Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer communicates the main idea but has grammatical errors, unclear phrases and some irrelevant words (e.g., “mouse”). Make the response more natural by using a clear topic sentence, correcting sentence structure, and adding one or two specific supporting details linked with simple connectors. Keep it under five sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views because it helps me notice small details and preserves memories. For example, I often photograph sunsets since the sky’s colors change dramatically, creating striking contrasts. I also like focusing on silhouettes of trees or buildings to add depth to the photo.

Gợi ý: The main preference is clear but vocabulary and sentence structure are confused (e.g., “beef individual areas”). Rephrase the response with a clear topic sentence, use linking words to organise supporting points, and provide two concrete details (what you like about nature and how it affects you). Avoid repetition and keep sentences concise.

Ví dụ: I prefer rural areas because I love natural scenery such as mountains and forests. Moreover, I enjoy the seasonal changes—especially autumn when leaves turn red and orange—which makes the landscape beautiful and helps me relax and unwind.

Gợi ý: You express a clear preference but there are repetitions and several incomplete or confusing phrases (e.g., “4 distinct”, “change drama dramatically”, “walking indoors. Run escapes”). Make one clear topic sentence, give two specific supporting details about seasons and activities, and avoid repetition. Use linking words to connect ideas.

Ví dụ: I prefer views in my own country because Japan’s four distinct seasons offer diverse scenery. For example, in spring the mountains are covered in fresh green foliage, while in autumn the hills turn bright red and orange, which makes autumn walks especially peaceful and enjoyable.

× For example, I like to take a picture of sunsets because changing colors.

✓ For example, I like to take pictures of sunsets because their colors change.

The original sentence uses 'changing colors' without a subject; 'changing' alone is a present participle phrase that needs a noun or a construction to attach to. Also 'a picture' should be plural to match general preference. Use 'their colors change' (subject + verb) to form a complete clause and 'pictures' for general habit.

× Looks so interesting mouse that I like to capture.

✓ They look so interesting that I like to capture them.

The original lacks a subject and uses an unrelated word 'mouse.' This is a sentence structure problem: add a subject ('They' referring to sunsets or colors) and an object pronoun ('them') and correct word choice to form a grammatical sentence.

× I prefer beef individual areas because I love the natural scenery, especially the mountains and the the changing colors of the trees, the seasonal changes and for which our beautiful and relaxing and being surrounded by nature helps me unwind.

✓ I prefer rural areas because I love the natural scenery, especially the mountains and the changing colors of the trees; the seasonal changes are beautiful and relaxing, and being surrounded by nature helps me unwind.

Multiple problems here: 'beef individual areas' is incorrect word choice; replace with 'rural areas.' There is a repeated 'the the.' The clause 'for which our beautiful and relaxing' is ungrammatical; restructure into clear clauses and ensure verbs are present where needed (e.g., 'seasonal changes are beautiful and relaxing'). This fixes adjective use and overall sentence flow.

× I prefer views in my own country because Japan has four distinct 4 distinct seasons and the mountains change drama dramatically from fresh green and spring to bright red and orange in autumn.

✓ I prefer views in my own country because Japan has four distinct seasons and the mountains change dramatically from fresh green in spring to bright red and orange in autumn.

Redundant 'distinct 4 distinct' should be 'four distinct seasons.' 'Drama dramatically' is wrong; use the adverb 'dramatically' with the verb 'change.' Also reorder 'fresh green in spring' for natural phrasing. This corrects adjective/adverb misuse and redundancy.

× I love walking indoors. Run escapes during autumn when therefore.

✓ I love walking outdoors and taking short escapes during autumn.

The original has incorrect word choices and fragmented clauses: 'indoors' contradicts context (should be 'outdoors'), 'Run escapes' is ungrammatical, and 'when therefore' is meaningless. Combine ideas into a single coherent sentence that fits the context and corrects sentence structure.