Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Make the answer more concise and natural: start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid filler words like "you know." Vary vocabulary (e.g., "seascapes," "landscapes") and correct minor grammar (use plural/singular consistently and correct verb forms).

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy photographing different views. For example, I often take seascapes from the terrace at sunrise because the light and birds in the sky create dramatic photos.

Gợi ý: Give a direct opinion followed by specific contrasting details. Use linking words (e.g., "however," "on the other hand") and avoid repetition. Replace vague phrases with concrete examples of what you like about each setting.

Ví dụ: I prefer both urban and rural views because they offer different visual appeals. For example, urban skylines are exciting due to architecture and lights, whereas rural landscapes are calming with fields and natural colors.

Gợi ý: Be careful with word choice and tone. Start with a clear statement, explain reasons with specific examples, and avoid vague or negative-sounding generalisations. Use more precise vocabulary (e.g., "underdeveloped" or "heavily polluted" rather than "belated") and connect ideas with linking words (e.g., "because," "however").

Ví dụ: I generally prefer views in other countries because cities I have seen at home are often heavily polluted and lack scenic areas. For instance, on trips abroad I enjoyed clear coastal vistas and well-maintained waterfronts that were much more attractive.

× Yes, I do like taking pictures of different views, like beach view, ocean views, you know, standing on terrace and take a picture of those views, birds flying around.

✓ Yes, I do like taking pictures of different views, like beach views and ocean views, you know, standing on the terrace and taking pictures of those views with birds flying around.

Errors: inconsistent use of noun forms and verbs after 'standing on terrace'. 'Beach view' should be plural to match 'ocean views' (singular/plural consistency). 'standing on terrace and take a picture' mixes gerund and base verb; after 'standing' use gerund 'taking' for parallelism. Also article 'the' is needed before 'terrace'. Suggestion: make nouns parallel (beach views, ocean views), use 'the terrace', and keep verb forms parallel by using gerunds ('standing' and 'taking').

× I prefer both because both have different beauties, both have different cons and pros, pros and cons. Both have different, you know?

✓ I prefer both because they each have different advantages and disadvantages and different kinds of beauty.

Errors: repetitive and ungrammatical phrases ('both have different beauties', 'cons and pros' repeated) and an incomplete fragment ('Both have different, you know?'). Use clearer sentence structure: 'they each have different advantages and disadvantages' is concise and grammatically correct. Avoid repetition and sentence fragments; replace informal filler 'you know' or place it appropriately.

× I do prefer views in other countries because my country is belated.

✓ I prefer views in other countries because my country is behind.

Error: incorrect word choice 'belated' (means delayed) rather than an issue in modal usage, but per list closest is Modal verb usage since speaker used 'do prefer' emphatically; however primary problem is vocabulary choice. Corrected sentence removes unnecessary auxiliary 'do' and replaces 'belated' with 'behind' or 'less developed'. Suggestion: use 'prefer' for normal preference statements and choose appropriate adjective ('behind' or 'less developed').

× Most of the time it's polluted, so they're like no views at all.

✓ Most of the time it is polluted, so there are almost no views at all.

Errors: incorrect use of contraction 'it's' is acceptable for 'it is' referring to the country but 'they're like no views' is ungrammatical: 'they're' (they are) doesn't agree with 'no views'; correct idiom is 'there are almost no views' or 'there are hardly any views'. Also avoid filler 'like'. Suggestion: use 'there are' for existence plural and 'almost no' or 'hardly any' for scarcity.

× But in other countries, the city views, the ocean views, they're just beautiful.

✓ But in other countries, the city views and the ocean views are simply beautiful.

Error: informal use of contraction 'they're' is acceptable but listing nouns without proper conjunction is stylistically weak; better to connect with 'and' and use 'are' rather than contraction for clarity. Suggestion: use 'the city views and the ocean views are simply beautiful' for clear subject-verb structure.