparative form; use 'get closer'. Suggestion: match pronoun number to noun and use correct comparative verb phrases.

× I prefer views in rural areas because he helped me connect with nature and unwind.

✓ I prefer views in rural areas because they help me connect with nature and unwind.

Pronoun 'he' incorrectly refers to 'views' (which is plural and inanimate); use 'they'. Also shift tense from past 'helped' to present 'help' to match 'prefer' (present). Suggestion: use correct pronouns for inanimate/plural nouns and keep consistent tense.

× By doing this, it also will help me reduce my stress and relax my mind by hearing the birds chirping and also walking down the Paddy field.

✓ By doing this, it will also help me reduce my stress and relax my mind by hearing birds chirping and walking through the paddy fields.

Word order: place 'also' before 'will' or 'will also' (modal placement - ID 4/7). 'Paddy field' should be plural or 'the paddy field' and lowercase; 'walking down' is awkward—use 'walking through'. 'Birds' should be plural without 'the'. Suggestion: use 'will also' for future emphasis, pluralize common nouns, and use natural prepositions for movement.

× I prefer views in my own country because Malaysia has various of cultures and unique places, for example Melaka which is rich in architectures and also history and we have Kedah which is risk in countryside and also can give you the experience of relaxing your mind in pedophiles.

✓ I prefer views in my own country because Malaysia has a variety of cultures and unique places. For example, Melaka is rich in architecture and history, and Kedah is rich in countryside scenery and can give you the experience of relaxing your mind in peaceful surroundings.

Multiple errors: 'various of cultures' is incorrect — use 'a variety of cultures' (quantifier error ID 14). 'Rich in architectures' should be 'rich in architecture' (count/uncount and noun choice). 'Kedah which is risk in countryside' contains incorrect adjective 'risk' and 'in countryside' wrong preposition — use 'rich in countryside scenery' or 'rural areas'. 'Pedophiles' is an inappropriate and incorrect word; likely meant 'peaceful places' or 'peaceful surroundings'. Suggestion: use correct collocations ('rich in architecture'), correct quantifiers, and choose appropriate vocabulary; use commas and split into two sentences for clarity.